Ren'Py - Completed - My Office Adventures [v1.00D1] [The Coder]

It's a great game the animations are smooth and I love the fact that you didn't abandon your work. The story is a bit rehashed but that doesn't mean it's bad it's pretty good. I like the pacing and I love the characters. please keep it up you're great.

This is a wonderful game. Have nice history and visual. And more important have a lot of beautiful milfs with a perfect design SO HOT.
I'm excited for the future updates.
The DEV(S) make a perfect work I I recommend play this , you rwon't regret it.

The dialogue and characters are abysmal, and the plot is mediocre at best. It really is hard to overstate just how bad the dialogue is, both in terms of repetitiveness and vocabulary. I am not sure if the developer has ever met a woman, let alone spoken to one.

The pace is glacial, and it keeps getting worse, with scenes being sparser and sparser the more you play, and the "cockblocking" gets old rather quickly.

The visuals are the highlight of the game, but they're still nothing to write home about. I wasn't expecting all that much from the game and I still feel like I wasted my time.

I really enjoy this game. I like the pacing and variety of personalities. The sandbox mechanism is good and the controls work well. I hope the developer keeps making games.

I love the animation and the drawing style. It's not overly complicated and the stories are good.

I like how there is variety in the girls in terms of looks, nipple color, the sex length isnt too long and the animation is fluid enough. And most importantly the dev didnt take too long to complete development with a satisfying ending from when I first saw it a few years ago.

Story ?¿/5

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Li: Eleanor suffer from severe multiple personality disorder at best.
Worst Li ever, just run her over with a car please.

From "Please be serious MC, business business." to "Kiss me MC, i love you" to "What are you doing?!?!" to "Please suck my boobs" to rage mode again.

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Dialogue is really cringy, new level of cringe.
Any Jap raw MTL game have better dialogue.

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Good Koikatsu renders 10/5

Story: Idk, I skipped it, but I think it's pretty mundane, except for a few routes. ?/5
Gameplay: Classic sandbox where you go around, work, and buy things to finish paths, a little bit of grinding which I didn't mind. 3.5/5
Characters: Mhh, from an aesthetic point of view few are well enough cared for, but for example the protagonist's "mum" is a character that is included in the better repack of koikatsu. Instead, the personalities are quite good for a porn game. 4/5
Animations: There are enough of them, but they are the classic default animations of koikatsu, moreover also slightly unsmooth. 3.5/4
Music: Very annoying, you will find yourself listening to the same stupid music over and over again. 2/5
Other: I have to say that compared to many other koikatsu-based games, this one isn't bad at all.
Final rating: 3.6 (I'll put 4 stars because all in all it's above average)

Well, it is kind of a Visual Novel only with a bit of management. The animations and pictures are all good quality and also the dialogs are nice to read. But well all in all it has a linear story, even if you can until a certain degree decide for yourself in which order you conquer the girls, but it doesn't change anything in the end.
What is nice, you can yourself discover new animations, depending where you find the girls.
Depending on what you want you can easily reach more or less different endings.
A good story and overall good game.

[Review for v0.97]
I had a lot of trouble trying to come up with what I considered an "accurate" rating for this game. After staying up far too late on two separate nights trying to complete the game, I feel far too invested to rate it poorly, but simultaneously too unsatisfied to give it an actually-good rating. So, an average 3/5 stars is where I've landed amongst all these mixed thoughts.

Just gonna bullet list my main thoughts here.

