VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch.5 v3] [CircleGames]

[SymbioticLife]

I didn't say no one complained. But no one in the discord is having a meltdown like people in this thread are. But I would say they aren't even complaining. They just don't want to see Anya become a instant slut. Even the people that "complained" in discord still enjoyed the update. They aren't running around claiming CG is going to lose tons of supporters.

That much is 100% true! I don't think the sky is falling, I think there were some mistakes made in the writing and I addressed my thoughts on that in a productive way. CG already did tell us on the discord - as you might be aware - that Anya will be waking up feeling guilty about this.

The weirdest idea I see being pushed is that this in anyway means Anya suddenly doesn't care about Eric. Which... is just a complete fantasy people have decided to make up and start freaking out about.

 

[FatYoda]

CG already confirmed on the discord almost immediately that the plan from the start was for Anya to wake up hungover and feeling guilty about what happened. Her story with Eric isn't over, people need to stop acting like the sky has fallen.



This is also not quite entirely true, if you take a glance at the chapter 6 ideas thread there is more negative feedback on the handling of Anya specifically than I've seen previously on any other topic. Myself I'm not overly upset, but the writing was a bit poor at the end I think, perhaps a little overcooked.

See, this is what i wanna see. It's the only thing that makes sense for her character. Rob already came, so i honestly wouldnt be surprised if the scene was just over.

 

[SymbioticLife]

The Anya pov was always going to have people on the fence , did I massively enjoy it .... Meh I seen it more as a means to an end to help bring her out of her shell to open up her story as her suppressed general sexual desires are now somewhat more loose making her more open to the idea of her and Eric

So I don't see it as NTR at all , they aren't together and outside of the crush being there nothing has happened as of yet so it can't fit with NTR

It's like getting mad at your crush because she's dated in the past , like yes people have a preference but ultimately she doesn't owe you anything at that current moment there's nothing remotely romantic in a physical aspect that's happened yet so really at the end of the day you don't get a say

But to have the mind set in a game like this that every woman owes you something when nothing definitively set in stone it walks a dangerous line to some dangerous behaviours

That's my view on the matter personally

It would be absurd for Eric - the character - to be mad about this (or anyone in his place). That being said it makes sense for the viewer to feel somewhat NTR'd (to a lesser degree) because we are privy to Anya's thoughts - something Eric is very much not - so we know how much she cares about him on a deeper level. That being said I didn't mind almost all of the scene, it really was that ending that just didn't feel quite right. It was poor writing and I say that as a huge defender of CG and somebody who respects his work.

She literally went from being super shy about a dick pic to talking about getting the guys cock on her face and filming it in what, 30 minutes? It was bad writing. It happens. I don't somehow think this means CG can't do better in the future. I still have a ton of respect for his work, but I think it's good to be honest about when writing is bad.

 

[FatYoda]

The Anya pov was always going to have people on the fence , did I massively enjoy it .... Meh I seen it more as a means to an end to help bring her out of her shell to open up her story as her suppressed general sexual desires are now somewhat more loose making her more open to the idea of her and Eric

So I don't see it as NTR at all , they aren't together and outside of the crush being there nothing has happened as of yet so it can't fit with NTR

It's like getting mad at your crush because she's dated in the past , like yes people have a preference but ultimately she doesn't owe you anything at that current moment there's nothing remotely romantic in a physical aspect that's happened yet so really at the end of the day you don't get a say

But to have the mind set in a game like this that every woman owes you something when nothing definitively set in stone it walks a dangerous line to some dangerous behaviours

That's my view on the matter personally

I don't really see anyone in this game not named VI as NTR really. Maybe Anya A BIT since she was so deeply interested in MC, but it's not too bad. I can work through that one. I still hope MC is first, actually to be completely honest i would like it if Anya was all NTS too (which is why i'm kinda hoping he splits her path and has both), but i'm not gonna lose sleep over it if she's not, i'll like it nearly as much either way. I do wish the mC would take more of a pro-active role in the VI scenes. I want him to push it not her friends. The best NTS is when the MC is the one pushing/corrupting his GF. I also want some DP threesomes where he's one of the dicks. He has seemed a bit passive the last 2 updates...which is fine cause it's new to him, but i hope he comes out of his shell too.

