VN Ren'Py My New Girlfriend [Ch.6 Final] [CircleGames]

[yourmomma]

Regardless of how Circle "changes things" going forward we still have this version of chapter 6 to compare. One of the things that not too many people mention in comments are Violet's thoughts during the photo shoot and the teasing back and forth that her and Bruce had. Even before Luke showed up I got the impression that she was willing to do whatever Bruce wanted and was going to do something naughty as she was getting turned on by being his little puppet. That photo shoot was dialogue heavy and I can't imagine him rewriting it all if he's going to significantly change the ending of the chapter. That dialogue fit with what we ended up seeing but I don't know that it would fit if he made any significant changes to what we saw.

Exactly this. The lead up was one of the beginning scenes where we first discovered Vi had a healthy sexual appetite. Later at the club we discover she likes getting attention from men and willung to act on her own.

At the first photoshoot we discover she's gets turned on thinking about how many men will fantasize about her seeing her pics.

Second photoshoot she first is amazed at the attention she's getting on Social Media then gets aroused by the DM's she reads. Which already heighten her mood going into the photoshoot. Then during the photoshoot she gets really excited with the thought of becoming a pornstar and how free and excited she felt.

People who think her blowjob scene came too soon aren't paying attention to the dialogue and that she was already a slut.

 

[palmtrees89]

There was this one line of dialogue right before Luke's walking in on them. Something along the lines of; "Bruce, I thought maybe we could..." -> Luke disrupts 'em. Wonder what she was gonna say there.

 

[yourmomma]

There was this one line of dialogue right before Luke's walking in on them. Something along the lines of; "Bruce, I thought maybe we could..." -> Luke disrupts 'em. Wonder what she was gonna say there.

Bake a cake and join a prayer group.

 

[palmtrees89]

Bake a cake and join a prayer group.

Praise the lord!

 

[el diablo rojo]

To me it looked like Luke's arrival kinda cooled down the atmosphere at the shoot, and I was expecting that he just would touch Vi in places and strike poses with some teasing from Vi. But it was just a photoshoot for a (lewd) clothes brand, if I remember it right? It escalating into Vi giving blowjob to Luke or Bruce, especially without us (players) and Eric (to a lesser degree) witnessing it was really not the best move.

The Dev can make up for it if he does another DLC like "The After Party" he did post chapter 5 club scene. A DLC with the part of the photo shoot that we didn't get to see wouldn't take that much time and it would show us what Violet really got down to before chapter 7 rolls around in 3 months or so...

 

[el diablo rojo]

Exactly this. The lead up was one of the beginning scenes where we first discovered Vi had a healthy sexual appetite. Later at the club we discover she likes getting attention from men and willung to act on her own.

At the first photoshoot we discover she's gets turned on thinking about how many men will fantasize about her seeing her pics.

Second photoshoot she first is amazed at the attention she's getting on Social Media then gets aroused by the DM's she reads. Which already heighten her mood going into the photoshoot. Then during the photoshoot she gets really excited with the thought of becoming a pornstar and how free and excited she felt.

People who think her blowjob scene came too soon aren't paying attention to the dialogue and that she was already a slut.

You are right on the money, my dude.

Don't forget her sex scene with Eric after the bar (I think it was in chapter 4). She had that sticker on her back that said spank me and the dudes in the club turned her ass red when she walked through the crowd. Later, when her and Eric were having sex, she was saying all kinds of stuff about how at the time she wanted their cocks and she was getting turned on by Eric's slut shaming. So you are right - slutty Violet has been primed and ready for action for awhile now.

 

[yourmomma]

Exactly, that's what I mean. Some people are clearly just skipping through the dialogue and attaching their own thoughts to the images. The actual story through the dialogue tells us how much sexual tension is really going on and how Vi really wants to let loose. Eric is also really turned on by what he sees outside of her inner dialogue, but isn't sure how to deal with it yet. Well I mean up until the BJ texts lol Which now tells us he's down for Vi being slutty with other men. That and the BBC clothing line shoot inner dialogue he had while viewing her modeling pics.

I can't wait to hear all the complaints about the BBC that will eventually happen, even though a bazillion clues have been dropped about it.l

 

[Sahan777]

I definitely don't think the story is moving too fast... I was disappointed Vi wasn't fucked by Bruce even though I knew it wasn't gonna happen, but I thought the chapter was middling due to shaky execution.

Tbh I am most concerned by the dev suggesting they might change what happened based on audience revolt, which will only mean a slower story and I have to wait longer to see Vi really embrace being a whore which is the whole point anyway as far as I'm concerned.

