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it may be a souless artist generating the art, but by golly, it's art!
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it may be a souless artist generating the art, but by golly, it's art!
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Yup, I think overall it was the right choice for Anya, as it reflects the character better. I definitely understand why the dev felt that some changes were necessary in a long run.To answer the writing part, because I generally agree with the rest of what you said, it was just to make where she's at now more consistent. That's why I called it out, has nothing to do with where she's going, which as you said at least regarding both Rob and Eric is fairly obvious. I would have personally made the same critique though if she suddenly said those things to Eric at this point too. For me it had nothing to do with whether it was NTR or whatever (I've already explained why I don't think so, but I agree that many are overly obsessed with exact genre obsessions) but rather taking me out of the moment because of how abrupt the shift in tone was from one moment to the next. It's porn but you know, you want some level of plausibility.
Doesn't matter if the scene is NTS/NTR/reclamation/harem/whatever I'll always question if it fits the characters motives and role at that time, even if I myself want the scene in question to happen. I would say I simply like consistency.One of the nice things about CG's writing thus far is that even though it has pornographic exaggeration obviously, the characters are internally consistent. Their motivations and path going from point A to B to C. But if even if all know that the path ends at F if D is skipped then that internal consistency is lost and the story is worse for it. That's why I made the critique I did (I have no clue if the change had anything to do with my critique or just overall feedback, of which there was a lot).
I did a little bit of writing for SoA, shits super difficult, easily the hardest part of the whole thing at least for me personally. So you know, mistakes happen and I think it's fine to point those out. Eric and Anya are now going on a shopping trip, if Anya suddenly tells Eric she wants to fuck him in the changing room stall I'd also call out that for bad writing (even though it's a scene I'd very much like to see! it's simply too soon for her to be that bold). Call me the no fun police (Doshima certainly does in SoA dev chat
And yes, I totally agree 'natural' progression means a lot. I think consistency and the ability to relate to the characters are what really sells the story. This game strikes a perfect balance between 'porny' and 'realism' while still focusing on character development, and I love that. And if it means that either this or that 'tag' makes sense in a particular situation, then so be it. It's great storytelling, also I love that we have two characters like Maki an Ari that are a bit unpredictable and are complete nymphomaniacs, that can spice things up and build up the scene if needed
Oh so you are on the writing of SoA as well? I initially thought you were more on the art department side. I don’t want to dwell on it too much in another game’s thread tho. It’s a super difficult task to craft a compelling story. Speaking from experience , I know exactly what you mean. The project is in good hands.
PS. Do we get to see more of Andrea's cake? That girl has urges that need to be taken care of. And I think Alice would agree
I absolutely agree with you, just like the 11 people who liked you
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I agree that the story should be called Dominant black dudes with giant dicks...........and my girlfriend.
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Or.. My girlfriend and family In a sea of chocolateI agree that the story should be called Dominant black dudes with giant dicks...........and my girlfriend.
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..And just for the record, the game would be balanced with Black girls Like a sister or daughter of Samuel.
it would be fair to take his family too
it would be fair to take his family too
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I would call it "Find a New Girlfriend. You'll Bang that Cumdump Anyway." Subtitle: "Of Course, if You are into STDs..."I agree that the story should be called Dominant black dudes with giant dicks...........and my girlfriend.
i love the artstyle of the game and the tease of the girls but i hate the dominant, degrading way the MC treats his girlfriend during sex and calling her slut all the time.
i just played (skipped) through the second sex scene (the first one in your home), so i don´t know what´s to come, but will it keep on like this throughout the game?
i just played (skipped) through the second sex scene (the first one in your home), so i don´t know what´s to come, but will it keep on like this throughout the game?
I mean the "punishing your gf for being a slut who wants to bang other guys" is kinda the whole point of this type of NTS game.
most NTS games either MC punishes his partner for being a "slut" or the FMC femdoms him into being cucked, if there's neither of them the story lacks any drama or intrigue
yeah you´re right, i just never played (or seen) a game where it´s the first matter so i was wondering.
i´d definitely prefer the femdom thing, so i was hoping it kind of would come out that way or just gives a possibility for this because i saw on recent posts people complaining about all this bbc stuff and i thought maybe the story changes at some point.
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We'll have to invent cryocapsules to wait for routes and choices to be added to the game.
Its the Best part of Game when Eric treats Vi Like a real slut . In this Game would He treat her Vanilla, she would dump him instantly.
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I agree, girls should be treated like whores and kicked in the face so that she respects the guy. Girls love dominant and pheromone-smelling men.
You know its Just a Game ! AI Pixel and so. Do you ?.....I agree, girls should be treated like whores and kicked in the face so that she respects the guy. Girls love dominant and pheromone-smelling men.
By the way i think i missed the part where MC Kicks his GF in the face...maybe i played the Vanille Route
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You’ve presented an great idea
I don’t know if CircleGames reads the posts in this forum or not, but I suggest they think about this person’s idea
Adding 1 or 2 sisters for Rob is great for three reasons:
1: It increases variety and brings in attractive non-white girls to the game
2: It permanently satisfies those who are really unhappy with the BBC cliché in this game—and based on recent pages, there are quite a few of them
3: It could even satisfy incest fans—they’d say to themselves, “Rob fucked our sister, so we fucked his sister too
Personally, I’d really like to see Black girls in this game too
AI artworks of black girls:
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do you think it looks like black women? i think it looks more like a tanYou’ve presented an great idea
I don’t know if CircleGames reads the posts in this forum or not, but I suggest they think about this person’s idea
Adding 1 or 2 sisters for Rob is great for three reasons:
1: It increases variety and brings in attractive non-white girls to the game
2: It permanently satisfies those who are really unhappy with the BBC cliché in this game—and based on recent pages, there are quite a few of them
3: It could even satisfy incest fans—they’d say to themselves, “Rob fucked our sister, so we fucked his sister too
Personally, I’d really like to see Black girls in this game too
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Agreed, left looks definitely like tan.
Right could also be latin.
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I added two more AI artworks of black girls to the previous post
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