 

[ilkit1234]

The Anya pov was always going to have people on the fence , did I massively enjoy it .... Meh I seen it more as a means to an end to help bring her out of her shell to open up her story as her suppressed general sexual desires are now somewhat more loose making her more open to the idea of her and Eric

So I don't see it as NTR at all , they aren't together and outside of the crush being there nothing has happened as of yet so it can't fit with NTR

It's like getting mad at your crush because she's dated in the past , like yes people have a preference but ultimately she doesn't owe you anything at that current moment there's nothing remotely romantic in a physical aspect that's happened yet so really at the end of the day you don't get a say

But to have the mind set in a game like this that every woman owes you something when nothing definitively set in stone it walks a dangerous line to some dangerous behaviours

That's my view on the matter personally

I agree 100%. That's why i'm against people saying MC is a super cuck etc. I'm not an NTR fan at all, but I have no issues with it being in the game.

This DLC was one specific scene and there are plenty of chapters to go to see how things continue to develop. Anya and MC will clearly have their time together. But I also think people are going to be very disappointed if they think Anya should be exclusive to MC and remain innocent through the entire story.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

It would be absurd for Eric - the character - to be mad about this (or anyone in his place). That being said it makes sense for the viewer to feel somewhat NTR'd because we are privy to Anya's thoughts - something Eric is very much not - so we know how much she cares about him on a deeper level. That being said I didn't mind almost all of the scene, it really was that ending that just didn't feel quite right. It was poor writing and I say that as a huge defender of CG and somebody who respects his work.

She literally went from being super shy about a dick pic to talking about getting the guys cock on her face and filming it in what, 30 minutes? It was bad writing. It happens. I don't somehow think this means CG can't do better in the future. I still have a lot of respect for his work, but I think it's good to be honest about when writing is bad.

I agree with this I think it was mainly to act as a gap filler/back story / act as a sexual awakening for Anya.

Do I think it could of been written better in the aspect that she still wants Eric but is also curious about other people absolutely

The main thing that irk'd me was it had an odd sexual Blair witch project vibe to it with Anya acting as the director haha

Plus with the consensus that Anya is pure and a virgin it does feel like it goes to much in to the porn logic trope around her interest with robs dick and does give the impression that outside of her wanting/ banging Eric that she's going to be some brain-dead snowbunny where someone says jump and she says how high

So it definitely could of been done better

 

[ilkit1234]

The main thing that irk'd me was it had an odd sexual Blair witch project vibe to it with Anya acting as the director haha

this is perfect

 

[FatYoda]

I agree 100%. That's why i'm against people saying MC is a super cuck etc. I'm not an NTR fan at all, but I have no issues with it being in the game.

This DLC was one specific scene and there are plenty of chapters to go to see how things continue to develop. Anya and MC will clearly have their time together. But I also think people are going to be very disappointed if they think Anya should be exclusive to MC and remain innocent through the entire story.

I think part of me wanted to be the one to corrupt little Anya. Vi's relationship has been her and her friends corrupting MC, but hopefully he comes out of his passive phase soon and we can corrupt Anya ourselves...although Maki has absolutely already started it. But maybe that's what Anya needs to push her over the top so she finally makes a pass at MC.

 

[Sossse]

These were the more popular ones... but there were a lot more.

this posts summe up everything i tried to convey in a nutshell (not rly since they are even more even longer that what i have posted here lol). for every other girl it makes total sence:

erics "step"-mom: frustrated housewive that just wants to get railed. suner or later eric and the BBChusband will have a turn. no complains there.

maki (older "step"-sister): as much a slut as they come, nobody care about her body count, it´s what she is ment to be

aki: the slut gf´s best friend that helps her "get out of her shell", she has her perpous but eventually she can be fu**ed by whoever, nobody cares, its her thing to fuck everabody

anya: here is the caviar; she is the only girl in this vn alongside VI who has been shown to be a bit "harder to conquerer". lets be honest, everyone else in the cast are just sluts with a different nametagd attached to them. anya is the one "innocent flower" who seemed to have a different aggende then the rest. that beeing that she has a real love interesset (the MC) parred with the taboo that said love interessed is her "step brother" made her rather intriguing for people like me. she was sticking out in a sea if obvious sluts.
but this scene with rob just robbs her (no pun intended) of all this ingenuity. maybe alle the ppl screaming she was never erics are right and i am to dramatic. but its a testamony to the excellence of this VN that i go the extra mile and try to express why im so dissapointed in the last scene with anya and rob. anya was the one girl i genuinely wish would just be happy with eric. seeing her beeing taken way by a casual BBC pic just feels so of-putting.
i still think the game overall is incredible well made, itßs rly just anyas char development that bugs me so much. hope i could makeit clear