• Minimal approach to story actually kinda works in this game's favor, in a nice "don't think too hard and just (try to) enjoy the porn" way.
  • Unfortunately, this also means that when the story tries to get a little deeper or more serious with itself, it feels unfitting in the "Ctrl+Alt+Del Loss" way, where the attempt at something more emotional doesn't mesh well with everything else.
    • Good examples of such would be the whole emotional drama with the sister after the cruise, but while that's going on you can do anime shenanigans with the twins before fucking them. Or the need for a "girl gets plastered and MC (rightfully) rejects her sexual advances" scene that you can have happen right after sexual escapades between a woman and her mom.
• The basic set-up of the MC having some vague IT solutions & support company feels grounded and mature in an odd way, especially for a porn game, and allows for a fairly natural method of meeting new characters.
  • This "realism" also comes at the price of making things fucking boring at the same time. The MC doesn't really have any "cool" talents, skills, or abilities, he's just a nice dude with a big dick who can do computer stuff good (who also installs a fucking Linux distro as the operating system on some middle-aged woman's work computer, which I'm sure isn't user-friendly lol)
• The women are all pretty hot and the sex scenes are fine for the most part (except for the rampant amount of footjobs, seriously dude I'm pretty sure it's not a common form of foreplay like god damn). The main issue is that they lack variation. Most of the scenes just feel like the same thing with different women between them.
• Hell, even some girl's scenes just feel like repeats of previous ones but with a different backdrop. I'd almost say that the game would benefit from less characters, especially ones with similar themes/scenarios.
  • My personal example for this would be Alex, who's cute but has so much overlap between other girls that she feels like a superfluous addition. Her "need to help her study" bit was already done with the twins, her risque scenes in the office feel tired after like four other characters with the same scenarios, and her scenes where she doesn't want to get caught fucking in your room also feel worn out (especially considering you've probably already deep-dished everyone else in the house by the time you get to that point.)
• As other reviews point out, a lot of the sex gets interrupted or put on hold way, way too much. Combine that with the aforementioned lack of variety and the end result is that the game just feels unrewarding.
  • To build on the "unrewarding" part, let's just play out how a typical "questline" plays out for a girl in this game. You meet the girl, build up a little relationship with her in a few moments, things are fine. After the fourth interaction you get a lewd scene like fucking in a risky place, only to get interrupted because well, you've attempted to fuck in a risky place. Your next two interactions are locked behind multiple in-game days of waiting and after the sixth you finally get an uninterrupted scene with her, and it's just like... yet another scene that ends in a doggy-style pullout on her ass, which you've already seen on like four other girls now because in-between the wait to unlock one girl's interactions you go ahead and progress other stories.

This game starts off incredibly slowly. The rewards are few. Ok I think, the rate will incease over time because that's LOGICAL, right???

Nope, not in this game. The rewards decrease over time. I am not even kidding. The scenes will get a bit spicier but there'll be frequent interuptions and blue-balling.

Horrible game. Horrible writing. Horrible navigation. Horrible rewards.

1 star for you, dev. This would be a 0 star review were it possible. I wanted to award the dev the same way he rewarded me wasting hours of my life for nothing in return. So thanks?

It aint that bad, nice plot and good characters the renders may seem plain but when you interact whit them they really have nice lines, not perfect but neither bad, this guy really knows how to write good characters, as Eleanor or Sandra they were very focused in making them fell alive and that really gives extra points. 7/10

Honestly this game is pretty bad. It is a sandbox game so I expected that it would be grindy and the dev himslef warns about the story not being particularly well done but what disappointed me was that despite the many reviews praising the renders I personally found them pretty bad and this is especially true during sex scene animations which are kind of the reward for the aforementionned grind and were truly disappointing, there is barely any sex appeal to them.

This game has some robust mechanics. Too many mebbe, it takes a bit to save or load like mebbe the scripts behind all these cool mechanics are almost too much. At some points the game feels less like a game and instead a tech demo.

The soundtrack isn't terrible, but kinda irritating after a certain point too. I think perhaps it's because most of the tracks have fairly short repetitive loops.

The dialogue...the reason this game gets 3 stars. The "humor" is terrible. The MC "Loki" does not live up to the name, although he as well as the rest of the cast think he's some sorta comedian. I get that this game isn't about the story that's alright. The real issue is, the glaring fact that the dev is clearly more of a software engineer then a story teller.

Just stop with the "jokes" we don't care about the word count at this point, just stop raping our eyes with the "jokes" they're almost soul crushingly unfunny. They totally distract from the rest of the game instead of just the lack of good story.

The models are pretty nice with good variety and a decent spread of scenes as of v0.90. Got no problem with that, in fact it's presentation that's carrying this game.

