this update was good, but I have one criticism: if we see certain events happen (like seeing vi strip for the photographer), those same renders can't be used to tease later (like vi showing the same renders to eric while teasing him). the images have diminished impact because we, the player, have already seen the pictures.
this same thing happened in the last update where maki steals your phone and says she's going to tell vi to send the photographer another picture, and builds up what picture it was... and then shows the image that vi already sent you. these always feel like let-downs because you want to be as surprised as eric.
i would try to find another way to structure the story so that we aren't trying to tease AFTER we've already seen the images from the tease.
fairly minor criticism, all things considered
, see you soon my friends!!