 

[ilkit1234]

I think part of me wanted to be the one to corrupt little Anya. Vi's relationship has been her and her friends corrupting MC, but hopefully he comes out of his passive phase soon and we can corrupt Anya ourselves...although Maki has absolutely already started it. But maybe that's what Anya needs to push her over the top so she finally makes a pass at MC.

I'm thinking we will see MC corrupt Anya a bit when they go shopping. And I hope Anya teases him a bit in return.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

this is perfect

Glad to see I'm not the only one that thought this hahaha

 

[Chaoticjustice]

Question have we met Eric's mum/step mum? I remember the scene with rob shagging one with Anya watching but I thought that was his own stepmum been a while since I've done a full play through

 

[ilkit1234]

Question have we met Eric's mum/step mum? I remember the scene with rob shagging one with Anya watching but I thought that was his own stepmum been a while since I've done a full play through

Step mom is the busty blonde. She was in the pool scene in CH 5

 

[ilkit1234]

this posts summe up everything i tried to convey in a nutshell (not rly since they are even more even longer that what i have posted here lol). for every other girl it makes total sence:

erics "step"-mom: frustrated housewive that just wants to get railed. suner or later eric and the BBChusband will have a turn. no complains there.

maki (older "step"-sister): as much a slut as they come, nobody care about her body count, it´s what she is ment to be

aki: the slut gf´s best friend that helps her "get out of her shell", she has her perpous but eventually she can be fu**ed by whoever, nobody cares, its her thing to fuck everabody

anya: here is the caviar; she is the only girl in this vn alongside VI who has been shown to be a bit "harder to conquerer". lets be honest, everyone else in the cast are just sluts with a different nametagd attached to them. anya is the one "innocent flower" who seemed to have a different aggende then the rest. that beeing that she has a real love interesset (the MC) parred with the taboo that said love interessed is her "step brother" made her rather intriguing for people like me. she was sticking out in a sea if obvious sluts.
but this scene with rob just robbs her (no pun intended) of all this ingenuity. maybe alle the ppl screaming she was never erics are right and i am to dramatic. but its a testamony to the excellence of this VN that i go the extra mile and try to express why im so dissapointed in the last scene with anya and rob. anya was the one girl i genuinely wish would just be happy with eric. seeing her beeing taken way by a casual BBC pic just feels so of-putting.
i still think the game overall is incredible well made, itßs rly just anyas char development that bugs me so much. hope i could makeit clear

I appreciate your explanation and can see your perspective. I think it makes a lot of sense having it put this way.

 

[Chaoticjustice]

this posts summe up everything i tried to convey in a nutshell (not rly since they are even more even longer that what i have posted here lol). for every other girl it makes total sence:

erics "step"-mom: frustrated housewive that just wants to get railed. suner or later eric and the BBChusband will have a turn. no complains there.

maki (older "step"-sister): as much a slut as they come, nobody care about her body count, it´s what she is ment to be

aki: the slut gf´s best friend that helps her "get out of her shell", she has her perpous but eventually she can be fu**ed by whoever, nobody cares, its her thing to fuck everabody

anya: here is the caviar; she is the only girl in this vn alongside VI who has been shown to be a bit "harder to conquerer". lets be honest, everyone else in the cast are just sluts with a different nametagd attached to them. anya is the one "innocent flower" who seemed to have a different aggende then the rest. that beeing that she has a real love interesset (the MC) parred with the taboo that said love interessed is her "step brother" made her rather intriguing for people like me. she was sticking out in a sea if obvious sluts.
but this scene with rob just robbs her (no pun intended) of all this ingenuity. maybe alle the ppl screaming she was never erics are right and i am to dramatic. but its a testamony to the excellence of this VN that i go the extra mile and try to express why im so dissapointed in the last scene with anya and rob. anya was the one girl i genuinely wish would just be happy with eric. seeing her beeing taken way by a casual BBC pic just feels so of-putting.
i still think the game overall is incredible well made, itßs rly just anyas char development that bugs me so much. hope i could makeit clear

