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Got around to playing through the new v0.20 fixed and wanted to post a couple of observations, nothing major but maybe the dev(s) would appreciate knowing. Just to clarify, I did play the first release but I deleted my saves and started new with the latest version.
Firstly, there were two (that I came across) occasions where the MC was referred to by the default name instead of the name I chose at the start.
Secondly, the overall grammar, spelling and punctuation is a little off. It's not the worst I've seen (far from it) but there are lots of small, minor mistakes thoughout the dialogue. Punctuation in places where it isn't needed, sentence structure that is confusing because the word placement is mixed up and there are a few spelling mistakes spread throughout. It's not bad enough to ruin the enjoyment, but it does get a bit much when you have to keep re-reading sentences and then mentally re-arranging the words so that the sentence makes sense!
Firstly, there were two (that I came across) occasions where the MC was referred to by the default name instead of the name I chose at the start.
Secondly, the overall grammar, spelling and punctuation is a little off. It's not the worst I've seen (far from it) but there are lots of small, minor mistakes thoughout the dialogue. Punctuation in places where it isn't needed, sentence structure that is confusing because the word placement is mixed up and there are a few spelling mistakes spread throughout. It's not bad enough to ruin the enjoyment, but it does get a bit much when you have to keep re-reading sentences and then mentally re-arranging the words so that the sentence makes sense!
Thank you for letting me know! We'll fix the naming and have a native speaker proof read all the writing in the game!
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I find the game interesting and have no problem with 99% of it BUT I am having a really hard time with the art for the MC, he looks like a sort of male head on a small titted woman's body. Not saying there are not guys out there that look like the MC, just not my choice for how one should look in a game. I might make him a little more masculine if I was the Dev, but that is just my opinion
Stella touches Audrie's hand with all five fingers
This game actually reminds me a bit of one of my games, Tamas Awakening
Well, guess this kind of setting is not that uncommon
good luck, fellow dev
Well, guess this kind of setting is not that uncommon
good luck, fellow dev
Wow! So honored to get a encouraging post from you! Tamas Awakening is surely a great game! Going to check your second game ASAP.
In our mind we weren't primarily inspired by a single hypnosis-themed game, whether it's Tamas Awakening, Snow Daze, Wife Trainer or even "not really hypnosis, but mind control" games like Corruption by Mr. C. We were inspired whole ecosystem, and wanted to create something of our own, adding to the genre.
Again, thank you for your kind words. Going to check out your second game, which I've missed somehow.
Not sure, what you mean. Yes there was a moment like that in the game. Are you reporting a typo? Or the fact, that the illustrations don't show Stella actually touching Audrie's hand (which we decided not to show, I don't even remember why). Going to go back to checking this moment in the game, but I'd wish you said more!
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The Naughty Three With the future tags, there is group sex. Is that MC with multiple women?
Or will there be other males involved with any of the LIs? (i.e. MMF, sharing/swinging, or even NTR I guess, might as well ask about that as well).
I am assuming that it is MC with multiple women, but thought it best to ask to be certain.
Or will there be other males involved with any of the LIs? (i.e. MMF, sharing/swinging, or even NTR I guess, might as well ask about that as well).
I am assuming that it is MC with multiple women, but thought it best to ask to be certain.
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New update coming soon! Here is what is upcoming in the next version:
- We finally get to hypnotize the big sister, if you made the right choices previously in the game
- Character routes are introduced - you get to choose if you want your big sis to be your sub or just obsessed with you.
- MC and younger sister are going out (with new music introduced)
- MC gets at peace with his guilty consciousness and also makes an interesting voyeuristic choice.
- A lot about Mom and Stella (the hypnotist) is revealed while they are drinking wine at night. Some steamy drama is incoming!
- Oh, and a lot of grammar, punctuation, and typos get fixed.
- We finally get to hypnotize the big sister, if you made the right choices previously in the game
- Character routes are introduced - you get to choose if you want your big sis to be your sub or just obsessed with you.
- MC and younger sister are going out (with new music introduced)
- MC gets at peace with his guilty consciousness and also makes an interesting voyeuristic choice.
- A lot about Mom and Stella (the hypnotist) is revealed while they are drinking wine at night. Some steamy drama is incoming!
- Oh, and a lot of grammar, punctuation, and typos get fixed.
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Knowing that this is almost certainly not a game for me because I don't like corruption/mind control and that sort of thing, I decided to give this game a try. However, I decided to try it because of the whole "having different routes" thing, so I figured there will be relatively vanilla routes where you don't enslave the girls. And, I like the art quite a bit.
