She's gonna be a whore
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Damn right, and that's exactly what I signed up for lol, I don't really care the outcome for Eric tbh
i wanna see her having fun, having sex being a sexy slut. Riding cock 24/7
One big-dick after another, if you will.
At this rate probably sometime circa 2028
The most problematic thing for me is very action of changing your scenes and concepts because of feedbacks, multiples times. Creatively it's not really a good sign. Even if the game remains very fun so far.
palmtrees89
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Yeah, this pretty much.
I can see why the thread is somewhat divided on the chapter, but the pacing is fine I think. What's missing is the money-shot in the final scene with Eric + Ari (not the first time unfortunately) and us being able to see what went down during the photoshoot - plus a proper ending to the chapter. A couple images at the start and Anya's date are in need of polishing IMO.
But all in all, the chapter was really nice with good progression. The Deviant brand introduction was well done and one can tell alot of work went into creating it. Jack's introduction was overdue, and Kira adds flavor to the female cast. They seem to have a somewhat similar dynamic to Eric+Vi, except Jack doesn't really know how to handle it yet.
I think the few flaws are caused by CG biting off more than he could chew in the time he gave himself. His hopes were to release something in July, mind you. I've said it many months ago, but for his own sake he should prolly find a balance between quality and quantity so not to run into these issues so much. Me personally, I think a chapter with 250ish images would be optimal. He's trying to go bigger and better every time - and while I can totally get behind that, it can be problematic. Ch05 had that issue with 2 DLC's, Ch06 has that issue aswell considering he's working on a finished version with another scene for the next weeks. My suggestion would be to tone the size down somewhat to be able to manage the workload instead of having to release content before it's fully ready. But ay, it's his game. That's just what I think.
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I'll just drop a piece of my mind here, even though there were already a few decent feedbacks pointing out some problems.
Personally I think Dev is giving a solid focus and amount on the teasing parts (there could be some additional things added here and there) for buildup, but the actuall scene execution seems to be often kinda lacking or are presented (visualy)not satisfying or lets say "confusing" / not hiting the mark?
For example the scene in the club where Vi helps with her hand when Ari suck baldie , the teasing while dancing with baldie, they are very well thought and executed scenes/buildups. The scene where girls blow both guys is also well made however I think the finishing touch to it should have Vi moving to baldie kneeling next to him and use her hands to finish him off on her tits and legs as a finall tease for Eric and some humilitation dialog for baldie (since the scene was already set in such way of humiliating him). I don't think it would affect in any negative way the whole scene or push it too far (even more so with the way chapter 6 was going)
The chapter 6 photoshoot, it could have slightly more teasing in it where her final outfit after she takes top off she turn around like with the bunny suit scene pulling 1 off her ass cheek, she could do full ass spread (maybe with a detail of getting wet? or costume slightly diggin in her pussy?) and then Luke comes in.
The scene where Erik is banging Ari is good but the part with showing pictures is in my opinion the bad executed part, is it because they had so much closeup? or was the blonde hair confusing?(assuming it was actually Vi and not different similiar looking character) I think both.
Because why would she even wear a wig there ? if its her taking pictures with phone(reason for closeup?) for Ari then there is no point for the wig, if its for the web once again why the wig? the only time her face was hidden was on the second web "blacked" but her clothes were more of the 1st web (these kind of questions were popping up)
So I think the pictures Ari was showing to Eric could've been more visually expressed
I know that balancing these things is very difficult because the flow change with every chapter so you don't want to push too far or not stall something too much in some parts or different characters.
But I think personally that paying extra attention whenever you do something around the main couple you don't want to cut it short, especially when you get to the important breaking points, atleast fill some gaps with some more teasing content so that some scenes don't feel too short/rushed/lacking
Holding back and not rushing something is all fine but just give more teasing stuff in return
I think the game is great, I assume its just 1 dev? (even more applaud for that)
Even if it's not on my top list (still can't figure out what bothers me)
I wish the dev all good, keep up the good work
Personally I think Dev is giving a solid focus and amount on the teasing parts (there could be some additional things added here and there) for buildup, but the actuall scene execution seems to be often kinda lacking or are presented (visualy)not satisfying or lets say "confusing" / not hiting the mark?