Just on the topic of maki during the whole build up that scene she has the the power she's in control , the moment a cock enters her mouth ... Completely braindead like what's that about given the she is a slut I didn't think it worked overly well I would of said it needs to be one or the other

Plus it's not the first time we have seen her show some dominance like she portrays mistress vibes almost up untill the act it's self then it's like the lights are on but no one's home haha

 

[ilkit1234]

Just on the topic of maki during the whole build up that scene she has the the power she's in control , the moment a cock enters her mouth ... Completely braindead like what's that about given the she is a slut I didn't think it worked overly well I would of said it needs to be one or the other

Plus it's not the first time we have seen her show some dominance like she portrays mistress vibes almost up untill the act it's self then it's like the lights are on but no one's home haha

I like the idea of Maki being submissive to BBC, but not giving over power to Anya in the way that she did. I like seeing Maki dominant and teasing with others, especially MC, like how we saw with the beach handjob scene.

 

[Sossse]

Plus it's not the first time we have seen her show some dominance like she portrays mistress vibes almost up untill the act it's self then it's like the lights are on but no one's home haha

i thing it goes well with the overall theme of the VN (and to make it clear it´s a theme im soooo tired of, but i guess it still has a hudge audience), that beeing that: having a higher skin pegmentation = you are a superiour human beeing.

yes, maki is dominant and in controll with ever other human beeing, but as soon as a BBC wielder gets hold of her.. you know.. the same thing as in every cuck interracial during the last 30 years.. *yawn*
the most dissapointment comes from thinking this VN could be something else. i mean: i rly think i have seen it all and i rly hoped this would be something different, but of course not

 

[Chaoticjustice]

I like the idea of Maki being submissive to BBC, but not giving over power to Anya in the way that she did. I like seeing Maki dominant and teasing with others, especially MC, like how we saw with the beach handjob scene.

I get that but surely it's an all or nothing situation and I know there's obviously porn logic applied I just found it odd to see such a shift in power that swiftly

 

[Chaoticjustice]

i thing it goes well with the overall theme of the VN (and to make it clear it´s a theme im soooo tired of, but i guess it still has a hudge audience), that beeing that: having a higher skin pegmentation = you are a superiour human beeing.

yes, maki is dominant and in controll with ever other human beeing, but as soon as a BBC wielder gets hold of her.. you know.. the same thing as in every cuck interracial durint the last 30 years.. *yawn*
the most dissapointment comes from thinking this VN vould be something else. i mea: i rly think i have seen it all and i rly hoped this would be something different, but if course not

I get that it is tiring/frustrating to see the same tropes over and over

And it's a shame with maki and your BBC view if it plays out that way as she would of made one hell on a mistress haha

Now I'm gonna put out a charged question here and hopefully not start a war haha

Now this question is NOT directly aimed at this avn but avns as a whole

Do you think we are letting porn logic away with to much and just be the reason for anything, rather than speaking up and saying that it's lazy writing and a half assed scene or avn?

So my view is that porn logic is key to avns but I think we let that same logic away with far to much when there is an actual issue with writing or the story or to many gaps appear and it's down to the readers imagination to fill the gaps

Curious to see what everyone says and like I said I'm not here to start a war haha

 

[Fitharia]

See, this is what i wanna see. It's the only thing that makes sense for her character. Rob already came, so i honestly wouldnt be surprised if the scene was just over.

I think the scene is over too, as it looks Anya already moving away again. But it could be a cliffhanger, but I doubt if more happen Anya would not go further then a handjob, as that was what she first wondered, how her tiny hands would feel around Rob's cock. Also people didn't seem to read well either when they panic, Maki said clearly to Rob, that he isn't the only big dick out there, refering to her brother's dick, why? Well Maki knows Anya has a big crush on Eric, and she plan it all to corrupt her so Anya would finaly break and admit how bad she wants Eric eventualy, Rob is just partialy a tool to help.