VN Ren'Py My New Second Chance [Ep 6] [Abbys_Cat]

Abbys_Cat

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Nice start, looking forward to see where this one goes.
Did notice the Patreon link goes to a default member page and not a creator, but given I seen a post saying incest is coming it might be better for you to look at other funding options like Subscribe Star. Unless you plan on doing the "Landlady" Patch effect.
Thanks for the tip, I'll do that now.
 

Miury

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It's ok for the first game. There is a lot of grammar errors and badly translated UI. But everyone already said that. What i what to talk about is models for characters and their placement. If you want your game to look recognizable you should have original models. But don't fixate on them and work on your writing skills, 'cause people come here to read. That's what you have to fix or at least prevent in the future.
Lab Guy's clipping leg
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You already tried it. Good
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Clipping legs and hands
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He "looks" terrible. I don't see it. If u can't show it on the model then show it though event or thoughts.
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Why MC's dish looks bad...
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and not his?
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You wanted to show how broke MC is?

Welp, that's all what caught my eye. There is a lot of mistakes, but I showed you the obvious. Remember that u can't fix everything, but if you work on one mistake after another then your game will slowly improve. Good luck, dev.
 
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Abbys_Cat

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It's ok for the first game. There is a lot of grammar errors and badly translated UI. But everyone already said that. What i what to talk about is models for characters and their placement. If you want your game to look recognizable you should have original models. But don't fixate on them and work on your writing skills, 'cause people come here to read. That's what you have to fix or at least prevent in the future.
Lab Guy's clipping leg
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You already tried it. Good
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Clipping legs and hands
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He "looks" terrible. I don't see it. If u can't show it on the model then show it though event or thoughts.
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Why MC's dish looks bad...
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and not his?
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You wanted to show how broke MC is?

Welp, that's all what caught my eye. There is a lot of mistakes, but I showed you the obvious. Remember that u can't fix everything, but if you work on one mistake after another then your game will slowly improve. Good luck, dev.
Thank you for the feedback, I noticed those errors myself, and in Episode 2, I'll try not to make them again.
 

Abbys_Cat

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How much content? I see it's version 0.1a and already 600MB. I hope this doesn't end up being one of those 5GB games.
It won't be, I plan to optimize the images in the next update to make them smaller in terms of disk space size.
 

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Abbys_Cat

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How much content? I see it's version 0.1a and already 600MB. I hope this doesn't end up being one of those 5GB games.
The problem was with the images. I managed to compress them without losing quality, so the game won't be that type of huge game anymore.
 

Abbys_Cat

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Can someone please translate the letter for me?
It's just a letter from the landlord giving the MC an ultimatum to pack up his things and leave by the next day, as he hadn't been paying rent for some time.

"Dear tenant,

We didn't want to reach this point. We've tried hard, given you many opportunities to pay your debts, but as you always come up with excuses, we've decided to take this matter to court. Therefore, you have 24 hours from receiving this letter to remove all your belongings from this property, or we will take the necessary legal actions.

Regards, Apartment BCT"