Just boring. The story is bleh, the girls are meh, the sex is meh.
The girls aren't very interesting. I think there are too many of them, and they all get pushed into being side characters. You don't really get to know any of them, and that makes them boring. The sex is mediocre, too; I was CTRL forwarding through all the scenes.
There are a lot of plot problems:
The first is that the early internal monologue doesn't establish that he's pretending to be a soulless robot zombie. So he just seems like the world's most antisocial fuck - I thought I had the honor of that title, but I've been blown away. Without the backstory of "I'm an undercover spy type thing", the character is terrible. With it, he's only boring.
The drunk thing with Yui is really stupid, in so many fucking ways. Ugh.
The stuff is poorly researched: at one point, the programmers are deciding game mechanics. That's not how companies work. Game mechanics are done by a completely different team than the code monkeys (speaking as a code monkey.)
The best (ie worst) part is when the protagonist drinks a beer, and he says “I’ve never drunk alcohol, because I didn’t see any reason to drink it. But it’s much more delicious than I expected it to be.” Has the writer ever had beer? It tastes like absolute ass until you get used to it/drunk enough not to care.
Furthermore, what the fuck kind of spy isn’t taught how to hold their liquor? That’s just terrible training.
Why does he have a tattoo of a secret organization? That's not how secrets are kept.
It's not terrible, but it does absolutely nothing for me.
The girls aren't very interesting. I think there are too many of them, and they all get pushed into being side characters. You don't really get to know any of them, and that makes them boring. The sex is mediocre, too; I was CTRL forwarding through all the scenes.
There are a lot of plot problems:
The first is that the early internal monologue doesn't establish that he's pretending to be a soulless robot zombie. So he just seems like the world's most antisocial fuck - I thought I had the honor of that title, but I've been blown away. Without the backstory of "I'm an undercover spy type thing", the character is terrible. With it, he's only boring.
The drunk thing with Yui is really stupid, in so many fucking ways. Ugh.
The stuff is poorly researched: at one point, the programmers are deciding game mechanics. That's not how companies work. Game mechanics are done by a completely different team than the code monkeys (speaking as a code monkey.)
The best (ie worst) part is when the protagonist drinks a beer, and he says “I’ve never drunk alcohol, because I didn’t see any reason to drink it. But it’s much more delicious than I expected it to be.” Has the writer ever had beer? It tastes like absolute ass until you get used to it/drunk enough not to care.
Furthermore, what the fuck kind of spy isn’t taught how to hold their liquor? That’s just terrible training.
Why does he have a tattoo of a secret organization? That's not how secrets are kept.
It's not terrible, but it does absolutely nothing for me.