For me an avg game is 3 stars and this falls just a little below what I consider to be passable.
+The models are pretty and the general look of the renders is decent.
+The rework and changed and upgraded the story a lot from the first incarnation.
-This is where we get into the same problem as before, the writing, spelling, and grammar are still way too rough and distracting for this VN to be enjoyed.
*In my opinion this VN in its current state is just not worth reading. If it gets a script overhaul with a good proof reader who is a native speaker I'm sure this could bump up to a 3-4 star game.
+The models are pretty and the general look of the renders is decent.
+The rework and changed and upgraded the story a lot from the first incarnation.
-This is where we get into the same problem as before, the writing, spelling, and grammar are still way too rough and distracting for this VN to be enjoyed.
*In my opinion this VN in its current state is just not worth reading. If it gets a script overhaul with a good proof reader who is a native speaker I'm sure this could bump up to a 3-4 star game.