TL;DR Almost physically painful attempts at humor couched in an over tuned UI with a swiss army knife of QOL mechanics and good visuals. Lean on the CTRL key and it'll almost be a 5 star game...

gonna give this 5 stars because even though I don't think it's as good as some of the best games on this site I think it succeeds very well at what it's trying to be, and that is a porn slice of life dating sim.
The porn is excellent and it's always a plus when the dev includes the option to name what the MC and LIs call each other during sex. If you like good dirty talk this is an excellent game for that. The models and sex scenes are very well done too. The game over all is fairly well put together if a bit dense and slightly too feature rich, it could do with some simplification even if that means it may take a few more clicks to get where you want to go in the game
As far as negatives, i don't think the overall lack of a strong narrative is a negative because i don't think that's the point of the game, it's a SoL porn game so it's about meeting and fucking all the girls and i think the characters are engaging.
The English is a bit stilted but definitely clear enough. The game does take a bit to get going and the MC probably gets interrupted a bit too much during sex scenes. It's probably realistic and i think it's supposed to be funny but it happens a couple times with nearly every LI and eventually it started to become a bit annoying. But once you get over the hump with a character the sex comes hot and heavy. Finally i think the dev is a bit too impressed with features and the game has a lot of impressive bells and whistles but i think it would benefit the player from an enjoyment and game play perspective if the game was a bit simpler and less cluttered.
At any rate a definite recommendation for people who like good dirty talk, Koikatsu models and don't mind a SoL sandbox without a strong narrative

I can't say the game is bad. It's got really good graphics, and the story is not too bad.

But.

I can't say the game is good either. Some spelling mistakes (small typos like 'Hocus' instead of 'Focus'), really badly writteen dialogue (one line of text: 'No, Im married!', literally 3 lines later: 'Its okay, we divorced') and other tiny details make it a bit of annoying.

Biggest problem of the game is, it paints itself as Sandbox, and it does have a rather good amount of locations, but the railroading is sometimes downright unbearable, like when you pick an option, only for 'dev' to smach you on the hand saying 'NO! This is NOT the option you should pick!'. It feels like the dev was too lazy to program outcomes other than those he wanted to see. As such, I think the game has very little replayability.

But It is definitely worth a try, it does have quite a bit of content. Just don;t expect much in terms of freedom of choice.

[EDIT]
Oh yeah, and it would help if the dev actually had sex before. I don't mean to virgin-shame anyone, but when I see two people about to have long-awaited sex engage in a lengthy discussion, I just roll my eyes. FYI people don't really talk much during sex. They're too busy having sex.

review based on 0.70 version
- good art quality- high polygonal, good filtration and good smoothing
- animation presents(maaany)
- very good base code
- ig hints presents
- end_of_content marked
- good ui
- good content amount
NEUTRAL:
- some story present, less than average... but cmon- its regular sandbox, who care
CONS:
- some dirt in all that graphics- lindas clothing cliping... bloody tears...
- scripts r heavy... i mean 2-3 sec lags after some actions like load/save
- no sandbox "classical" "side activity", only event replay

if u dnt need shakespearean story and u like good made sandbox games- my recomendation

I wasn't really expecting much with a game made in this format, but this game failed to deliver even the minimum.

The good things about this game are the renders but if you like these models and the system these renders are made with you'll already know how these are made. The other good thing is the different angles during H scenes. That's about it for the positives this game has to offer.

There is no story. There's like something there that is SUPPOSED to be story but it's really about nothing. You're supposed to take over your father's company but everything is pretty much done for you. The MC's mother is his right hand and she helps him along with his assistant and their investor and the rest is just "go here at this time and talk to this person and pick the only option that is pretty much allowed for you to pick."

Otherwise you're meeting the girls at specific times in specific places and getting specific events before you can get others and progress their storylines which are not that interesting at all. It's your run of the mill incest (if you decide to take it thought route).

So with the story lacking the game must make up for it in H-scenes right? Nope. You may have one, maybe two actual penetration scenes and the rest stem from either teasing, to blowjob, boobjob, or some other kind of job at the moment depending on the girl and you'll invest SO much time that it does NOT come easy.

The game doesn't really make you work so you don't really feel like there's grind, but be prepared to have your time wasted as you will be sleeping and skipping time ahead A LOT to talk to a specific woman. The game's made to be played where you're going for multiple women all at the same time, so if you wanted to just focus on ONE woman at a time or just one period then you're in for a pretty frustrating time.