Maybe he will figure it out, but with how slow the releases are and the story pacing is, I kind of expect a lot of the audience could be lost before the story really delivers

 

[rollgeck]

slutty Violet has been primed and ready for action for awhile now

Maybe that's what people didn't like - all that buildup and tension was being worked up through some fantasies and dialogs but it wasn't backed up by real action and scenes.
Like what has Vi actually done till now - posing like a slut for Bruce, groped here and there, spanked in the club and held Sai's dick, and that's... all basically? And then bj at the photoshoot to some stranger guy - yes, people might think it was too rushed.
And Eric's reaction to it doesn't mean anything at all - he is just bland, no character and no personality at all, in each and every Eric's scene the dev was just shaping him like dough to their convenience.
Didn't want to make comparison to SoA, but NTS progression there beat this one.

 

[yourmomma]

Maybe that's what people didn't like - all that buildup and tension was being worked up through some fantasies and dialogs but it wasn't backed up by real action and scenes.
Like what has Vi actually done till now - posing like a slut for Bruce, groped here and there, spanked in the club and held Sai's dick, and that's... all basically? And then bj at the photoshoot to some stranger guy - yes, people might think it was too rushed.
And Eric's reaction to it doesn't mean anything at all - he is just bland, no character and no personality at all, in each and every Eric's scene the dev was just shaping him like dough to their convenience.
Didn't want to make comparison to SoA, but NTS progression there beat this one.

This right here is exactly what I'm referring to of people not reading the dialogue and clearly using the skip function. The inner dialogue these people have tells us they want this.

Eric isn't supposed to have a meaningful role outside of Vi's corruption and to be manipulated by Ari. It's pretty friggin clear he's just a prop.

 

[ruby_rubicon]

The last update left a positive impression, but this one is an absolute mehhhh. Eric literally has no personality and doesn't take any action himself, just goes with a flow.

I think the opposite! I like this gradual corruption, setting the stage for a much more dramatic reversal, than what other games have. I'm enjoying the pace so far.

The date with Anya was horrible, absolutely fucked up potential...

That I agree. They didn't have to go all the way, but what was the urgency of meeting Vi? Felt like a missed opportunity and just rude to Anya, while kind of a rushed thing with Ari. But also nothing tragic for this game.

 

[MagLev]

How many new scenes are there in Ch6 Gold compared to Ch5 After Party?

 

[yourmomma]

I will say this. Anya's scene was lost potential, but I'm hoping it's a build up to being rejected by Eric and she later explores her built up sexual tension with other characters. Like the introduction of Jax being her new neighbor seems primed for that. I guess we'll see. The next update seems primed for a lot of sexual tension to be released and to me the final stage of Vi giving into her slutty side is here.
The carrot has been dangled. Now it's time to let us eat it.

 

[rollgeck]

This right here is exactly what I'm referring to of people not reading the dialogue and clearly using the skip function. The inner dialogue these people have tells us they want this.

I for one wasn't skipping on those parts, and I still think that buildup just by inner dialog isn't enough to rush things. With that logic, Vi could've let her to be gang-banged during photoshoot, and while some people would love that, Eric/Vi nts plot would lose all the tension and any remaining intrigue. That's why it makes sense do it one step at a time, starting with handjob, buttjob/boobjob further into bj and finally sex/bbc stuff. And no need to smear it over multiple chapters, it could be done (I mean handjob, boobjob and light 'sharing' stuff) in one, max two chapters, if not for a ton of other chars waiting for their turn to be represented in the story.

 

[yourmomma]

I for one wasn't skipping on those parts, and I still think that buildup just by inner dialog isn't enough to rush things. With that logic, Vi could've let her to be gang-banged during photoshoot, and while some people would love that, Eric/Vi nts plot would lose all the tension and any remaining intrigue. That's why it makes sense do it one step at a time, starting with handjob, buttjob/boobjob further into bj and finally sex/bbc stuff. And no need to smear it over multiple chapters, it could be done (I mean handjob, boobjob and light 'sharing' stuff) in one, max two chapters, if not for a ton of other chars waiting for their turn to be represented in the story.

Who's saying that here? This is still NTS game, so a couple obviously needs to give consent and approval to each other to let their partner do things, as well as for each new step they take.

Man you really hang on this NTS thing and still don't realize how limiting that is. These aren't Japanese Mangas my dude. Western porn games aren't rigidly structured the same way and slip between the genres alot. I mean hell people still don't now the difference between netorare and netorase and I don't think they should when applied to any works made outside of Japan. Western games are more about swinging, cheating and corruption and easily move between them in storytelling.

 

[rollgeck]

So to the point - look which last comments Circle Games author liked in this theread, people need to understand it's just his vision of the story, we won't see here usual NTR/NTS rules. Damn its also written in Overview NTS/NTR advanture - and right now I'm loving it, rules are broken and are meant to be broken, it makes things much more fun. So I get "all the split camps" of enjoyers, I've also been trying to choose a side, but now understood - to just let the author cook.

