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Kunt

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This much confidence in being wrong is crazy. You do realize that you can have a linear story with an extensive info dump, right. And there are info dumps were they might as well turn to the audience and talk.
"You do realize that you can have a linear story with an extensive info dump, right."
No shit, that's this game, that was the entire point.
Although, the fact that people are still talking about a 1 minute presentation in a smut game about fucking a pig is hella hilarious.
Feel free you and Cat Milk to write a doctoral dissertation about how that minute long intro ruined your life. I'll keep laughing my ass off.
 

Sacred_Lamb

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"You do realize that you can have a linear story with an extensive info dump, right."
No shit, that's this game, that was the entire point.
Although, the fact that people are still talking about a 1 minute presentation in a smut game about fucking a pig is hella hilarious.
Feel free you and Cat Milk to write a doctoral dissertation about how that minute long intro ruined your life. I'll keep laughing my ass off.
:FacePalm:autocorrect misrepresenting me
"You do realize that you can have a linear story without an extensive info dump, right?" Is what should've been there.
But I see you're too up your own ass to notice that. Like, why would I agree with u?:whistle::coffee:
 

Cat Milk

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:FacePalm:autocorrect misrepresenting me
"You do realize that you can have a linear story without an extensive info dump, right?" Is what should've been there.
But I see you're too up your own ass to notice that. Like, why would I agree with u?:whistle::coffee:
Kunt: 1. There was no info dump, you just have the attention span of a goldfish.

also Kunt: ""You do realize that you can have a linear story with an extensive info dump, right."
No shit, that's this game, that was the entire point. "

like i wrote in my initial criticism, YOU people are a mystery to me...

I hope, like the people before me, that we pick up with the 2 Femboys...
 
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Sacred_Lamb

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Kunt: 1. There was no info dump, you just have the attention span of a goldfish.

also Kunt: ""You do realize that you can have a linear story with an extensive info dump, right."
No shit, that's this game, that was the entire point. "

like i wrote in my initial criticism, YOU people are a mystery to me...

I hope, like the people before me, that we pick up with the 2 Femboys...
They'll twist themselves into pretzels to brush a critique bro. The herd demands it :BootyTime:
The artist does seem to a have a thing for traps so we might get one.
 

ClockworkGnome

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Here's the thing, you gotta ask yourself what this game is trying to be, if the writing supports that goal then i'd say it did it's job

Imo, writing can be truly called bad when it completely misses the mark on what it was trying to do; this game isn't trying to be the next eternum, it's just a fun, light-hearted ride with good art where you get to fuck furries
I'd agree with this 100%

I rarely care if a game has "too little" story or "too much" story. The thing that tends to determine for me whether or not a game's story is good is whether or not it makes me want to stab myself in the brain with an icepick.

A game with tons of plot, exposition, and endless dialogue can be fantastic if it's well-written and interesting. It can also be soul-numbingly bad if it feels like the script was written in crayon by a concussed 4th-grader. A game with minimal story can be fun as long as it's relatively consistent and serves its purpose. Lack of story mostly only becomes a problem if the story that is there is mostly disjointed or contradictory, or if the other aspects of the game are also lacking.

If the main character tends to be relatively proactive and not a complete dumbass or victim waiting to happen, that's a huge plus.

Especially with more comedic or light-hearted games, a minor bit of story and exposition is fine. Not even game has to be a sci-fi/fantasy epic or telenovela drama with complex motivations and hidden conspiracies.
 

Cat Milk

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Soo we're still arguing over a porn games writing? :ROFLMAO:
Yeah, imagine that... discussing the writing, worldbuilding ect. of a visual NOVEL... i am getting slightly annoyed with this attitude from people who apparently don't care about the Novel aspect and frame discussions about said aspect as the most retarded thing ever...

We had at least one person in here that wants to make a game inspired by my Pig Princess and said person might profit from a discussion about the writing in the game, setting them up to maybe write a better one... imagine that?!? a discussion about the writing in a visual NOVEL!!! leading to other people improving their craft and writing better ones...

you know, you don't have to be a standardless Pleb, just food for thought.
 
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Sacred_Lamb

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Soo we're still arguing over a porn games writing? :ROFLMAO:
Ah yes, a tired classic. "I'm going to try make this convo look pointless because I've made an ass of myself" head ahh :BootyTime:


Yeah, imagine that... discussing the writing, worldbuilding ect. of a visual NOVEL... i am getting slightly annoyed with this attitude from people who apparently don't care about the Novel aspect and frame discussions about said aspect as the most retarded thing ever...

We had at least one person in here that wants to make a game inspired by my Pig Princess and said person might profit from a discussion about the writing in the game, setting them up to maybe write a better one... imagine that?!? a discussion about the writing in a visual NOVEL!!! leading to other people improving their craft and writing better ones...
Exactly.Discussion like these need to be had as long as no one ain't calling each other names.And we're trying to actually have constructive criticism tfen its all good.
But you see the plebs, plebss like tht dude. They eat shit and appreciate it.
 
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Ah yes, a tired classic. "I'm going to try make this convo look pointless because I've made an ass of myself" head ahh :BootyTime:



Exactly.Discussion like these need to be had as long as no one ain't calling each other names.And we're trying to actually have constructive criticism tfen its all good.
But you see the plebs, plebss like tht dude. They eat shit and appreciate it.
*snort* Ahem: "Discussion like these need to be had as long as no one ain't calling each other names." "[...]see the plebs, plebss like tht dude. They eat shit and appreciate it."

Soo who is making an ass of themselve? just asking

And about this borderline braindead discussion - everything has already been said, the opinion that the writing is shit and why as well as all sorts of counterpoints to it. Nothing new or enlightening has been added for a while now just people throwing "politely" shit at each other over a porn games writing of all things. Its a tad bit ridiculous dontcha think?
 

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Yo Guys, I'm going to ask again, does anyone know where the September 30th kemono post ended up, because it simply didn't end up there?
 
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