It's ok for the first game. There is a lot of grammar errors and badly translated UI. But everyone already said that. What i what to talk about is models for characters and their placement. If you want your game to look recognizable you should have original models. But don't fixate on them and work on your writing skills, 'cause people come here to read. That's what you have to fix or at least prevent in the future.
Lab Guy's clipping leg
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You already tried it. Good
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Clipping legs and hands
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He "looks" terrible. I don't see it. If u can't show it on the model then show it though event or thoughts.
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Why
MC's dish looks bad...
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and not
his?
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You wanted to show how broke
MC is?
Welp, that's all what caught my eye. There is a lot of mistakes, but I showed you the obvious. Remember that u can't fix everything, but if you work on one mistake after another then your game will slowly improve. Good luck, dev.