What "pleased" me is being able to avoid making Helen a submissive. I understand that there won't be any romance in this game, but the route where you don't make her a submissive seems like it will be relatively vanilla and I like that.
What doesn't quite convince me is the MC. His internal dialogues seem a bit cringe to me. But, these are early versions of the game. There is a lot of room for it to evolve, especially depending on our decisions. Maybe a little more "evil", a little more "kind", etc. I don't know if it's just me being apathetic and inexpressive
, but I find the internal monologues excessive and some of them just say things we already know or are seeing. I don't think we need so much of that.
Another thing that didn't quite convince me is the final part of the talk between the mom and Stella, where Stella tells her that she's attracted to her. At the end the mom says she doesn't feel that way. Honestly, I don't know where this is going to go. I'd like the opportunity to keep Stella from getting involved with the girls, or at least leave it up to the player. For the hypnosis thing, I guess there will be the option to "help" Stella with mom or tell her to go fuck herself, that mom is just for us.
Anyway, I'm not going to "throw shit" on a game that clearly has an approach that I don't like and that I decided to try out of my own free will. However, and being aware that it is not a romance game, I will follow the game to see if there are or will be routes where we have the opportunity to not be a enslaver, or something like that.
What "pleased" me is being able to avoid making Helen a submissive. I understand that there won't be any romance in this game, but the route where you don't make her a submissive seems like it will be relatively vanilla and I like that.
What doesn't quite convince me is the MC. His internal dialogues seem a bit cringe to me. But, these are early versions of the game. There is a lot of room for it to evolve, especially depending on our decisions. Maybe a little more "evil", a little more "kind", etc. I don't know if it's just me being apathetic and inexpressive
, but I find the internal monologues excessive and some of them just say things we already know or are seeing. I don't think we need so much of that.Another thing that didn't quite convince me is the final part of the talk between the mom and Stella, where Stella tells her that she's attracted to her. At the end the mom says she doesn't feel that way. Honestly, I don't know where this is going to go. I'd like the opportunity to keep Stella from getting involved with the girls, or at least leave it up to the player. For the hypnosis thing, I guess there will be the option to "help" Stella with mom or tell her to go fuck herself, that mom is just for us.
Anyway, I'm not going to "throw shit" on a game that clearly has an approach that I don't like and that I decided to try out of my own free will. However, and being aware that it is not a romance game, I will follow the game to see if there are or will be routes where we have the opportunity to not be a enslaver, or something like that.
Hi, she divorced the father and he pays alimony. She also got the house. It is mentioned in the game multiple times
Thanks.... have not started the game yet.... i will give it a try then
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Knowing that this is almost certainly not a game for me because I don't like corruption/mind control and that sort of thing, I decided to give this game a try. However, I decided to try it because of the whole "having different routes" thing, so I figured there will be relatively vanilla routes where you don't enslave the girls. And, I like the art quite a bit.
What "pleased" me is being able to avoid making Helen a submissive. I understand that there won't be any romance in this game, but the route where you don't make her a submissive seems like it will be relatively vanilla and I like that.
What doesn't quite convince me is the MC. His internal dialogues seem a bit cringe to me. But, these are early versions of the game. There is a lot of room for it to evolve, especially depending on our decisions. Maybe a little more "evil", a little more "kind", etc. I don't know if it's just me being apathetic and inexpressive
Another thing that didn't quite convince me is the final part of the talk between the mom and Stella, where Stella tells her that she's attracted to her. At the end the mom says she doesn't feel that way. Honestly, I don't know where this is going to go. I'd like the opportunity to keep Stella from getting involved with the girls, or at least leave it up to the player. For the hypnosis thing, I guess there will be the option to "help" Stella with mom or tell her to go fuck herself, that mom is just for us.
Anyway, I'm not going to "throw shit" on a game that clearly has an approach that I don't like and that I decided to try out of my own free will. However, and being aware that it is not a romance game, I will follow the game to see if there are or will be routes where we have the opportunity to not be a enslaver, or something like that.
Hi, thank you for your feedback. There will be a love route for all characters, where he transforms the emotions they feel for him into love and passion. And they will not be enslaved mindless dolls even in submissive routes, they will enjoy them. Hypnosis in the game (and in real life) is much more about changing people's beliefs and outlook rather than making people mindless slaves. In regards to MC's inner dialogue, thank you for the feedback. I wanted to make him more kind, but in the beginning hesitant and fighting with his "forbidden" sexual desires, then embracing them. I guess, that part didn't come out as good as I thought it would. In regards to my intentions for Stella, you guessed right, I wish you would tell more as to what didn't convince you.