VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch.5 v3] [CircleGames]

[Jdsiis]

The game is amazing. Girls are really hot, the AI art is fantastic, the theme is perfectly done. I love it!

One thing I also appreciate, is that this dev is making a porn game. I feel like a lot of devs forget that and have these 30-60 minute interludes where it's basically a normal VN in-between sex / sexy scenes.

I appreciate it because I play games here to fap. And once I start fapping, even if the dialogue is good I'll lose interest as my boner is waning and I start wanting to skip to the action. Like, if there's no sex or sexy scenes, you should at least be making the dialogue sexy / teasing / some imagery here and there to keep up our chubs.

With that being said, I do think the action could be slowed down a slight bit, and some of the characters are a little too direct in a porn-logicy way (Mom's friend, the one step-sister), but at the same time, I understand it's a porn game, so some porn-logic is okay here and there.

If I were to remake the story, I would have it focus a bit more on the MC and his girlfriends relationship at first, have her be the tease she is and tease the MC about being shared while also teasing the MC for sex. Have the sisters and other people introduced more as characters and then corrupted by some friends or by overhearing the MC and Vi having sex etc. before they're trying to fuck their 'step' brother. But as I said, it's a porn game, so I don't mind the fast-pace.

 

[palmtrees89]

and some of the characters are a little too direct in a porn-logicy way (Mom's friend

That would be my only criticism aswell. Neighbor's wife was a little over the top pulling her pants down a minute after being introduced to the MC. Some sexy talk and teasing would have been more than enough there, imo.

"Hi, I'm your new neighbor. Your mom and I are gonna work out together. By the way, how's my ass? *pulls pants down*"

I found it funny, but still a little too much too fast, haha.

Anyway, loving the game aswell so far!

 

[Lovely Dani]

Damn!
I took a year to convince my girlfriend to dress(almost) like that !!

PS great game writing.

 

[Yougiblack]

Damn!
I took a year to convince my girlfriend to dress(almost) like that !!

PS great game writing.

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[Lovely Dani]

Lucky M8

Come on, are games between couples, everybody do it.

 

[idkmanerally]

The game is amazing. Girls are really hot, the AI art is fantastic, the theme is perfectly done. I love it!

One thing I also appreciate, is that this dev is making a porn game. I feel like a lot of devs forget that and have these 30-60 minute interludes where it's basically a normal VN in-between sex / sexy scenes.

I appreciate it because I play games here to fap. And once I start fapping, even if the dialogue is good I'll lose interest as my boner is waning and I start wanting to skip to the action. Like, if there's no sex or sexy scenes, you should at least be making the dialogue sexy / teasing / some imagery here and there to keep up our chubs.

With that being said, I do think the action could be slowed down a slight bit, and some of the characters are a little too direct in a porn-logicy way (Mom's friend, the one step-sister), but at the same time, I understand it's a porn game, so some porn-logic is okay here and there.

If I were to remake the story, I would have it focus a bit more on the MC and his girlfriends relationship at first, have her be the tease she is and tease the MC about being shared while also teasing the MC for sex. Have the sisters and other people introduced more as characters and then corrupted by some friends or by overhearing the MC and Vi having sex etc. before they're trying to fuck their 'step' brother. But as I said, it's a porn game, so I don't mind the fast-pace.

i 100% get what you mean but not every game needs a slow burn. for example: the sai/vi trying on clothes scene happens very early in this game and is hot as fuck, it didn't take months and months of buildup for us to get a satisfying tease scene like that.

i think a some games focus on making you really feel the RELATIONSHIP between the MC and his GF, but a little bit of that goes a LONG way. you can string out the teases as long as they are filled with NTS-y teasing and dirty talk, i just find the vanilla relationship stuff totally boring in this genre. in fact i think you can string things along too long and the taboo effect gets diminished because you've been thinking about it too long - if we see 10 sex scenes of Vi with the MC before we see her getting plugged by the neighbors, seeing her naked and riding strange dick will not be as exciting

agree with you on the horny neighbor though, she came on a little strong lol

 

[Yougiblack]

Come on, are games between couples, everybody do it.

Yeah when they have freaky SO, let alone SO. Cries in single

 

[Lovely Dani]

Yeah when they have freaky SO, let alone SO. Cries in single

Man I love you, you made my day

 

[Yougiblack]

I checked now that the update speed of this game is also excellent, it has updated 4 times in 2 months!! this is amazing

Don't jinx it now buddy.

 

[Fanrunia]

Yeh, the creator has said that "For now his game is a Virtual Novel ( nothing will be avoidable )", so no choices for now, but hopefully that means he plans to add more later to flesh things out. I'm personally fine with it since it means you see 100% of the content instead of getting it spread around 30 different branches that barely advance between updates.

I've seen visual novels that never get finished because too many routes take up too many resources. I am fine with no choices because then you get more story.

