VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch. 4] [CircleGames]

[Owlearyn]

Momo
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Do you happen to have a second picture with her from Discord?

 

[SymbioticLife]

Great contest contributions..! Will you also publish the 1st place ?

I'm saving first place for CG to publish on patreon, but I'll post 4th and 6th place (I was 5th but I was lazy with my submission so I'm not going to bother posting it).



This was number 4.

 

[SymbioticLife]

And in my opinion one of the best entries despite not really being NTS like the submissions were meant to be, number 6 (the fact it came 6th despite being off topic says something for the quality)

Done by Ceagle, same talented guy who helped with the Halloween comic. Tons of great content that gets posted exclusively to the discord like this. Join today!

 

[telly1712]

And in my opinion one of the best entries despite not really being NTS like the submissions were meant to be, number 6 (the fact it came 6th despite being off topic says something for the quality) View attachment 4289836 View attachment 4289837 View attachment 4289838 View attachment 4289839 View attachment 4289840

Done by Ceagle, same talented guy who helped with the Halloween comic. Tons of great content that gets posted exclusively to the discord like this. Join today!

Thanks a lot for sharing the contributions! very appreciated…

 

[swiver]

At the end he still wants to see the gf get fucked but yeah, he isn't as spineless

See, the games fanbase is filled with these kinds of idiots, I can't wait for them to cry like a bitch once the inevitable happens

I believe so, yes. MC isn't a total pushover, to say the least. He's got some maneuverability but ultimately does find himself dawdling around "cuckish" scenarios. The games leaning moreso towards NTS as opposed to full-blown NTR

Interesting that MC's strong character keeps coming up as a characterisation. If you all simply mean he isn't her sub or inept at sex, I suppose it's right. But I would note that she remains the instigator. It's her fetish(es) that started it all. MC, it turns out, enjoys them, too, but he didn't consciously know it and would have been happy with her vanilla. He starts out a regular teenager with little experience or knowledge of his inclinations beyong the biological.

This is not at all a downside for me, I'm just interested in the tropes and, I guess, it's also for the benefit of those asking to know if this will be suitable to their taste.

A seriously NTS domination story would be the MC corrupting GF, dominating her and sharing her to satisfy himself (or even earn money). He would be withholding of affection, and reward her for being slutty more like a pet/prostitute/bottom bitch.

I would enjoy the game less, or, more precisely, a different enjoyment, if this was NTS where the MC is a sadistic corruptor. To enjoy that I would expect a more BDSM type of trope with a focus on humiliation, some level of non-con (resistance by GF) and much less love or a twisted pet-sort of love.

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Given how great and successful it's been, I would love to see the dev's starting again from the top at some point, adding branches for non-sharing harem BDSM(-ish or hard), proper NTR and sadistic NTS. I'd enjoy all of them with these ladies.

 

[leros147]

I found this

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on a random website, so use it at your own risk.
But I'm curious, what for?

Thanks, it took me 2:30 hours to download xD. I need it for my repository.

 

[atrebor68]

Interesting that MC's strong character keeps coming up as a characterisation. If you all simply mean he isn't her sub or inept at sex, I suppose it's right. But I would note that she remains the instigator. It's her fetish(es) that started it all. MC, it turns out, enjoys them, too, but he didn't consciously know it and would have been happy with her vanilla. He starts out a regular teenager with little experience or knowledge of his inclinations beyong the biological.

This is not at all a downside for me, I'm just interested in the tropes and, I guess, it's also for the benefit of those asking to know if this will be suitable to their taste.

A seriously NTS domination story would be the MC corrupting GF, dominating her and sharing her to satisfy himself (or even earn money). He would be withholding of affection, and reward her for being slutty more like a pet/prostitute/bottom bitch.

I would enjoy the game less, or, more precisely, a different enjoyment, if this was NTS where the MC is a sadistic corruptor. To enjoy that I would expect a more BDSM type of trope with a focus on humiliation, some level of non-con (resistance by GF) and much less love or a twisted pet-sort of love.

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Given how great and successful it's been, I would love to see the dev's starting again from the top at some point, adding branches for non-sharing harem BDSM(-ish or hard), proper NTR and sadistic NTS. I'd enjoy all of them with these ladies.

Long, but really interesting post.
IMHO the MC is not a sadistic boyfriend but a man with a fantasy. I think every man in his life had or have the fantasy to see his fiancee or wife taking a stranger cock.
Who likes to expose her wife or gf has this kink, too.

 

[SymbioticLife]

Interesting that MC's strong character keeps coming up as a characterisation. If you all simply mean he isn't her sub or inept at sex, I suppose it's right. But I would note that she remains the instigator. It's her fetish(es) that started it all. MC, it turns out, enjoys them, too, but he didn't consciously know it and would have been happy with her vanilla. He starts out a regular teenager with little experience or knowledge of his inclinations beyong the biological.

This is not at all a downside for me, I'm just interested in the tropes and, I guess, it's also for the benefit of those asking to know if this will be suitable to their taste.

A seriously NTS domination story would be the MC corrupting GF, dominating her and sharing her to satisfy himself (or even earn money). He would be withholding of affection, and reward her for being slutty more like a pet/prostitute/bottom bitch.

I would enjoy the game less, or, more precisely, a different enjoyment, if this was NTS where the MC is a sadistic corruptor. To enjoy that I would expect a more BDSM type of trope with a focus on humiliation, some level of non-con (resistance by GF) and much less love or a twisted pet-sort of love.

