True, but just plain "Yeah, you get her, stud!" from the bf is also cringe as hell. And - what's more important - don't give you any growth in emotions at all.Excellent so far. I hope after MC and Vi showing they both have the same kinks, he doesn't go back to being a nervous passive MC. The swingers where the boyfriend just goes "Uh... I guess..." is so cliche.
While I agree that a wet blanket for MC is not really the best view to look at, I really hope that both gf and bf would be jealous of each other
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- only horny one - and that jealousy won't just *poof* and go away.In the end, jealousy is a pretty big part of what's going on here.
But - at least for now - it's one of the strongest starts for a game on this whole site.
So my kudos to the author.