VN Ren'Py My Husband's Boss [Ch.1] [SC Stories]

[zernex]

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As good as "My Husband's Boss" is, it still suffers all the VN tropes found in other games. Yes, certain leaps of logic can reasonably be made that the developer doesn't have to script. One is it is most likely Vivian is on birth control-- a mature well-educated woman in a modern society it's almost a given.

It'll just come down to the rest of the old VN tropes the developer uses in his story that will either make "My Husband's Boss" just like any other VN or a cut above the rest.

Tropes/themes:

*Women getting off on giving BJs/TJ/HJ ... how many games are out there where it's just BJ after BJ-- what women would rather give out a BJ rather than get railed? Sure they are likely to give out BJs, TJs, HJs to get a man more excited to encourage him to rail her good... or carry them out to rock his world.

*Cock worship ... It's one of those myths most game goes down the rabbit hole because the guy is hung like a horse. That one pretty much is a man's self-image thing, but plenty of interviews of porn stars stating just what they in real life prefer which is average. Making the whole cock worship trope complete is how stories show women enthralled with Dick. No, it's what it can do and make them feel that's the allure.

*BBC ... If I miss my guess, we are going to see that in this game. Either and or with the star basketball player or the mechanic. Kind of goes toward the whole cock worship trope but with a twist. Now in "My Husband's Boss" just how will Vivian's character deal with it? Does it become a kink that some women have ... will it be the vanilla BBC remaining politically correct to avoid the whole interracial thing ... plenty of poison to choose with BBC to pick from.

*Corruption ... The good old slippery slope of moral decay. Corruption has so many aspects to it that it is easy to lose the whole story's plot with timing, plausibility, cause and effect, and character assassination. Corruption is a journey. It's easy to just start with a morally bankrupt character but with Vivian she is an honest wife just starting that journey.

-timing is mostly an issue of impatience to move the story along. Game has moved on to Vivian already spreading her legs for another man, but with an excuse-- she didn't willingly create the situation, it just is. And likely the real corruption of Vivian isn't with Christian, but soon others. Though I suspect she will at some point eagerly like that relationship too with Christian.

-just how plausible is Vivian's decent into depravity? That we have yet to see. The question will be how does she get there. What will be her rationalization, what moral struggles will she go through, how does she convince herself to enter into these relationships and at what point is Vivian blameless to becoming fully and openly corrupt to herself?

-cause and effect are simply consequences that trigger outcomes. The greatest stretch of logic the game has made thus far is the whole sleepover event. Does Vivian really have any expectation with all the hollering from Christian's pounding that Hutch doesn't already know ... that all Hutch had to do was get up and see her in the backyard getting railed ... or that she doesn't stick of sex on the car ride home. It seems that's a plausibility argument, but barring the husband's ignorance myth Vivian has how does or will she think of her newfound situation. Wouldn't expect Hutch not to be miserable, but that's not the point. The point being in the journey of corruption how does it change her character.

-writers have a great habit of assassinating their own character development. Starting off with a good wife going on full slut-mode without an emotional journey. A good corruption story is one of self-discovery, reconciliation, justification, compromise, and rationalization assuming the character starts with integrity and a moral compass

It will be typical trope heavy. It is broadcasting that clearly. The strip club narrative is another.

 

[Itsphred]

game dead ? no update since 4 months

Sometimes you just gotta go back and read

https://f95zone.to/threads/my-husbands-boss-v0-2-sc-stories.241893/post-16624068

Let the man cook!!!

 

[zernex]

I think someone here may have hit on it. I look at these again and I also think Hutch is waiting for someone. Maybe he did follow Vivian and Christian to the new place... and this is it. Then they take off to some VIP room with Christian and whoever... for some business... so to spaek. Then in the sceon pic... he sees them coming back.

Also it looks like Vivian hanging upside down . Back turned to her waiting like the good cuckdog. Same with second pic-turned away in dutiful attendance but disgusted.

 

[zernex]

So much more can be said about the inner workings of these characters. I find it fascinating and captivating for some unknown strange reason. I replayed it and this conundrum came to mind...


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Lots have been written about what Vivian wants. I think Christian knows exactly what he is doing.
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And he gives her what she is craving. And what she wants is what Christian wants. This scene still haunts me, and I don't know how to exorcise these demons.

