Master5043

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Jul 30, 2020
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they keep taking away my one star review simply because I write the truth, and the Dev doesn't like my review, and puts pressure on the staff, coincidentally, there are only 5 star reviews, hahaha, how funny, it's all a bluff. The game is a kinetic VN, someone can prove the opposite, NO, VI is a bitch, slow, but dominating bitch, Someone can say NO, Eric has the right to say something or just look at what VI decides to do, what do you call this, weak and cuckolded MC, and VI dominating bitch, Someone can tell me something that is not like that. I'll wait for you, hahahahha
If your reviews are deleted, they violate the review writing rules. Your opinion about the characters is not considered as a judgement for the review and rating of the game.
Overall, it's not surprising that reviews are being deleted. Most of the thread is gooner riot about it being "too slow" and Vi not jumping on BBC gangbang by this time, dev doesn't let people jerk off to ntr porn too fast.
If about writing - everything is going at the right pace. Each update has a gradual escalation.
Ch 1 - character introduction, hidden fetishes of MC
Ch 2 - first sex, Vi/Eric carefully shares fantasies
Ch 3 - Vi teases guys in public
Ch 4 - candid photo shoot, first physical contact with other men - Vi gets spanked in a club, even hotter sex where Eric openly admit his sharing fantasies
Ch 5 - Vi grinds on another guy and jerks his cock while her best friend sucks it.
Gradual development, natural dynamics, teasing that start emotions, getting even more hard that simple lewd, amazing facial expressions and atmosphere.
This is the best nts game now, and developer, don't pay attention to the "criticism". These people just wanted to jerk off, but you ruined their plans with good writing and right build-up.
 

Chelsea:p

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Apr 26, 2022
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I can agree, choices can make it fun for pathing, but it doesn't bother me here really, it well written kinetic VN, and I don't see Vi as a dumb slut or whore, like some of those female corruption games, but more like a girl who know what she wants and for her that is escape from the chains her dad put on her, if you had a dad like that you would just want to be the same, after all what is forbidden tastes the best. With Eric she can be that free, he doesn't want to chain her like her dad does, to me her dad feels like some pervy child abuser. So i will support this dev as it a really good vn to read and enjoy, though ending hot moments like this last chapter was a bit grrrr...., but none the less found it pretty hot how she used Ari as a fleshlight on her bf's cock.
Yes, I agree with everything, I had forgotten about her asshole father. I already have my opinions about the kinetic choices, the Mc and etc. But the game is not bad, far from it, it is even addictive, I just have a problem with the choices. That I could leave aside for now.. but something that would make me happy was to see Violet's father being beaten by some BBC lol Samuel could do the job.
 

Firaxius

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Aug 13, 2020
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I noticed that too. I don’t bother with leaving a review but i legitimately saw totally normal 1-2 star reviews which got deleted for no reason.
I only put a review when a game is finished, because aslong it in development, opinions can change, I also had some of my reviews removed, but that was because i forgot the rule about developer praising wasn't allowed, but it never bothered me they removed it, but i wonder how you can put in a new review if yours got banned, I mean I wanted to review those game properly but it never let me do it again after that. But yes if you want to review a game best keep it to pure healthy critics, that about the game alone and respect the forum rules.
 
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FMarshallboy

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Aug 6, 2021
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It stayed in the best part, maybe I will return to it in chapter 7-8 when I advance enough.


PS: We won't even be able to say yes or no? Will it be what the VI says?
 

Firaxius

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Aug 13, 2020
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It stayed in the best part, maybe I will return to it in chapter 7-8 when I advance enough.


PS: We won't even be able to say yes or no? Will it be what the VI says?
It will stay what Eric and Vi show each other in facial expressions, and probably she will bone Rob or his brother which we didn't meet yet. Either way it NTS where both Eric and Vi gets fun and probably will stay like it, Eric loves the teasing and see her doing naughty stuff, only Eric needs to change still is his wall for boning his step-sisters and step-mom, but think Vi or Maki will help there at some point.
 

diddlydadoo

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Jul 12, 2021
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Point of order about the canonical step-family: A stepchild is, by dictionary definition, the child of your partner from a previous relationship. So, if Laura is infertile and her kids were adopted (which the dialogue seems to imply), they wouldn't be stepsiblings, and Laura wouldn't be their stepmom; they'd be adopted siblings and adoptive mother respectively.

For them all to be step-family, the kids would each have to come from separate previous marriages to their respective biological parents, who'd each need to have had the kids before marrying Laura or her husband before divorcing and losing custody to them (or dying). So, maybe Eric's step-dad married Maki's bio-mom and Anya's bio-mom first before marrying Laura, shortly after Laura had parted from Eric's bio-dad (or any other combination). If so, I'm not sure how much I can blame the step-dad for wanting to raise at least one child of his bloodline. He's still being an idiot by missing out on Laura's sweet ass (and sweet personality) and an asshole for abandoning the rest of the family, though, especially since finding a surrogate mom may have been an option. So Eric should totally rail his deadbeat step-dad's bio-daughter at some point.

Anyway, what I'm getting at is that the amount of backstory required to make a step-family orgy (as seen in a lot of contemporary porn) with zero incest make sense is pretty chonky, and that much deep lore is fodder for some delightfully soap-opera-ish family/relationship drama. So, I hope this is actually explored instead of using stepmom as an easier-to-say euphemism for adoptive mom.

Also, Vi's dad seems to have aged about 30 years in one update, and now looks believably intimidating. That's nice to see.