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Given how great and successful it's been, I would love to see the dev's starting again from the top at some point, adding branches for non-sharing harem BDSM(-ish or hard), proper NTR and sadistic NTS. I'd enjoy all of them with these ladies.

I think the portion in the spoiler tag is a pretty interesting and fairly close to the mark assessment (although, I don't agree that her having ANY previous experience is NTR either way, it is fairly clear from things said in game that it's not vast experience). But yea, Vi definitely is the primary instigator but not only does Eric love it, but she pushes him to punish her because she wants him to be a part of the whole cycle and not just a spectator to it.

I don't think all sadism = losing respect though, BDSM involves sadism but the sadist can still love the masochist. From what I've gleaned from past conversations months ago there will be some growing sadism on Eric's part, but I don't think any of that will be sadism outside of the bedroom. In other words, it would be sadism connected to kink, not sadism connected to any actual change in how he sees Vi.

 

[SymbioticLife]

OK, CG posted it so I'll post it here as well. This is by Suki who got first in the contest and is a proofreader for us on Shadows of Ambition as well. Very talented girl.




And no I won't post the momo dev art, if you want dev art or any other fan arts/member arts that only get posted on the discord then join it. I only posted these because the participants deserve recognition for their work. It was a fun contest, and I hope more people join for the next one. Pretty decent size cash prizes for top 3 places! But fun for all involved.

 

[atrebor68]

OK, CG posted it so I'll post it here as well. This is by Suki who got first in the contest and is a proofreader for us on Shadows of Ambition as well. Very talented girl.

And no I won't post the momo dev art, if you want dev art or any other fan arts/member arts that only get posted on the discord then join it. I only posted these because the participants deserve recognition for their work. It was a fun contest, and I hope more people join for the next one. Pretty decent size cash prizes for top 3 places! But fun for all involved.

DAMN! The image with his cock visible in her inner pussy is SO HOT!!

 

[Blades1138]

Going to follow this because of the art, but I don't care for the story one bit.
I feel like it could be way more popular with a more "vanilla" story that doesn't involve NTR/NTS.
Even as it is, could've been better if MC was written to have more agency instead of basically being along for the ride.
His girlfriend is practically making all the decisions and it feels like he's automatically agreeing for fear of losing her.

 

[Yougiblack]

Going to follow this because of the art, but I don't care for the story one bit.
I feel like it could be way more popular with a more "vanilla" story that doesn't involve NTR/NTS.
Even as it is, could've been better if MC was written to have more agency instead of basically being along for the ride.
His girlfriend is practically making all the decisions and it feels like he's automatically agreeing for fear of losing her.

Doshima

 

[Finain]

I feel like it could be way more popular with a more "vanilla" story that doesn't involve NTR/NTS.

This dev is making 4~5k$/month after 6 months of development. I think he'll be fine.

 

[SymbioticLife]

Going to follow this because of the art, but I don't care for the story one bit.
I feel like it could be way more popular with a more "vanilla" story that doesn't involve NTR/NTS.
Even as it is, could've been better if MC was written to have more agency instead of basically being along for the ride.
His girlfriend is practically making all the decisions and it feels like he's automatically agreeing for fear of losing her.

Heavy disagree that it's ever been implied he only does it because he's afraid of losing her, in fact none of his actions or inner dialogue even remotely imply that. At multiple points she's clarified if he wants her to slow down and he's never said yes, in fact he's constantly motivated her to go for it.

But it's impossible to please everyone.

 

[Blades1138]

This dev is making 4~5k$/month after 6 months of development. I think he'll be fine.

Just wanted to leave some feedback. Not sure if it's against the rules or anything.
Is it better to post a review ?

Heavy disagree that it's ever been implied he only does it because he's afraid of losing her, in fact none of his actions or inner dialogue even remotely imply that. At multiple points she's clarified if he wants her to slow down and he's never said yes, in fact he's constantly motivated her to go for it.

But it's impossible to please everyone.

Maybe you're right and what I said isn't 100% correct.
But I did get the impression that MC is pretty passive - there's definitely a reason for that.

 

[kristo0086]

Going to follow this because of the art, but I don't care for the story one bit.
I feel like it could be way more popular with a more "vanilla" story that doesn't involve NTR/NTS.
Even as it is, could've been better if MC was written to have more agency instead of basically being along for the ride.
His girlfriend is practically making all the decisions and it feels like he's automatically agreeing for fear of losing her.

Yes, I'm also thinking about going into all the popular games and writing in the comments that the game would be better if you remove everything and add NETORASE.

 

[Blades1138]

Yes, I'm also thinking about going into all the popular games and writing in the comments that the game would be better if you remove everything and add NETORASE.

Or maybe don't get your panties in a bunch because someone disagreed with your tastes on the internet ?

P.S. You're free to like what you want, but no need to invent things I didn't say.
I made no requests, simply stated my opinion/feedback. Not even sure if the dev reads this thread.

 

[kristo0086]

Or maybe don't get your panties in a bunch because someone disagreed with your tastes on the internet ?

P.S. You're free to like what you want, but no need to invent thinsg I didn't say.
I made no requests, simply stated my opinion/feedback. Not even sure if the dev reads this thread.

Or maybe you shouldn't play games if you see tags that you don't like. And don't write that it would be better to completely throw out the whole concept of the game and add what you like . That's weird, buddy.

 

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[KingsRaiden]

But I did get the impression that MC is pretty passive - there's definitely a reason for that.

Not sure how you get that since the MC notes that he likes the idea of other people salivating over her, and the fantasies where he sees her being used turn him on. Doesn't mean passive since he goes off on her being a slut and turning others on, but coming back to him.