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At this stage Vivian does not think Hutch knows anything, and is actively conspiring with her lover/boyfriend against Hutch. And with that kiss, again giving Christian whatever he wants, regardless if it's of a sexual nature or not.

This make viewing the following at home scene in a different light. At this stage Vivian knows that Hutch knows everything.
Her guilt and self-preservation kicks in.

It's time to activate damage control mode!

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"Uh Uh! No you didn't you! Girl! You told him you will convince Hutch to let you do your thang!"
Everything she is saying to Hutch now in order to save her ass is totally contradictory to how the bathroom scene ended.
Perhaps she has un-diagnosed bi-polar disorder.

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Hutch summarizes it in a nutshell. Her words say one thing, but her actions betray her. Here he is admitting he know that she does not want Hutch, but rather Christian.

And for her biggest lie...
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Vivian could have stepped up as a real devoted wife at any stage, but didn't. Her carnal lust is a more powerful influence than her devoted love.

Now hurry up with part 0.4 so we can find out more !!!!


(edit: sorry got some images in wrong order)

She's a Wholesaler- in lies!

 

[zernex]

the following is the conversation in point which hints at a possible clue, View attachment 4619452 View attachment 4619453 View attachment 4619454 View attachment 4619455 View attachment 4619456 View attachment 4619457 View attachment 4619458 View attachment 4619459 View attachment 4619460 View attachment 4619461 View attachment 4619462 View attachment 4619463 just from this conversations she seems naive(the dorm interaction) and someone who likes attention(phone call on day 5). and enjoys such attentions as can be seen with marcel at school too. in the above images i included the side draw scene to show she was checking for her new fav item(or see if hutch took it and went to return it).if you follow the wording in the 3rd conversation the sneakpeek from the dev

indicates it to be the with the twins. i didnt add the following conversation as it shows again she thinks that hutch knows by the way he reacts to her and want to confirm it but doesn't want to be tell the truth of the dinner night , she is still delusional that hutch doesnt know anything about the dinner night after all the sounds she was making and doesnt want to accept it was her fault which was the problem(getting distracted from the main topic). just pointing to clues that the dev made in the current game of a possible bikini scene with the twins in the next update.

yes but the dev said we will know her age in the next update.

the following is the conversation in point which hints at a possible clue, View attachment 4619452 View attachment 4619453 View attachment 4619454 View attachment 4619455 View attachment 4619456 View attachment 4619457 View attachment 4619458 View attachment 4619459 View attachment 4619460 View attachment 4619461 View attachment 4619462 View attachment 4619463 just from this conversations she seems naive(the dorm interaction) and someone who likes attention(phone call on day 5). and enjoys such attentions as can be seen with marcel at school too. in the above images i included the side draw scene to show she was checking for her new fav item(or see if hutch took it and went to return it).if you follow the wording in the 3rd conversation the sneakpeek from the dev

indicates it to be the with the twins. i didnt add the following conversation as it shows again she thinks that hutch knows by the way he reacts to her and want to confirm it but doesn't want to be tell the truth of the dinner night , she is still delusional that hutch doesnt know anything about the dinner night after all the sounds she was making and doesnt want to accept it was her fault which was the problem(getting distracted from the main topic). just pointing to clues that the dev made in the current game of a possible bikini scene with the twins in the next update.

yes but the dev said we will know her age in the next update.

Ultra fine for mom with 22 year old kid. No face lines, stand up tits, No birth stretches and flat belly with great toned legs. Compared to his physicality sad.

 

[TonyMurray]

Yes, full fapability with a strip club narrative always sets the gonads to high alert.

Right , just change up the whole expectation of doormat to a fully undone madman. Shoots the place up, doesn't manage to kill anyone ( sad sack afterall) and goes on the run. She and Christian are always on edge never knowing if he's back.

She sure loves her kicks and tricks more then him or the risk. Frankly I think she is and was lightly hinged and this was coming.

It will be typical trope heavy. It is broadcasting that clearly. The strip club narrative is another.

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[Luc77]

zernex
we understand that you want to make up for lost time and flood us with more lines, but the modest community gathered around the thread appreciates (I think) more complex forms of reflection. If you would be so kind as to try to assemble your thoughts into one larger post for the future, I would be extremely grateful.

 

[zernex]

Just out of curiosity, how old are you? 11? 12? 15?