For example the scene in the club where Vi helps with her hand when Ari suck baldie , the teasing while dancing with baldie, they are very well thought and executed scenes/buildups. The scene where girls blow both guys is also well made however I think the finishing touch to it should have Vi moving to baldie kneeling next to him and use her hands to finish him off on her tits and legs as a finall tease for Eric and some humilitation dialog for baldie (since the scene was already set in such way of humiliating him). I don't think it would affect in any negative way the whole scene or push it too far (even more so with the way chapter 6 was going)
The chapter 6 photoshoot, it could have slightly more teasing in it where her final outfit after she takes top off she turn around like with the bunny suit scene pulling 1 off her ass cheek, she could do full ass spread (maybe with a detail of getting wet? or costume slightly diggin in her pussy?) and then Luke comes in.
The scene where Erik is banging Ari is good but the part with showing pictures is in my opinion the bad executed part, is it because they had so much closeup? or was the blonde hair confusing?(assuming it was actually Vi and not different similiar looking character) I think both.
Because why would she even wear a wig there ? if its her taking pictures with phone(reason for closeup?) for Ari then there is no point for the wig, if its for the web once again why the wig? the only time her face was hidden was on the second web "blacked" but her clothes were more of the 1st web (these kind of questions were popping up)
So I think the pictures Ari was showing to Eric could've been more visually expressed
I know that balancing these things is very difficult because the flow change with every chapter so you don't want to push too far or not stall something too much in some parts or different characters.
But I think personally that paying extra attention whenever you do something around the main couple you don't want to cut it short, especially when you get to the important breaking points, atleast fill some gaps with some more teasing content so that some scenes don't feel too short/rushed/lacking
Holding back and not rushing something is all fine but just give more teasing stuff in return
I think the game is great, I assume its just 1 dev? (even more applaud for that)
Even if it's not on my top list (still can't figure out what bothers me)
I wish the dev all good, keep up the good work
Good write up here on your personal thoughts and feelings. I have gone on about my own thoughts here so will not repeat. But towards your last point, the only thing for me about this game is cemented in the post above yours.I think the game is great, I assume its just 1 dev? (even more applaud for that)
Even if it's not on my top list (still can't figure out what bothers me)
I wish the dev all good, keep up the good work
This here is essentially the issue. The Dev has not outright said what this game is going to be. Is it a couple exploring a sexual adventure? Is it the corruption of VI into a complete whore? What is it? And so, there are a lot of "factions" with different goals in mind here. Everyone knows that VI is going to have a lot of sex with multiple partners. But there are degrees to that. There is also how her relationship with Eric evolves. For some that is a meaningful thing, for some it something that must be actively discarded. So anytime the writing seemingly goes away from one of the above paths, that group becomes confused on the direction which leads to it not hitting home. If you at least knew a vague notion of the direction you could move away from the uncertainty and give it a proper placement on said list.
I don't really have problem with the direction, I like some unexpected stuff happening so that for sure is not my reason on game not hiting my top fav list.
Maybe it's the style that don't sit well with me (there were some parts where guys looked kinda girlish for me)
Maybe it's because characters are recognizable (so they don't feel really original?) I really can't tell what it is because I think genuinely it should be on my fav list
So once again direction is not my problem, maybe because I have quite wide range and dont self insert so if it has swinging/nts/ntr stuff in it, doesn't bother me
The only thing that usually bothers me is when some scenes/events have some wasted potential by having less than they could or should have.
