VN Ren'Py My Shut-In Demon! [Ch.1] [MrJack]

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Verdance

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Apr 17, 2019
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This was a wonderful first chapter. The art is adorable and the writing is so charming. I'll definitely have to follow the progress of this one.
 
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Nekuta61

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I enjoyed the prologue. The reverse summoning stuff is a fresh great idea for a visual novel when we are used to the other way around. Hina is adorable and need to be protected at all cost. Can't wait to see more of it.
 

sexypeanut

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Jun 30, 2020
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Just gave this one a go.

Neat art and Hina is suuuper cute. Also, I like that there are lots of background music (although it becomes silent later on in the game). The BJ was short but hot.

Definitively on my radar!
 

Jack9000

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Sep 26, 2018
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super cute im excited for the next chapter and im already wondering if its the dad the demon king who wrote the books and talked to us in the begining when we were traveling
 
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Egris

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HOLYYYYYYYYYYYYYY this is so good!!!!!!!!!!
The art is amazing, i really couldn't ask for something better this is just perfect (i hope it maintains this quality)
I can't wait to see how this continues, i'm so invested in this game!

Also Hina is just perfect btw, her design is so cute and hot at the same time, i love her!
 
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MrJacksArt

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Jun 27, 2025
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HOLYYYYYYYYYYYYYY this is so good!!!!!!!!!!
The art is amazing, i really couldn't ask for something better this is just perfect (i hope it maintains this quality)
I can't wait to see how this continues, i'm so invested in this game!

Also Hina is just perfect btw, her design is so cute and hot at the same time, i love her!
Thank you so much, spent a lot of time on her design! Working hard on Chapter 2 right now and planning on making every Chapter better than the previous one.
 

HylTin

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Aug 29, 2018
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Very good game with good artwork and very original story. To me (and that's only my taste), the only criticism I can do on this one is that there is a little bit (just a little bit) too much text for not enough renderings (but it match with the atmosphere of the game so not really annoying) and for now it's much more a Kinetic Novel than a game (player doesn't have much interactions to do) but well, it's only the 1st chapter so I imagine that there will be more interactions to come!

Anyway, I had a really good time with this game and wait to see what's coming next!
 

MrJacksArt

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Jun 27, 2025
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Very good game with good artwork and very original story. To me (and that's only my taste), the only criticism I can do on this one is that there is a little bit (just a little bit) too much text for not enough renderings (but it match with the atmosphere of the game so not really annoying) and for now it's much more a Kinetic Novel than a game (player doesn't have much interactions to do) but well, it's only the 1st chapter so I imagine that there will be more interactions to come!

Anyway, I had a really good time with this game and wait to see what's coming next!
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And i totally get you, the same thoughts were going through my head when I was making the first chapter (about too much text), so for the next one, I'm focusing a lot more on different scenes (especially now that i dont have to draw so many Hina sprites, haha).
 
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MrJacksArt

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Jun 27, 2025
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I really hope you enjoy the game! Currently working hard on the next chapter!

I need funding to continue working on this project.

If you can, please consider supporting me on Patreon! But liking and reviewing the game also helps a lot!

Enjoy!
 

Bingoogus

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What's..the....point..of.......having...a...text.....speed.........if.......the..dev...manually.....sets......the....cps...
and...wait.....time...for.......every..single.sentence...in......the....game?

Like, fuck me man... you turn the text speed to instant and turn transitions off cause you just want to read normally but no, you gotta do it in the excruciatingly painful manner the dev decided you and everyone else should...

Edit: attached an edited scripts file with all this stupid crap cut out.
 
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Alternation62

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A promising start to a fun looking VN! The art is well-done and Hina is just so gosh darn adorkable, I just want to head pat her all day. HUGE bonus adding sex sounds, please keep doing that. You should also consider adding a replay gallery with the MC name we've picked. Also, what fetishes are planned? (I hope there's pregnant sex, but it's by no means a deal breaker)
 
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MrJacksArt

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Jun 27, 2025
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A promising start to a fun looking VN! The art is well-done and Hina is just so gosh darn adorkable, I just want to head pat her all day. HUGE bonus adding sex sounds, please keep doing that. You should also consider adding a replay gallery with the MC name we've picked. Also, what fetishes are planned? (I hope there's pregnant sex, but it's by no means a deal breaker)
Glad you enjoyed it! I like the replay gallery idea, i'll look into it! (Even though i'm new to programming so i think i'll need some help heh)

As for the fetishes...not sure yet, i mostly make up the scenes as i go, so it could be anything that i think would fit the story. Oh, but there's definitely going to be some boobjob scenes and a lot more teasing!
 

Verdance

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Apr 17, 2019
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And i totally get you, the same thoughts were going through my head when I was making the first chapter (about too much text), so for the next one, I'm focusing a lot more on different scenes (especially now that i dont have to draw so many Hina sprites, haha).
Honestly, I disagree with that first comment. I like how much text there is as it fleshes out the characters more (which works because your writing is so well done and the character in question is so personable). Some people are more interested in sex and whatnot of course but, at least for me, I'm following this game for the narrative.
 
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DocRipper

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Dec 27, 2021
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Very nice work. Sweet, humorous and light. That's always nice.
I have to agree that the balance is Ok. Of course more art and frequent scene changes are always a big plus, but it's good. No extremely boring wall of texts, no extreme poetic shit or describing every dust on the floor. So its really "visual" and no"text-based" tag here.:D
Good job.
 
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5.00 star(s) 4 Votes