Agreed. But as someone reiterated it's a Porn game (movie?) so flimsy logic for fucking is a mainstay.

 

[zernex]

zernex
we understand that you want to make up for lost time and flood us with more lines, but the modest community gathered around the thread appreciates (I think) more complex forms of reflection. If you would be so kind as to try to assemble your thoughts into one larger post for the future, I would be extremely grateful.

Will try. But the material should justify deeper reflection and it seems reflected perspective only occurs at isolated threads of action within a more fragmentary total story. But I hear you and will reduce. Catching up but on discovery the Vivian and story is addictive. Thanks

 

[Sparta158]

zernex. I take my hat off to you for reading and working through the thread from the beginning.

 

[With The]

Sometimes you just gotta go back and read

https://f95zone.to/threads/my-husbands-boss-v0-2-sc-stories.241893/post-16624068

Let the man cook!!!

tell me your signature come from pls.

 

[zernex]

im all for hutch getting revenge but you may want to convince the dev to do that and not the forum.. from devs comments if he plans on going darker as it progresses then i dont see where hutch comes out of this a winner.. could be wrong but just following the dev's comments.

Winning could be seen as making someone else loose.

 

[Xocopin]

I was wondering if the car that her husband gave to Vivian doesn't serve as a representation of the marriage itself in the story. It seems to me that the car was a way for Hutch to show how much he values his wife, how the act of marriage itself is a ceremony to show how important the relationship between the two is. The car being defective at the beginning is a way of showing how the relationship is showing signs of fragility, and it breaks down just when Vivian dives into doing something behind her husband's back. When it returns "fixed", it is after Vivian has handed the car over to someone else, and after she has "fixed" the crisis in her marriage through lies and betrayal, and Hutch himself playing the role of giving the "car" to her to fix. But we know that the relationship between the two is not fixed, and is the car really fixed?

 

[Luc77]

The car as an allegory of the relationship - the choice of Audi is puzzling . Maybe it's just the car

 

[Dealbreaker]

With symbols in porn games I follow the rule: as simple as possible: The car is a phallus symbol. The phallus Hutch gave her as a gift (he gave it up and doesn't own it anymore) didn't function. This made her angry and frustrated. The mechanic had to lend his potency. Now she can drive it, it endures her ride as long as she needs it.

 

[Luc77]

With symbols in porn games I follow the rule: as simple as possible: The car is a phallus symbol. The phallus Hutch gave her as a gift (he gave it up and doesn't own it anymore) didn't function. The mechanic had to lend his potency. Now she can drive it, it endures her ride as long as she needs it.

i.e. you are moving towards INcest
overall interesting interprtation - but I see serious holes in it. If you see a car as a symbol of a penis, you certainly don't choose an Audi. The BMW is a real dick, but the Audi.... Audi is the woman among German cars. A German woman but a woman...

 

[Hattyrulz]

i.e. you are moving towards INcest
overall interesting interprtation - but I see serious holes in it. If you see a car as a symbol of a penis, you certainly don't choose an Audi. The BMW is a real dick, but the Audi.... Audi is the woman among German cars. A German woman but a woman...

generally speaking.... most men take good care of their cars(like a woman) so dunno if audi is categoriesed as a woman(car) among women(cars)

 

[Aladin01]

i.e. you are moving towards INcest
overall interesting interprtation - but I see serious holes in it. If you see a car as a symbol of a penis, you certainly don't choose an Audi. The BMW is a real dick, but the Audi.... Audi is the woman among German cars. A German woman but a woman...

At this point You definitely need to consider also the "Vorsprung durch Technik"-Slogan

 

[Dealbreaker]

overall interesting interprtation - but I see serious holes in it. If you see a car as a symbol of a penis, you certainly don't choose an Audi. The BMW is a real dick, but the Audi.... Audi is the woman among German cars. A German woman but a woman...

I get that. On the other side it fits Hutch. Audi has the image of being boring, rational, unsexy but solid. By the way one major advertising slogan for Audi was Vorsprung durch Technik ("advantage through technology") - which fits the metaphor again. That's what men like to believe because women tell them: you can compensate size deficits by using skill. Sex becomes labour. Again typical Hutch.
Edit: Two guys had the same idea.

 

[shane001]

Wasn't 0.4 supposed to release in early May? I hope the developer is doing Okay.