Pr0GamerJohnny
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Generally, I liked it a lot and have no issues with it overall, especially in the context of the story so far.
That said, I had only one quibble based solely on my own personal preferences: I'm a pretty big fan of all things NTR/NTS (sharing, swinging, cheating, corruption, etc.) and while I don't mind cuck content, I don't care much for the straight humiliation aspect of it. In Sai's case, maybe the extent to which he's into that was (intentionally or unintentionally) misrepresented, but he didn't seem like he was having a great time, and I didn't like that aspect much. Like, Ari leaving him hanging to help Vi with MC was great, and I'm sure he enjoyed *that* aspect of it, but Ari piling on the insults seemed a bit over the top (to me) based on what we know of their relationship to this point.
I mean, yeah, he got off in the end, but it almost seemed like mean for the sake of being mean. Some guys love that, and that's great. I'm not convinced Sai's one of them, and that was a bit uncomfortable ... but not enough to ruin the scene.![]()
Yup, those were pretty much my thoughts, on the whole I enjoyed it, but the over-the-top taunting took away from the hotness. It'd be different if Sai was more into it, nervous but cheering them on. For me the sticking point was less Ari taunting and more MC kinda playing the role of a fuckboi getting sucked by a rando's gf, not his best friend's gf.I also thought Sai humiliations were a bit much. I mean, I generally don't care that much about that kind of things if it fits the overall story, but MNG is soo careful about the ego of the MC, and in my eyes the game regularly sends the message to the player "it's a very sensitive subject warning". But somehow if it's your friend and not you, the game goes all out in a complete U turn. Weird.
That being said, if the author has some particular kinks they want to explore (like big dicks vs small peepee(actually average)), I think they should just do it. Very often, a story feels more natural and raw (thus enjoyable to me) if they don't try to cater to any crowd seeing things differently. Devs always do to some degree though, but it's generally better when it's kept to a minimum.
You bring up a good point fabulous, the juxtaposition between having little empathy for treating others badly and simultaneously having an mc/narration sensitive to slights against him, too much of that and it starts feeling like you're playing 'incel simulator 2000'.
For sure that's not the bulk of game now, this was just one small scene I would have written differently.