Man you really hang on this NTS thing and still don't realize how limiting that is. These aren't Japanese Mangas my dude. Western porn games aren't rigidly structured the same way and slip between the genres alot. I mean hell people still don't now the difference between netorare and netorase and I don't think they should when applied to any works made outside of Japan. Western games are more about swinging, cheating and corruption and easily move between them in storytelling.

Guys, I mean, if the dev pushes through with their vision while mixing genres and things and adding spice - I'm all for it, but looks like they are swayed by the patrons' reaction to the degree that they are ready to redo the stuff that took months to make.
I base my opinion and thoughts about the game on its premise and dev's description that's why what I commented and maybe criticized a bit was from NTS perspective.
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swinging, cheating and corruption

I tend to take things at face value, and we see neither cheating nor netorare tags yet, only swinging (=netorase) which means the dev either forgot to update or they aren't really going to include ntr.

That big note on the front page could be misleading now, although there's no clear confirmation that the story goes into NTR mode.

For now his game is a Kinetic Novel ( nothing will be avoidable )
Vi will follow a NTS route ( sharing, swing, exhibitionism )​

 

[fuffek]

There's nothing to update, he is still within NTS stuff
If people see the chapter 6 where Vi sucked a dick without asking Erik but she was already teasing him how she was a bad girl and told him to go to Ari for his surprise which was clearly planned thing with him in mind where he not only had full sex action with different girl than Vi but he also received the other surprise of hers which was pictures playing with other guy(just a BJ) which is what the both characters want

If you did play the game, did read the dialog did pay attention to what kind of personalities were created on those characters, there is no cheating or stealing/losing girlfriend it's still a NTS stuff where they wanted to have fun with other people

If it was made like she sucked the other guy and Erik would never learn about it with her intention,THEN it would be Netorare stuff

The characters are within agreement, they want it, they like it , they go for it

I see the same issue with people not understanding difference from NTS and NTR in other games too, like College of Mysteria for example
They also immediately think when they see NTR it means netori for them even though it's used way more commonly for netorare not netori (I think some actualy use NTRi for it)

It's sad that dev is changing his own vision because of self inserting people who can't even understand that people can have non verbal agreement on things in NTS stuff (and you have it in the game very clearly)
No! they need to have full control on everything, they can cheat but can't be cheated on, can't have any spontaneus suprise even when characters have agreement on it in a fictional story NO! they need to be asked for permision for every little small thing
Do people have fantasies about being in a relationship with another person who can think, act by themselfs, have personality, realise sexuall fantasies together or with a robot who can only follow orders?

Like cmon people.

 

[yourmomma]

I tend to take things at face value, and we see neither cheating nor netorare tags yet, only swinging (=netorase) which means the dev either forgot to update or they aren't really going to include ntr.

That big note on the front page could be misleading now, although there's no clear confirmation that the story goes into NTR mode.

Tags only get put up after events happen. This has been the policy for some time now.

 

[yourmomma]

There's nothing to update, he is still within NTS stuff
If people see the chapter 6 where Vi sucked a dick without asking Erik but she was already teasing him how she was a bad girl and told him to go to Ari for his surprise which was clearly planned thing with him in mind where he not only had full sex action with different girl than Vi but he also received the other surprise of hers which was pictures playing with other guy(just a BJ) which is what the both characters want

If you did play the game, did read the dialog did pay attention to what kind of personalities were created on those characters, there is no cheating or stealing/losing girlfriend it's still a NTS stuff where they wanted to have fun with other people

If it was made like she sucked the other guy and Erik would never learn about it with her intention,THEN it would be Netorare stuff

The characters are within agreement, they want it, they like it , they go for it

I see the same issue with people not understanding difference from NTS and NTR in other games too, like College of Mysteria for example
They also immediately think when they see NTR it means netori for them even though it's used way more commonly for netorare not netori (I think some actualy use NTRi for it)

It's sad that dev is changing his own vision because of self inserting people who can't even understand that people can have non verbal agreement on things in NTS stuff (and you have it in the game very clearly)
No! they need to have full control on everything, they can cheat but can't be cheated on, can't have any spontaneus suprise even when characters have agreement on it in a fictional story NO! they need to be asked for permision for every little small thing
Do people have fantasies about being in a relationship with another person who can think, act by themselfs, have personality, realise sexuall fantasies together or with a robot who can only follow orders?

Like cmon people.

You're ability to argue semantics is impressive lol

 

[Sahan777]

I definitely don't care about the NTS/NTR purity, but I do think the amount Eric and Vi have talked about and made clear they both would be into her fucking other guys, does to my mind still fit sharing...

At the same time in the camp who would have been happy for Vi to get double teamed in the photoshoot (even though I knew it wouldn't happen).

It is a fine balance between teasing and delivering on narrative promises, but I do think this story runs the risk of over milking it if Vi doesn't get to fucking sometime soon... Maybe just because seeing a blowjob doesn't do much for me personally ha

I just hope the dev actually has a plan and sticks to it rather than going back to retcon their own work instead of advancing the plot