VN Ren'Py Naruto: Shinobi Lord [v0.27 Public] [Cats-creators]

[3D Novelist]

Game started promising, but too much unavoidable voyeurism for me. I just have no luck with post-Naruto stories, sad life.
Recommendation: Add a preview image of Naruto and Hinata having sex to the OP, so people know what they are getting themselves into. If the previews only show the MC having sex, that's what I expect to get from the game.

 

[Momimop]

Game started promising, but too much unavoidable voyeurism for me. I just have no luck with post-Naruto stories, sad life.
Recommendation: Add a preview image of Naruto and Hinata having sex to the OP, so people know what they are getting themselves into. If the previews only show the MC having sex, that's what I expect to get from the game.

There are only 3 scenes in the game where Naruto as Hinata's husband fucks her at the beginning of the story, the rest of the game consists of the main character having sex with other kunuichi. I don't think it's that scary. But we plan to add an alternate walkthrough at the beginning of the game where the Naruto scene can be avoided anyway.

 

[Dant3lion]

Thanks for the praise! Regarding the gallery, I checked it's the moment where you fuck pregnant Mirai at the hot springs, most likely it's closed by mistake, I'll see what I can do

Dev, maybe you can add a Cheating and Netorare tag? (mainly this game has netori elements, but there is only one similar tag). Not all the girls have a husband/boyfriend, but many of them.

 

[Momimop]

Dev, maybe you can add a Cheating and Netorare tag? (mainly this game has netori elements, but there is only one similar tag). Not all the girls have a husband/boyfriend, but many of them.

I don't think the ntr tag is appropriate in my story, here the main character is getting all the girls, not sharing his girl with someone else

 

[Dant3lion]

I don't think the ntr tag is appropriate in my story, here the main character is getting all the girls, not sharing his girl with someone else

Therefore, it is a pity that there is no corresponding genre here... What about another tag? Because if you will continue to make plots with differents girls, most of main female characters have partners, so it's cheating (right now it's mainly Hinata and Sakura, but in the future...).

 

[3D Novelist]

There are only 3 scenes in the game where Naruto as Hinata's husband fucks her at the beginning of the story, the rest of the game consists of the main character having sex with other kunuichi. I don't think it's that scary. But we plan to add an alternate walkthrough at the beginning of the game where the Naruto scene can be avoided anyway.

The thing is, as a player you don't know that. You run into that first scene and right into the second and that's when you quit.

I mean, I can live with the fact that they have sex. They are married and not every character has to be a virgin. (Even though it would have been perfectly reasonable to say Naruto and Hinate didn't have sex for a while because he's too busy all the time. Which would have given the MC a perfect opportunity to win Hinata over.) But fine if they have an active sex life, let them have it. But when the MC gets told he can go and watch them he acts like it's a dream come true while I'm sitting here thinking: Wtf dude you're supposed to be me but you are not thinking like me at all.

Spoiler: Hinata Romance Path

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But if it's planned to make that content optional, that's good news. I'll wait for that update then. Maybe until then I forgot about the images I just saw.

 

[Momimop]

Therefore, it is a pity that there is no corresponding genre here... What about another tag? Because if you will continue to make plots with differents girls, most of main female characters have partners, so it's cheating (right now it's mainly Hinata and Sakura, but in the future...).

Yeah, you'd think they'd actually cheat on their husbands

 

[Momimop]

The thing is, as a player you don't know that. You run into that first scene and right into the second and that's when you quit.

I mean, I can live with the fact that they have sex. They are married and not every character has to be a virgin. (Even though it would have been perfectly reasonable to say Naruto and Hinate didn't have sex for a while because he's too busy all the time. Which would have given the MC a perfect opportunity to win Hinata over.) But fine if they have an active sex life, let them have it. But when the MC gets told he can go and watch them he acts like it's a dream come true while I'm sitting here thinking: Wtf dude you're supposed to be me but you are not thinking like me at all.

Spoiler: Hinata Romance Path

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But if it's planned to make that content optional, that's good news. I'll wait for that update then. Maybe until then I forgot about the images I just saw.

This reaction of the protagonist is due to the fact that he essentially entered the world of Naruto from our world. And seeing fictional characters from his favourite anime fuck in real life is like "watching Naruto fandom porn on pornhub, but in real life". It's just a funny moment, no one is forcing you to consider yourself a cuckold because of it.

As for the logic of the path of romance with Hinata and watching her as it relates, I'll explain. This is where you have to read into the story, although there could probably be problems with that, since before 0.10-0.15 the English translation was just awful. But we are working on replacing the translation, by the way. So, to go down the path of romance, you need sexual memories with Hinata to activate the power that Kamiko gave you. That's why you follow Hinata and Naruto to get the memories.

Of course you may have your own point of view on this topic, but at first the main character is getting used to his new surroundings, this world still doesn't seem so real to him. So watching Naruto and Hinata is not such a big moral problem for him, they are the heroes he jerked off to while sitting at home.

 

[3D Novelist]

This reaction of the protagonist is due to the fact that he essentially entered the world of Naruto from our world. And seeing fictional characters from his favourite anime fuck in real life is like "watching Naruto fandom porn on pornhub, but in real life". It's just a funny moment, no one is forcing you to consider yourself a cuckold because of it.

I can see that, the important thing that has changed is, that now Hinata turned from a "random" girl to a love interest.

As for the logic of the path of romance with Hinata and watching her as it relates, I'll explain. This is where you have to read into the story, although there could probably be problems with that, since before 0.10-0.15 the English translation was just awful. But we are working on replacing the translation, by the way. So, to go down the path of romance, you need sexual memories with Hinata to activate the power that Kamiko gave you. That's why you follow Hinata and Naruto to get the memories.

Not sure that makes sense to me, wouldn't it make more sense if the mc needed more romantic memories with Hinata, like eating noodle soup with her, complimenting her, buying her flowers etc. to get on the romance path? Sexual energy seems more fit for the more secual corruption path. But maybe things will be more clear once I read the respective dialog.

Of course you may have your own point of view on this topic, but at first the main character is getting used to his new surroundings, this world still doesn't seem so real to him. So watching Naruto and Hinata is not such a big moral problem for him, they are the heroes he jerked off to while sitting at home.

The important difference is, that when you watch that fandom porn you imagine yourself to be the hero, the person to do the fucking, not to be an observer. (At least that's the way it is for me and based on what I read on the web for many others as well). The moment the MC entered the world of Naruto as his own character, that's no longer possible because he would be two characters in the same "story". Same applies to me as the player in general for all the games out there with a Main character. If you play as the MC you are the MC and none of the other characters in the game. And for those "not interested" in watching others have sex, any sex that is not with the MC is "not of interest".

Having said all that, these are my personal thoughts as an individual player.
Develop the game as you see fit. If it matches my taste, I would be happy, but if it doesn't, it will fit someone elses.

 

[Mesmerizet]

Have not seen a game more ridden than paywalls, even EA does a better job.