ArturiousDesign
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I swear, it's like I can't see a game with "Girlfriend" in the title without it being NTR ...
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Alternate title: The Literal Violation of Twitch Streamers (starring Alinity, Pokimane and Amouranth, the triumvirate of the Twitch cancer)
Yeah, this isn't it chief.
Even if the art were good
There's barely a game/VN here and from what I have read the writing quality isn't that great either. It also appears to be written by AI as well? Even if it wasn't, the writing is very muddy and unsophisticated. I'm not really expecting Shakespeare here, but some proofreading and better sentence flow would do you wonders.
That aside, I don't think I'm going to be commenting on this any further. I doubt I'm going to be following this either since this feels like it's going to get 2-3 updates and then the dev's gonna quit and I don't really like AI Art even if it's good.
If you do decide to continue, I'd suggest you plot out the story and scenes. Draw out a chart for conversation paths and their requirements etc. Basically plan out everything. You don't have to finish the chart, just get to a point where you can comfortably write (or fucking prompt, idk/idc) the story. This way shit will flow better, scenes will make sense, and development time will take SIGNFICANTLY less time because you won't be making shit up on the spot. Well you will, because it's a chart, but at least you'll have a frame to work with.
Other than that, good luck. I'll go check out Melkor Mancin and if this gets like 10 more updates, I might check it out again.
Even if the art were good
And it appears like it was stolen.
There's barely a game/VN here and from what I have read the writing quality isn't that great either. It also appears to be written by AI as well? Even if it wasn't, the writing is very muddy and unsophisticated. I'm not really expecting Shakespeare here, but some proofreading and better sentence flow would do you wonders.
That aside, I don't think I'm going to be commenting on this any further. I doubt I'm going to be following this either since this feels like it's going to get 2-3 updates and then the dev's gonna quit and I don't really like AI Art even if it's good.
If you do decide to continue, I'd suggest you plot out the story and scenes. Draw out a chart for conversation paths and their requirements etc. Basically plan out everything. You don't have to finish the chart, just get to a point where you can comfortably write (or fucking prompt, idk/idc) the story. This way shit will flow better, scenes will make sense, and development time will take SIGNFICANTLY less time because you won't be making shit up on the spot. Well you will, because it's a chart, but at least you'll have a frame to work with.
Other than that, good luck. I'll go check out Melkor Mancin and if this gets like 10 more updates, I might check it out again.
No rly. You've spent so much time in fascist online circles that you think about race way too much. And it's ruining your life. Hopefully you can get out of there. Once you change how you think about race and women, you'll be able to find real love and real friends and you'll realize just how badly your current brainrot has affected you. Good luck.
Cedo0099
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Yeah totally! I went for the tag first and then .... no download for me. As i respect a little the work of some dev because their AI is configurated to not steal only 1 author but this one is so wrong.
I know that's not gonna to happen but do people realize they do something illegal?
bluerubber
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But what about the pregnancy and breeding potential? He kinda bundled that question into one, and your answer kind of leads me to believe you only answered the first part.
massifteetees
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Unfortunately, the rules regarding legality of AI "art" is not very secure at this point. It's a very new thing and it moves fast, so seemingly "illegal" trends move fast too, such as the rampant use of stolen art like we see here. There's nothing we can do other than having the common sense or decency to not support things like this, in solidarity with the actual artists. And support honest devs that put in their effort 100%.
Weirdly enough, this dev claimed he is actually an artist, look at his long explanation on the first few pages, but why he won't use his own art, and choose Melkor Mancin to feed his AI, take your guess.
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so, we are in a pirate-site and people complaining about the pictures looks like another artist.
did Melkor draw it himself? No? how many hours did Melkor spend to do "THIS" game? 0?
sure we are in AI-times and this is how it works. AI works like that, it need to be fed something.
like any human take inspiration from other artists, is that stealing as well? theres plenty of artists that uses similar styles. are all this people stealing? come on!
I don't mind that at all. the importance here is:
- is the art good?
- are there any oddity with the graphics? (its AI)
- the VN itself, story, grammar?
as for me I will "ONLY" give my opinion on my first "thought".
yet another "western" made ntr and its about a GF getting blacked. quite tired of that.
but the DEV wrote its not. so we will see in future releases. as for now I will wait until next to give a proper review.
did Melkor draw it himself? No? how many hours did Melkor spend to do "THIS" game? 0?
sure we are in AI-times and this is how it works. AI works like that, it need to be fed something.
like any human take inspiration from other artists, is that stealing as well? theres plenty of artists that uses similar styles. are all this people stealing? come on!
I don't mind that at all. the importance here is:
- is the art good?
- are there any oddity with the graphics? (its AI)
- the VN itself, story, grammar?
as for me I will "ONLY" give my opinion on my first "thought".
yet another "western" made ntr and its about a GF getting blacked. quite tired of that.
but the DEV wrote its not. so we will see in future releases. as for now I will wait until next to give a proper review.
pirates being on that moral high horse is something else lmao
as always, the golden rule is: don't like it? don' play it
traplover19
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is it me or did this ai look almost exclusively at MelkorMancin pictures?
i can clearly see where it gets its inspiration from here
i can clearly see where it gets its inspiration from here
I mean, to be fair, this isn't a pirated copy lmao. The dev themselves came here and posted the link and there's no paywall.
Vlbc
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Not a fan of kinetic novels, but huge fan of netorase, so... that will be a difficult one.
Hope for a option to change Mc's name at least.
Hope for a option to change Mc's name at least.
traplover19
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complaining about copyright on a pirating site is incredibly silly yes it likely is and?
technically every file that isn't placed here by the developer is theft
traplover19
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