But once again, that's not a easy stuff to balance out because it keeps shifting depending on the pacing and story progression
"We reached important breaking point scene in this chapter 3 for main couple so in next one we need to back off with it a little and push other side stuff together with main story now and also prepare new characters that will make appearance because in chapter 5 we will have another important breaking point scene so we will have to put more focus and work on it and less on the side stuff but we also need to keep focus on main story so we cut even more on the side stuff this time and focus on them again in chapter 6 together with another breaking point scene so chapter 6 will have less story progression"
this is a VERY simplified example of how planning can go and the question is how much focus and work is decided in some of those parts to make them work/entertaining/progress story/interesting/and so on, within the time frame they have
Solution? increase the time frame, negativity of it? you have to wait longer for chapter, another negativity of it? more people screaming that devs are milking!
Or I'm just full of shit and don't really know what I'm talking about (I'm serious, I'm just a random guy)
Keep it on the reasonable side and give good honest feedbacks
Maybe it's the style that don't sit well with me (there were some parts where guys looked kinda girlish for me)
Maybe it's because characters are recognizable (so they don't feel really original?) I really can't tell what it is because I think genuinely it should be on my fav list
So once again direction is not my problem, maybe because I have quite wide range and dont self insert so if it has swinging/nts/ntr stuff in it, doesn't bother me
The only thing that usually bothers me is when some scenes/events have some wasted potential by having less than they could or should have.
But once again, that's not a easy stuff to balance out because it keeps shifting depending on the pacing and story progression
"We reached important breaking point scene in this chapter 3 for main couple so in next one we need to back off with it a little and push other side stuff together with main story now and also prepare new characters that will make appearance because in chapter 5 we will have another important breaking point scene so we will have to put more focus and work on it and less on the side stuff but we also need to keep focus on main story so we cut even more on the side stuff this time and focus on them again in chapter 6 together with another breaking point scene so chapter 6 will have less story progression"
this is a VERY simplified example of how planning can go and the question is how much focus and work is decided in some of those parts to make them work/entertaining/progress story/interesting/and so on, within the time frame they have
Solution? increase the time frame, negativity of it? you have to wait longer for chapter, another negativity of it? more people screaming that devs are milking!
Or I'm just full of shit and don't really know what I'm talking about
(I'm serious, I'm just a random guy)Keep it on the reasonable side and give good honest feedbacks
Cool deal, definitely not going to give you any guff on my end. We are all just spouting opinions here. I do like some surprises, I would not want the Dev to give away the plot. Just felt it has been a point of contention amongst those consuming the work. I have a decent range, but likely not as wide as your own. But I would not crap on the Dev if it went a certain way, would just state it is not for me, or likely that I would come back once it is complete and consume it in one go rather than in pieces.I don't really have problem with the direction, I like some unexpected stuff happening so that for sure is not my reason on game not hiting my top fav list.
Maybe it's the style that don't sit well with me (there were some parts where guys looked kinda girlish for me)
Maybe it's because characters are recognizable (so they don't feel really original?) I really can't tell what it is because I think genuinely it should be on my fav list
So once again direction is not my problem, maybe because I have quite wide range and dont self insert so if it has swinging/nts/ntr stuff in it, doesn't bother me
The only thing that usually bothers me is when some scenes/events have some wasted potential by having less than they could or should have.
But once again, that's not a easy stuff to balance out because it keeps shifting depending on the pacing and story progression
"We reached important breaking point scene in this chapter 3 for main couple so in next one we need to back off with it a little and push other side stuff together with main story now and also prepare new characters that will make appearance because in chapter 5 we will have another important breaking point scene so we will have to put more focus and work on it and less on the side stuff but we also need to keep focus on main story so we cut even more on the side stuff this time and focus on them again in chapter 6 together with another breaking point scene so chapter 6 will have less story progression"
this is a VERY simplified example of how planning can go and the question is how much focus and work is decided in some of those parts to make them work/entertaining/progress story/interesting/and so on, within the time frame they have
Solution? increase the time frame, negativity of it? you have to wait longer for chapter, another negativity of it? more people screaming that devs are milking!