Speaking of Vi, it's about time we got to see her touch another man's cock. Hopefully, the future steps of the NTS don't take quite as long with Ari cheerfully cucking Sai and egging her on. Meanwhile, poor Anya's caught in the middle of Maki and Ari both competing to be a bad influence on her. But what's this? It's Eric with a metal chair, swung directly at Anya's innocence. And Rob seem's to be very aware of her voyeurism, so he'll probably give her a show whenever he can as well... It's fun to see her inevitable corruption gain momentum.
 

palmtrees89

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Jul 3, 2021
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PS: We won't even be able to say yes or no? Will it be what the VI says?
That's how kinetic novels work. :)

It's been well established that Eric wants to see Vi being naughty in public and with other people. They've been talking about it. Eric gave his okay to Vi, and even more important he gave his ok to Sai in Chapter05 when it was about finding the girls on the dancefloor and having some fun with them. The 3 boys literally had a conversation about it before they went out to get the girls. With that in mind, I don't really understand why there's so many people suddenly going up the walls. Was very clear at the very beginning that sharing was gonna be part of the game, and Chapter 05 made a big step forward on that front.
 

Pr0GamerJohnny

Conversation Conqueror
Sep 7, 2022
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You just have to read a post that contains 8 rules explaining how to leave a review to the games on this site, it's not that hard. Can't believe we're in 2025 and there's people that can't comprehend 8 basic rules written in basic English, but of course it's easier to blame it on the developer (which he really doesn't pay that much attention to the rating his game has on this site) or the F95 staff (even though they're doing their job) instead of trying to learn how to leave a simple review in a forum of a porn game.
But please don't stop complaining, I'm addicted to copium, so I'm having a lot of fun seeing all of you copying because of the deleted reviews.
If your reviews are deleted, they violate the review writing rules. Your opinion about the characters is not considered as a judgement for the review and rating of the game.
Overall, it's not surprising that reviews are being deleted. Most of the thread is gooner riot about it being "too slow" and Vi not jumping on BBC gangbang by this time, dev doesn't let people jerk off to ntr porn too fast.
If about writing - everything is going at the right pace. Each update has a gradual escalation.
Ch 1 - character introduction, hidden fetishes of MC
Ch 2 - first sex, Vi/Eric carefully shares fantasies
Ch 3 - Vi teases guys in public
Ch 4 - candid photo shoot, first physical contact with other men - Vi gets spanked in a club, even hotter sex where Eric openly admit his sharing fantasies
Ch 5 - Vi grinds on another guy and jerks his cock while her best friend sucks it.
Gradual development, natural dynamics, teasing that start emotions, getting even more hard that simple lewd, amazing facial expressions and atmosphere.
This is the best nts game now, and developer, don't pay attention to the "criticism". These people just wanted to jerk off, but you ruined their plans with good writing and right build-up.
All this sycophancy for the status quo on reviews....as if there isn't a huge problem both ways with scores being artifically deflated and inflated. Surely those championing the process are as critical of disposable positive reviews as they are disposable negative reviews?

As said before I enjoy the game and would probably give it four stars, but I loathe this kind of smug dismissiveness for what's a very real problem in getting good information from the review section.
 

blubbervink

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Oct 15, 2018
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you all say it's right, but no one explains why, or what I say that's false, I'm always here waiting for someone who wants to prove me wrong, hahahahah
Im not claiming what you are saying is false. You are entitled to your opinion, i just dont care to debate you on it.

I was saying the fault of your review being removed is most likely lying with you.
 

palmtrees89

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Jul 3, 2021
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Bro CircleGames this game needs a non-ntr dom corruption route. I think you should do it as there a great market and demand for it here.
I think he should do it the way he wants to do it. Trying to make a game over terms like 'Great market' and 'demand' is never going well. Changing the game in a way to please some people also won't go well. But you know what's going well? A developer continuing with his vision which hit the spot for so many people that the game is one of the most viewed on F95 in recent months while also attracting a ton of subscribers. My opinion? Let the guy cook!
 
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Chelsea:p

Newbie
Apr 26, 2022
28
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Like Mc, he had to show more firmness, I think he's awkward when he's in public or in front of his friends, he has to show the hungry "Vi" who's boss around them or when there are just the two of them, as he said at the end of the update...not like her asshole father, but sexual and loving. Anyway, I'm not trying to change anything here, just giving my honest opinion. I like the game and I wish CircleGames luck and hope everything continues to work out.
 

PatreonTed

Active Member
Jun 3, 2017
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We talked about the fact that such a long wait is not justified, now I want to express my opinion about the plot and the narrative, if in chapter 4 for Vi there were too many changes, she too quickly switched to the lustful side of her nature, then fortunately chapter 5 did not give quick jumps in lust in the plot after chapter 4, the plot is very organic and rich, not counting the scene with Sonya and her stepmother, as if it was either superfluous or did not fit into the atmosphere of the narrative, because there was no continuation of their branch in chapter 5, it was possible to move it to 6 and refine the plot, or show at least some continuation in chapter 5, regarding the scenes in the club, they look very organic, I'm glad that the developer did not rush things with Vi, and dragged out the plot with her, the plot is really exciting, I played in one breath, maybe this played a cruel joke on me, the plot flew by in an instant , but as I wrote earlier, the wait is not worth the effort, such a plot should come out once every 1.5 months at most, it felt like if such a plot came out once a month, the project would be priceless, I would continue to support the developer without sparing my money, I think I'm not the only one. But for now, this is starting to look like a regular milking machine like the game Innocent Witches, where there are many promises and little action, but as for the animations, the developer is great, he really gave something new, but it still doesn't justify such a long wait!
I eagerly await the games that you and others who call this milking have coming out. Because if you think it's milking, you must think it's easy to do.
 

123Watari

New Member
Jun 28, 2021
10
18
am i crazy, or did this game used to have choices? i think remember being able to select certain dialogue options before, albeit few and far between
 
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