VN Ren'Py My Shut-In Demon! [Ch.2] [MrJack]

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Verdance

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This was a wonderful first chapter. The art is adorable and the writing is so charming. I'll definitely have to follow the progress of this one.
 
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MrJacksArt

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Demon NEET, as a concept, is far more erotic than it has any right to be. Kudos to MrJack for bringing birthing such a combination, or whoever did it first if it wasn't him.
Thank you! I actually had the idea of making 2 separate games, one about demons and one about a shut-in. Then one day, I joined them together... and here we are!
 

sexypeanut

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Just gave this one a go.

Neat art and Hina is suuuper cute. Also, I like that there are lots of background music (although it becomes silent later on in the game). The BJ was short but hot.

Definitively on my radar!
 

Jack9000

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super cute im excited for the next chapter and im already wondering if its the dad the demon king who wrote the books and talked to us in the begining when we were traveling
 
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Egris

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HOLYYYYYYYYYYYYYY this is so good!!!!!!!!!!
The art is amazing, i really couldn't ask for something better this is just perfect (i hope it maintains this quality)
I can't wait to see how this continues, i'm so invested in this game!

Also Hina is just perfect btw, her design is so cute and hot at the same time, i love her!
 

MrJacksArt

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HOLYYYYYYYYYYYYYY this is so good!!!!!!!!!!
The art is amazing, i really couldn't ask for something better this is just perfect (i hope it maintains this quality)
I can't wait to see how this continues, i'm so invested in this game!

Also Hina is just perfect btw, her design is so cute and hot at the same time, i love her!
Thank you so much, spent a lot of time on her design! Working hard on Chapter 2 right now and planning on making every Chapter better than the previous one.
 

HylTin

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Very good game with good artwork and very original story. To me (and that's only my taste), the only criticism I can do on this one is that there is a little bit (just a little bit) too much text for not enough renderings (but it match with the atmosphere of the game so not really annoying) and for now it's much more a Kinetic Novel than a game (player doesn't have much interactions to do) but well, it's only the 1st chapter so I imagine that there will be more interactions to come!

Anyway, I had a really good time with this game and wait to see what's coming next!
 

MrJacksArt

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Very good game with good artwork and very original story. To me (and that's only my taste), the only criticism I can do on this one is that there is a little bit (just a little bit) too much text for not enough renderings (but it match with the atmosphere of the game so not really annoying) and for now it's much more a Kinetic Novel than a game (player doesn't have much interactions to do) but well, it's only the 1st chapter so I imagine that there will be more interactions to come!

Anyway, I had a really good time with this game and wait to see what's coming next!
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And i totally get you, the same thoughts were going through my head when I was making the first chapter (about too much text), so for the next one, I'm focusing a lot more on different scenes (especially now that i dont have to draw so many Hina sprites, haha).
 

MrJacksArt

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I really hope you enjoy the game! Currently working hard on the next chapter!

I need funding to continue working on this project.

If you can, please consider supporting me on Patreon! But liking and reviewing the game also helps a lot!

Enjoy!
 

Bingoogus

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What's..the....point..of.......having...a...text.....speed.........if.......the..dev...manually.....sets......the....cps...
and...wait.....time...for.......every..single.sentence...in......the....game?

Like, fuck me man... you turn the text speed to instant and turn transitions off cause you just want to read normally but no, you gotta do it in the excruciatingly painful manner the dev decided you and everyone else should...

Edit: attached an edited scripts file with all this stupid crap cut out.

Edit: updated to chapter 2, dev persists with this anti-player bullshit.
 
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Alternation62

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A promising start to a fun looking VN! The art is well-done and Hina is just so gosh darn adorkable, I just want to head pat her all day. HUGE bonus adding sex sounds, please keep doing that. You should also consider adding a replay gallery with the MC name we've picked. Also, what fetishes are planned? (I hope there's pregnant sex, but it's by no means a deal breaker)
 
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MrJacksArt

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A promising start to a fun looking VN! The art is well-done and Hina is just so gosh darn adorkable, I just want to head pat her all day. HUGE bonus adding sex sounds, please keep doing that. You should also consider adding a replay gallery with the MC name we've picked. Also, what fetishes are planned? (I hope there's pregnant sex, but it's by no means a deal breaker)
Glad you enjoyed it! I like the replay gallery idea, i'll look into it! (Even though i'm new to programming so i think i'll need some help heh)

As for the fetishes...not sure yet, i mostly make up the scenes as i go, so it could be anything that i think would fit the story. Oh, but there's definitely going to be some boobjob scenes and a lot more teasing!
 

Verdance

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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And i totally get you, the same thoughts were going through my head when I was making the first chapter (about too much text), so for the next one, I'm focusing a lot more on different scenes (especially now that i dont have to draw so many Hina sprites, haha).
Honestly, I disagree with that first comment. I like how much text there is as it fleshes out the characters more (which works because your writing is so well done and the character in question is so personable). Some people are more interested in sex and whatnot of course but, at least for me, I'm following this game for the narrative.
 

DocRipper

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Very nice work. Sweet, humorous and light. That's always nice.
I have to agree that the balance is Ok. Of course more art and frequent scene changes are always a big plus, but it's good. No extremely boring wall of texts, no extreme poetic shit or describing every dust on the floor. So its really "visual" and no"text-based" tag here.:D
Good job.
 
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