Or I'm just full of shit and don't really know what I'm talking about
Keep it on the reasonable side and give good honest feedbacks
I'm ok with longer timeframes if it gives a more complete chapter. If it becomes too long, see the above, I would just stop and come back once all done. But yes, there would be comments of milking. My big focus is a good story first, then art, then passion scenes. So if it goes the "porn with pictures" route, that is usually when I step aside.
Yemog77
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The last update left a positive impression, but this one is an absolute mehhhh. Eric literally has no personality and doesn't take any action himself, just goes with a flow. Looks like he's increasingly drifting into the role of a typical cuck with a chair, rather than a guy who knows what he wants, even if it's kinky stuff.
The date with Anya was horrible, absolutely fucked up potential, and as a result, the scene with Ari. She has already had the most sex scenes before this, and in my opinion, she is the worst female in the game.
Another dark-skinned guy has been introduced. How many are there already? 3-4? And considering that we were reminded how Eriс is turned on by blacked, and assessing how events can develop further, It seems like the overall game isn't balanced in regard to kinks, and it has one headliner. On the positive side, there was the introduction of a dark-skinned girl, and she looks very hot.
Also, not sure if it was Violet or not. Either way, it would be nice to see a more confident Eric, who expresses his desires and limitations instead of passively reacting to everything that happens.
The date with Anya was horrible, absolutely fucked up potential, and as a result, the scene with Ari. She has already had the most sex scenes before this, and in my opinion, she is the worst female in the game.
Another dark-skinned guy has been introduced. How many are there already? 3-4? And considering that we were reminded how Eriс is turned on by blacked, and assessing how events can develop further, It seems like the overall game isn't balanced in regard to kinks, and it has one headliner. On the positive side, there was the introduction of a dark-skinned girl, and she looks very hot.
Also, not sure if it was Violet or not. Either way, it would be nice to see a more confident Eric, who expresses his desires and limitations instead of passively reacting to everything that happens.
I agree I'm bored of Eric, I want him to embrace his kink and own it (and start moving the plot through his own choices) instead of just having the story happen to him. It's a big part of why I don't identify with him and am not emotionally invested in his relationship, Vi is fun, and moves the story through her desires. Eric is just kind of there...
Count of black males is still at 3 to my recall. Two sons and 1 dad. I think this was just the reintro of the other son, we only have really talked to Rob so far.
I agree with you as well on how Eric was written here. I get that there is a balance trying to be made that does not make it seem that Vi is just taking orders from Eric. But I felt there was plenty that already showed she was not that girl. Currently the author uses Bruce to push Vi rather than Eric. Which may be the overall intent of the VN. I cannot say for sure at this point. Maybe that was a tone of the chapter that the author did not catch and so may potentially rewrite? Not sure. Cannot say I have a handle on the tone and direction of the story at this point.
The tone and direction of the story? Vi is sucking and fucking some dicks while Eric gets his too. Probably some threesomes/group sex. Not too hard to figure out in an adult VN with no choices, really. Details on exactly who and in what situations are obviously vague but at this point if it doesn't start happening soon then supporters will disappear like rats from a sinking ship...
Hah, I get that much, I do. Just going to continue to let it play out. Supporters are going to be lost no matter what, cause I don't think the current make up can all be pleased. As stated, I may just let CG finish the VN in full and then just consume it in one go, whenever that may be. Cause I don't want to be that guy demanding the pace of the development schedule.
So, I get it from this discussion that the dev indeed meant it to be Vi sucking some guy off in that photoshoot (just a tad too fast as for me) but now they back down due to feedback (lol ) and going to rewrite the scene? Could've just downplay it in the next chapter, making it as though Ari just deceived or trolled Eric by some photoshop etc. It would complement Eric's character or rather the lack of it - losing his shit and fucking Ari's brains out instead of calling Vi or going to the photoshoot to check things out. Or better yet, he should've just been at that photoshoot from the start and given consent to whatever she was going to do.
