HTML My New Mansion [v0.1 Hotfix] [Kestler Games]

[Xo Mo]

As for the grammar/spelling, i had no idea it was so bad to be mentioned in 2 posts already lol. I tried checking everything multiple times and some phrases sounded weird, but not technically wrong. But as you can see, english is not my first language. If you can point out some of the mistakes i made, i'll very much appreciate it and i wil fix them promptly.

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The majority of issues I noticed were the use of "were" instead of "was" (as in 1 person "were" should be "was"), the start of dialogue using "Own" instead of "oh" or "ow" or "now", as well as not capitalizing "i", which is the standard in English.

 

[IdleGuy]

Dang, when I glanced over the thumbnails I thought for a second that OP decided to use different porn stars for once but it's the standard realporn Mom actress but now as a brunette.

 

[Yeezy666]

Good luck on your game, looks good. Cheers

 

[kestlergames]

There are many free services, including

You must be registered to see the links

, an app/website you can copy and paste the text into and it will flag grammar, typos, punctuation, phrasing, etc.

The majority of issues I noticed were the use of "were" instead of "was" (as in 1 person "were" should be "was"), the start of dialogue using "Own" instead of "oh" or "ow" or "now", as well as not capitalizing "i", which is the standard in English.

Thanks, i'll try Grammarly in the future.

As for the "Own" is more of a vocalization of a sound. Like, "Own, so cute." Like the "mow" some japanese characters use in anime to express a little frustration. Get it?

The "I" thing i didn't know, thanks for the info. I'll try to kepe the "was" and "were's" in check.

Thanks again!

Dang, when I glanced over the thumbnails I thought for a second that OP decided to use different porn stars for once but it's the standard realporn Mom actress but now as a brunette.

With the amount of actresses i'm planing to add, i'm sure you will find some new ones. I guarantee it.

Good luck on your game, looks good. Cheers

Thanks!

 

[drifter139]

first time I've seen Sweetie Fox in a game. usually it's the most well known ones