 

[Alexus87]

Totally agree with having a linear story at first. Keeps the story on track and makes life easier for the developer.

I love the game and I really wish for it to not be a short one and not to die like so many other great games. *crossingfingers

 

[CircleGames]

Totally agree with having a linear story at first. Keeps the story on track and makes life easier for the developer.

I love the game and I really wish for it to not be a short one and not to die like so many other great games. *crossingfingers

It will be long most likely and I have intentions of finishing no matter what, even if I need to make the story shorter... chapter 3 already looking good

 

[every10min]

It will be long most likely and I have intentions of finishing no matter what, even if I need to make the story shorter... chapter 3 already looking good

Will there be any player-choice in whether or not the MC/Violet stays NTS or also strays into NTR? Personally, I prefer NTR, but NTS for "teasing only I swear" but then actual NTR/cheating in secret might be the most hot. =P

Even if that is not the primary path, might we get a bonus path after the project is complete?

 

[CircleGames]

Will there be any player-choice in whether or not the MC/Violet stays NTS or also strays into NTR? Personally, I prefer NTR, but NTS for "teasing only I swear" but then actual NTR/cheating in secret might be the most hot. =P

Even if that is not the primary path, might we get a bonus path after the project is complete?

We will see

 

[palmtrees89]

Been trying my hands on some fan-art. Actually fun playing around with prompts and wait for the results. Like unwrapping Christmas presents...

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This game needs a fan-art thread!

 

[Jdsiis]

I think it would be smart to keep the MC on his toes regarding potential NTR. The MC is young and inexperienced and playing with his jealousy would also keep the player on their toes as well.

You could potentially keep the player in the dark, for example, have times where we see or hear some shady things that Vi has been doing but without any confirmation. The MC/player could be teased by Vi regarding the unknown situations.


I also want to see the MC teased about:
- larger cocks (MC's is a good size)
- his performance in bed (I don't think MC should be bad, just inexperienced and that other guys have more knowledge and may be better)
- other girls (teasing MC about finding other girls attractive)
- incest (teasing MC about finding his step sisters / mom hot and wanting to fuck them)
- his friends (teasing him about his friends being good looking, wanting to fuck them)
- threesomes / group sex (both mfm / mff etc.)
- If the story goes to a new school year, fucking the teachers
- Streaming / camming / Onlyfans content (teasing MC about the comments and requests)
- Beaches and swimsuits / exhibitionism
- Cheating
- Other guys being more attracive

I'd also like to see some fights between the MC and Vi for some makeup sex and areas that are unknown (did she fuck x while we were on break etc)

With rising jealousy, fights between MC and other guys. Maybe the girls fight as well.

EDIT: Just to be clear, obviously these suggestions would start slow and and ramp up with time.

 

[idkmanerally]

I think it would be smart to keep the MC on his toes regarding potential NTR. The MC is young and inexperienced and playing with his jealousy would also keep the player on their toes as well.

You could potentially keep the player in the dark, for example, have times where we see or hear some shady things that Vi has been doing but without any confirmation. The MC/player could be teased by Vi regarding the unknown situations.


I also want to see the MC teased about:
- larger cocks (MC's is a good size)
- his performance in bed (I don't think MC should be bad, just inexperienced and that other guys have more knowledge and may be better)
- other girls (teasing MC about finding other girls attractive)
- incest (teasing MC about finding his step sisters / mom hot and wanting to fuck them)
- his friends (teasing him about his friends being good looking, wanting to fuck them)
- threesomes / group sex (both mfm / mff etc.)
- If the story goes to a new school year, fucking the teachers
- Streaming / camming / Onlyfans content (teasing MC about the comments and requests)
- Beaches and swimsuits / exhibitionism
- Cheating
- Other guys being more attracive

I'd also like to see some fights between the MC and Vi for some makeup sex and areas that are unknown (did she fuck x while we were on break etc)

With rising jealousy, fights between MC and other guys. Maybe the girls fight as well.

EDIT: Just to be clear, obviously these suggestions would start slow and and ramp up with time.

this guy fucking gets it

 

[kialera]

Personally, I hope that the game stays NTS till the end. The genre is already niche and it's way too common to see promising NTS works end in NTR. It's also super common to see NTR fans pushing authors and devs to turn NTS works into NTR which gets old really fast.

 

[peteraw]

Been trying my hands on some fan-art. Actually fun playing around with prompts and wait for the results. Like unwrapping Christmas presents...

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This game needs a fan-art thread!

Please try some more !

 

[Yougiblack]

Been trying my hands on some fan-art. Actually fun playing around with prompts and wait for the results. Like unwrapping Christmas presents...

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This game needs a fan-art thread!

It's nice surely but feels bit off since it's a total other art style. The other dude's fanart was on point