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Yeah, I coun't that, there's only one scene, yes, but there's a scene, and with no animation. I hope the dev will improve is game with more scenes and animations, (video, or frame by frame ...)
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guy i just play this update it not have any sex scene yet just plot, i think you guy need to wait
Like I said for the first, initial release, it's a good setup. The problem (and one plaguing most stories, mainstream included, imo): There's no hook. You're building all this foundation, but you haven't given us a reason to care about the foundation, yet. Throw something spicy in there right away, and keep spicy stuff consistent. There's too much exposition without anything noteworthy or attention grabbing happening. Maybe add something to the yoga scene. My personal taste would be to do something with the outfit, like either make it expose more of her breasts and the MC can comment about how revealing it is, or maybe have her doing it fully exposed, but she hears him approach and he walks in on her hastily having fixed it (hinting at an exhibitionist kink, or maybe a secret watcher she puts a show on for in the mornings when he's usually asleep). Maybe have a phone call in the middle of the day where she's out of breath. Was she working out again? Was she masturbating? Was she cheating already? We don't know. Maybe she could send him a saucy selfie to encourage him to keep to his promise of getting home before 6.
There's a lot of things that could be added in, but right now, it's too dry. The potential is there, but don't take too long to hook us.
There's a lot of things that could be added in, but right now, it's too dry. The potential is there, but don't take too long to hook us.
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Yet another random black dude NTR game. How original... is the random black dude a mandatory requirement for these?
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I'm happy with this second update, like before i said the intro was somewhat boring, you sure turned that around with this new update and made it even more interesting with this scary case endanger his firm. Also the cliffhanger at the end was sublime good. Keep up writing like this and it will be a great story even with the NTR or no NTR depending what the paths all be. I'm looking forward to the future of this VN, as it look promising now.
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Why think it will be a black guy? It after all Japan, not that many black guys there, unless the ntr will happen on one of those fancy places his boss offered him to go if he takes the case. I just hope it not true as the black bull ntr is somewhat boring and overused already. I rather hope it more his right hand being the bull or the reason the firm is in trouble while he ntr all the women. I just hope the dev keeps up the good start and will see what sort ntr it be.
Hello DEV
I have read your description of the VN and I need to give my personal opinion of your plans for future PATHS..
Please don't see my comment as degrading, hostile or rude....
The problem I have with PATHS.. "maybe 2 paths at the most" is that you, the DEV will work your behind off to update all the PATHS,... and due to this, you will have to release One PATH say every 2 months and The "path" That I'm on... will only be updated once a year...
Sad.. but its true.... I don't support a VN monthly.. If its only updated once a year... regardless 4 releases a year.. All the paths... mmmm... I don't think so.... Sorry, but I have to pass..
Good luck with your VN..
I have read your description of the VN and I need to give my personal opinion of your plans for future PATHS..
Please don't see my comment as degrading, hostile or rude....
The problem I have with PATHS.. "maybe 2 paths at the most" is that you, the DEV will work your behind off to update all the PATHS,... and due to this, you will have to release One PATH say every 2 months and The "path" That I'm on... will only be updated once a year...
Sad.. but its true.... I don't support a VN monthly.. If its only updated once a year... regardless 4 releases a year.. All the paths... mmmm... I don't think so.... Sorry, but I have to pass..
Good luck with your VN..
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