Verdance
Newbie
- Apr 17, 2019
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This was a wonderful first chapter. The art is adorable and the writing is so charming. I'll definitely have to follow the progress of this one.
Thank you! And yes, i do! Just saw that it was uploaded here. Waiting for the mods to give me the developer tag.Nice concept, the artstyle is very provocative and the interactions between Hina and the MC are cute and fun. Will come back once more updates are out. Does the dev use this site?
Thank you! I actually had the idea of making 2 separate games, one about demons and one about a shut-in. Then one day, I joined them together... and here we are!Demon NEET, as a concept, is far more erotic than it has any right to be. Kudos to MrJack for bringing birthing such a combination, or whoever did it first if it wasn't him.
Thank you! Planning on adding some cuddles in the next chapter!Just from preview pics, it looks really cute and adorable and the girl is very pretty too. I am actually very interested to check this out.
I hope we can get some cuddles with the cute demon.
Thank you so much, spent a lot of time on her design! Working hard on Chapter 2 right now and planning on making every Chapter better than the previous one.HOLYYYYYYYYYYYYYY this is so good!!!!!!!!!!
The art is amazing, i really couldn't ask for something better this is just perfect (i hope it maintains this quality)
I can't wait to see how this continues, i'm so invested in this game!
Also Hina is just perfect btw, her design is so cute and hot at the same time, i love her!
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!Very good game with good artwork and very original story. To me (and that's only my taste), the only criticism I can do on this one is that there is a little bit (just a little bit) too much text for not enough renderings (but it match with the atmosphere of the game so not really annoying) and for now it's much more a Kinetic Novel than a game (player doesn't have much interactions to do) but well, it's only the 1st chapter so I imagine that there will be more interactions to come!
Anyway, I had a really good time with this game and wait to see what's coming next!
Glad you enjoyed it! I like the replay gallery idea, i'll look into it! (Even though i'm new to programming so i think i'll need some help heh)A promising start to a fun looking VN! The art is well-done and Hina is just so gosh darn adorkable, I just want to head pat her all day. HUGE bonus adding sex sounds, please keep doing that. You should also consider adding a replay gallery with the MC name we've picked. Also, what fetishes are planned? (I hope there's pregnant sex, but it's by no means a deal breaker)
Honestly, I disagree with that first comment. I like how much text there is as it fleshes out the characters more (which works because your writing is so well done and the character in question is so personable). Some people are more interested in sex and whatnot of course but, at least for me, I'm following this game for the narrative.Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
And i totally get you, the same thoughts were going through my head when I was making the first chapter (about too much text), so for the next one, I'm focusing a lot more on different scenes (especially now that i dont have to draw so many Hina sprites, haha).