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SymbioticLife

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Going to follow this because of the art, but I don't care for the story one bit.
I feel like it could be way more popular with a more "vanilla" story that doesn't involve NTR/NTS.
Even as it is, could've been better if MC was written to have more agency instead of basically being along for the ride.
His girlfriend is practically making all the decisions and it feels like he's automatically agreeing for fear of losing her.
Heavy disagree that it's ever been implied he only does it because he's afraid of losing her, in fact none of his actions or inner dialogue even remotely imply that. At multiple points she's clarified if he wants her to slow down and he's never said yes, in fact he's constantly motivated her to go for it.

But it's impossible to please everyone.
 

Blades1138

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This dev is making 4~5k$/month after 6 months of development. I think he'll be fine.
Just wanted to leave some feedback. Not sure if it's against the rules or anything.
Is it better to post a review ?

Heavy disagree that it's ever been implied he only does it because he's afraid of losing her, in fact none of his actions or inner dialogue even remotely imply that. At multiple points she's clarified if he wants her to slow down and he's never said yes, in fact he's constantly motivated her to go for it.

But it's impossible to please everyone.
Maybe you're right and what I said isn't 100% correct.
But I did get the impression that MC is pretty passive - there's definitely a reason for that.
 
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kristo0086

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Going to follow this because of the art, but I don't care for the story one bit.
I feel like it could be way more popular with a more "vanilla" story that doesn't involve NTR/NTS.
Even as it is, could've been better if MC was written to have more agency instead of basically being along for the ride.
His girlfriend is practically making all the decisions and it feels like he's automatically agreeing for fear of losing her.
Yes, I'm also thinking about going into all the popular games and writing in the comments that the game would be better if you remove everything and add NETORASE. :KEK:
 

Blades1138

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Yes, I'm also thinking about going into all the popular games and writing in the comments that the game would be better if you remove everything and add NETORASE. :KEK:
Or maybe don't get your panties in a bunch because someone disagreed with your tastes on the internet ?

P.S. You're free to like what you want, but no need to invent things I didn't say.
I made no requests, simply stated my opinion/feedback. Not even sure if the dev reads this thread.
 

kristo0086

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Or maybe don't get your panties in a bunch because someone disagreed with your tastes on the internet ?

P.S. You're free to like what you want, but no need to invent thinsg I didn't say.
I made no requests, simply stated my opinion/feedback. Not even sure if the dev reads this thread.
Or maybe you shouldn't play games if you see tags that you don't like. And don't write that it would be better to completely throw out the whole concept of the game and add what you like . That's weird, buddy.
 

KingsRaiden

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But I did get the impression that MC is pretty passive - there's definitely a reason for that.
Not sure how you get that since the MC notes that he likes the idea of other people salivating over her, and the fantasies where he sees her being used turn him on. Doesn't mean passive since he goes off on her being a slut and turning others on, but coming back to him.
 

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Just wanted to leave some feedback. Not sure if it's against the rules or anything.
Is it better to post a review ?
Why are you leaving a review for a game whose style you don't like?


But I did get the impression that MC is pretty passive - there's definitely a reason for that.
Hard disagree, putting the sign on her back in the club disproves your theory, IMO
 
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SymbioticLife

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Hard disagree, putting the sign on her back in the club disproves your theory, IMO
Ah, good point there too. And I imagine we might see Eric play more games like that in the future. Thing is just as Vi is escalating in her journey so too is Eric in his. Don't know what the guy expected, it'd be a new thing for Eric of course he's not exactly going to be pushing and playing with her super hard right out the gate.
 

Blades1138

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Why are you leaving a review for a game whose style you don't like?
Because I played it. Is it against the rules to have criticism ?
I dislike the story only, meanwhile I like the art style a lot - I think it's one of the best 2D art styles I've seen so far.
That's why I thought I'd leave my opinion as there's definitely a draw for this game even to people who aren't into NTx stuff.

Hard disagree, putting the sign on her back in the club disproves your theory, IMO
Went back to this scene, because of your comment.
Yes, MC is the one that puts the sticky on her, but the whole idea for it was hers in the first place.
It feels like an attempt to give the MC agency rather than actually doing it.
It's also not to say he's completely passive throughout the whole game, but there are definitely many scenes where he is.
By comparison most girls are the ones pushing the plot/action forward and teasing him etc, which makes it feel like MC is along for the ride. Honestly I'm not completely against it from a storytelling perspective, but when combined with the NTS stuff, it doesn't mesh well for me.
 
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tallman102

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How often are the updates? Two months between? Is the next one to be released in December?
It varies. Generally the time between updates have been increasing, however only some of this is attributed to increases in complexity/content. I think the general goal is 1-2 months, but this will also depend on story allocation for a given chapter. In the end this is also a creative endevour, so its not possible to give a cemented schedule.
 
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morgoth000

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I think the story is going great. I hope the project continues. I can't wait for Vi and Maki to meet. Then the excitement will increase even more. But I don't think the next episode will be as high-tension as this episode.
 

SymbioticLife

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Will there be a second photo session with Vi in chapter 5 ?
No, he answered this on the discord after last chapter, there will be another photoshoot but it makes no sense for her to immediately get called in again, besides it'd be repetitive.
Not quite sure what's planned for Ch05. I don't think there has been much free-info in regards to the content unless I missed it. :)
We actually do know some of what is planned for chapter 5, again on the discord he mentioned after last chapter what the opening scene would be and he's given breadcrumbs about other scenes.

In general I say join the discord if you want any early info. But I will leave one little breadcrumb myself, CG posted a background in the discord a while back. A pool scene will be involved.
 

idkmanerally

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In general I say join the discord if you want any early info. But I will leave one little breadcrumb myself, CG posted a background in the discord a while back. A pool scene will be involved.
having to DM the dev to get into discord is so annoying... i often sub for releases and then drop the sub after to support him, but having to message him every time is so annoying. i wish he would find a way to make that easier
 
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4.50 star(s) 143 Votes