) and going to rewrite the scene? Could've just downplay it in the next chapter, making it as though Ari just deceived or trolled Eric by some photoshop etc. It would complement Eric's character or rather the lack of it - losing his shit and fucking Ari's brains out instead of calling Vi or going to the photoshoot to check things out. Or better yet, he should've just been at that photoshoot from the start and given consent to whatever she was going to do.Regardless of how Circle "changes things" going forward we still have this version of chapter 6 to compare. One of the things that not too many people mention in comments are Violet's thoughts during the photo shoot and the teasing back and forth that her and Bruce had. Even before Luke showed up I got the impression that she was willing to do whatever Bruce wanted and was going to do something naughty as she was getting turned on by being his little puppet. That photo shoot was dialogue heavy and I can't imagine him rewriting it all if he's going to significantly change the ending of the chapter. That dialogue fit with what we ended up seeing but I don't know that it would fit if he made any significant changes to what we saw.
awesomepossum
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The update was okay. Vi continues to be the most interesting character. Kind of disappointing that the major climax of the update regarding Vi is interlaced with a sex scene with Ari.
This game has introduced yet more characters, when I don't think it needed to, when the existing characters have yet to really be explored.
Unlike a few people here, I don't have an issue with pacing; I'm quite glad that things are happening, and that the kink is actually being explored.
The Anya scene was ok. I think the pace of that is fine, but I understand that the scene will be rewritten for the silver release, which is... annoying. This will be the second time that a scene with Anya is rewritten following an initial release. I think if CG is unsure on how to write Anya, she should be put on the back burner a little bit, and emphasis be put on Vi / Ari / Sai / Erik.
Vi and Anya have similar 'are being corrupted' arcs at the moment, and it feels like CG lets Vi's personality leak into Anya and then has to backtrack immediately upon release.
The final sex scene is okay. Ari is okay. I would much rather have seen a proper scene with Vi. It feels like we were robbed of a scene with Vi because of the absurd amount of animations in the Ari scene, and then there's no 'finale' for the Ari scene...
CG needs to stop with the cliffhangers; they're awkward.
Also, the wig was a horrific decision, sorry.
I am once again advocating for fewer animations so the updates can come out a tad quicker, which I think would majorly make up for the relative snail pace of the unfolding of the characters' relationships.
Rating: high 4 - low 5 /10.
This game has introduced yet more characters, when I don't think it needed to, when the existing characters have yet to really be explored.
Unlike a few people here, I don't have an issue with pacing; I'm quite glad that things are happening, and that the kink is actually being explored.
The Anya scene was ok. I think the pace of that is fine, but I understand that the scene will be rewritten for the silver release, which is... annoying. This will be the second time that a scene with Anya is rewritten following an initial release. I think if CG is unsure on how to write Anya, she should be put on the back burner a little bit, and emphasis be put on Vi / Ari / Sai / Erik.
Vi and Anya have similar 'are being corrupted' arcs at the moment, and it feels like CG lets Vi's personality leak into Anya and then has to backtrack immediately upon release.
The final sex scene is okay. Ari is okay. I would much rather have seen a proper scene with Vi. It feels like we were robbed of a scene with Vi because of the absurd amount of animations in the Ari scene, and then there's no 'finale' for the Ari scene...
CG needs to stop with the cliffhangers; they're awkward.
Also, the wig was a horrific decision, sorry.
I am once again advocating for fewer animations so the updates can come out a tad quicker, which I think would majorly make up for the relative snail pace of the unfolding of the characters' relationships.
Rating: high 4 - low 5 /10.
To me it looked like Luke's arrival kinda cooled down the atmosphere at the shoot, and I was expecting that he just would touch Vi in places and strike poses with some teasing from Vi. But it was just a photoshoot for a (lewd) clothes brand, if I remember it right? It escalating into Vi giving blowjob to Luke or Bruce, especially without us (players) and Eric (to a lesser degree) witnessing it was really not the best move.
Vi isn't just 'being corrupted', she's on a full-on 'ready to be whored out' train