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Imo the art is great but the plot is weak. The characters are shallow, they have zero conflicts, and besides Anya there is no corruption.
I see a lot of people complaining about the slow escalation and slow pace as the main problem... But it's not!
The problem in this VN is that you can anticipate everything is coming, no surprises. The first art of the VN is the MC dreaming/watching his GF sucking black cock, and in the following dialogues the GF reveals she is a super slut... That's it! They are all set from the beginning, there is no drama and no change.
I think there are aspects that the developer could be exploring to develop the plot, but the dev ignored them by rushing the initial chapters, maybe to "sell" the game in its early stage.
I see a lot of people complaining about the slow escalation and slow pace as the main problem... But it's not!
The problem in this VN is that you can anticipate everything is coming, no surprises. The first art of the VN is the MC dreaming/watching his GF sucking black cock, and in the following dialogues the GF reveals she is a super slut... That's it! They are all set from the beginning, there is no drama and no change.
I think there are aspects that the developer could be exploring to develop the plot, but the dev ignored them by rushing the initial chapters, maybe to "sell" the game in its early stage.
except her dialogue moved top femdom/humiliation at the end of the updateVi will follow a NTS route ( sharing, swing, exhibitionism )
Seeing this on the home page makes me feel much more at ease.
Finain
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She's humiliating the other guy by talking about how his dick can't compare to her boyfriend's, how in the world is this a problem?
Firaxius
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Alex220477 every time you write something, I feel sad on how you have never anything good to say, if you really don't like this game why play it then? Nobody asks for this unrelated negative critics, if it was about a bug in game or the paths made that doesn't correspond, or there grammar mistakes, then I would agree you point those out, but it a NTS kinetic visual novel, you'll expect the mc will see his girl mess around with other guys eventualy, netorase is after all partly being a cuck wether it alpha or beta cuck.
I don't understand the whole discussion at all! The decision lies with the creator anyway. Let him play his game the way he wants. his game, his decision, no matter how loudly someone shouts
right not it does not seem like any of the "BBC family" would mind if any of the girls (their own stepmom included) to have fun with eric. by your logic, EVERYONE in this game is a cuck
.or maybe they are all rly free-spirited and want to have fun together w/o big drama ore jelousy
my bad, i feed the troll, wont happen again. guess is just dont learn :/
BangB420
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game needs more focus on NTS and less Eric imo, the update hottest scene was the nightclub. The handjob scene at the pool was whatever, when Samuel joins later on tho could be fun.
BangB420
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agree they all gonna fuck each other eventually
even better, she needs to do that more to eric
Firaxius
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The ultimate scene would be Sai tied in a chair while all the girls are naked and only Rob, Eric and Rob's brother get to fuck them and switch whole night long, till every girl had each of the three dicks 5 times during the night.
BangB420
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Eric doesn't have to be involved in every scene, such as when Vi went with the photographer to do the photo shoot and then came back to tell Eric about that
Really liking the writting on this one. Incest should take a while instead of the taboo dissapearing immediately. The pool scene with the mom was pretty great!
Machete
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If Eric's not around who's gonna lick away other guy's jizz from Vi's gaping asshole. That's his part in the relationship.
Ashoolar1989
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can hear the eric chads RN "ThaTs NtR!!!" haha what whatever logic they use lol to say its not cuckoldry
The game starts at school, then they never talked about it anymore. Are the students in spring break?
The dev could explore more of this side to make the story more interesting, instead of Eric obsession's to share his girl, and Vi's intense desire for black cock.
Think how nice would be Vi teasing Eric about sucking teacher's dick to reach good grades, and eventually doing it. Or Eric the QB sharing Vi with the football team, convincing her that she would be helping him to acquire a sports scholarship.
The dev could explore more of this side to make the story more interesting, instead of Eric obsession's to share his girl, and Vi's intense desire for black cock.
Think how nice would be Vi teasing Eric about sucking teacher's dick to reach good grades, and eventually doing it. Or Eric the QB sharing Vi with the football team, convincing her that she would be helping him to acquire a sports scholarship.
PatreonTed
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You're wrong. Every conversation downstream from that decision has to be changed, so potentially double the writing. From one single decision.
People did, go back and read the first 20 pages of this thread.