Another thing, choices don't matter. Yes as I mentioned earlier you may have two or three different choices where the right one is obvious but there's not even a game over, you just trudge along either getting the same result or the MC will not go forth with your choice and you'll be forced to pick the right choice.

This along with the breaking the 4th wall constantly from the dev and trying to get immersed will become impossible if it hasn't been already. The other problems with what little bit of story or game there is, have already been pointed out so no need to reiterate here.

All in all if you have a lot of free time to waste and you like this art style and this dev then you MAY enjoy this game. If you come looking for a game, or a story, or a good flow of H scenes then you won't find it here unless you delude yourself into believing it's there. The game will blueball you and delude you into thinking you have choice and that it's trying to tell a story but it doesn't take itself serious at all.

I wish I could have those hours back....

Would be great if it fixes the script, its poorly done for incest. Please just dont do incest if its not going to make sense.

The models look great, one of the best for sure, but thats like the only good thing here.

Dev is a little too touchy for me (like too much direct narration) and it breaks lots of immersion for example in hints (It feels like hes beside you watching you playing and whispering you in ear on what to do ) .

Good Points
+ Render style looks pretty good for its own style (Koikatsu style)
+ On PC you can reach hints part wit ''Q'' button or you can use ''Pinned hints'' which gives hints like some walkthrough mods and you can even teleport directly to girls with using hints menu which makes things quite easy. Still ''Why its not VN?'' Or ''Why its not have VN mod?'' is important question and answer is probably giving player freedom, and without annoying walking around without knowing anyting i gues its succesfull.
+ Sex scenes different angles/positions and animations for them. And as for quality they do look good enough and have good enough physics aswell. Oh BTW we have cumming animations aswell.

Bad Points
- I realy love to see HUD size change option for Sandbox menu's and Textbox, right now HUD/IU looks little unnecesary big and it looks bad.
- Why Textbox have nearly same size version of girl/woman we are already talking? And why she is blinking same time with original one? Thats just looks weird and unnecesary. Textbox need big change and like i told it needs size change aswell.
- I'm not %100 sure about reason, but dialogues feels little bit cringy... It can be because of dialogues not well writed (which is main reason probably) but i dont think its fully because of poorly writed dialogues, having bad English translation (which i assume translation and writer is dont have English as a main language) literaly destroys game story telling. Without bad English translation game can be less cringy, because bad translation makes things hard to understand even incomprehensible. DEV seriously need to find someone with suited English knowledge for English translation. And honestly that doesn't makes sense at all, this game developing since late 2020's and we can see a lot of people told this problem, DEV should have fixed this problem already but he dont... What are you waiting for mate?
- Its bit slowburn... I gotta say i literaly spend hours for getting any scene with any girl and of course it was just silly handjob...

For The End
Well... What i can say? Even as a person don't use English as a main language i couldn't bear this game English level... Its unplayable espacily with those cringy dialogues... Its just sad, without cringy dialogues and this bad English translation i can say this game have his own quality to reach 4-5 star rate as a Koikatsu game, its have one of best looking Koikatsu renders, art style and animations i have seen but with all bad points i write its just un-playable... I hope DEV can two major problem i told in a future and people can enjoy this game well maked animations, renders and good looking characters. Normaly i would give 1 star but because of effort DEV spend animations and renders im gonna give 2 star and wish you good luck with fixing game problems.

V0.60

What can I say, amature writing with good Koikatsu renders.
THAT'S IT

The dialogue is really cringy, like REALLY CRINGY, to the point where I had to leave the game twice so I simply don't kill myself with how cringe it is.
The interactions between the characters is BAD, no humans on earth talks like that, it's really BAD with a huge sign of "STOP IT, get some help" BAD.

I like the renders tho, since this is my first Koikatsu style game I have to say the style is good. other that that there's nothing else to say.

TLDR: play the game for the renders and turn off your brain when it comes to dialogs and interactions.

Edit1: yea, it's really bad. it's written like an 18 year-old wet dream.
EVERY girl he meets fall in love with him, complement him of how handsome and sexy he's, how they're all ugly and just lucky that a smart, handsome, hot, (you get the idea) stud like him looks their way.
I rolled my eyes so much everytime anyone speaks to the point were I'm very close to seeing my brain.
BUT it have some good amount of renders so that's why I didn't reduced it to 1 star