- Apr 2, 2018
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Drawing is great, but going down the NTR route, which this is clearly going down even if it's not strictly NTR just yet, it's headed that way, is something you really need to be upfront about. Just be upfront about it, there's an audience for that, play to your audience so they know it's there and the rest of us can just walk away instead of being annoyed at the promise of something very different.
Make story choices... Erm if I can't decide that I don't really wanna be a little voyeur on someone who's going to be a LI for me, the MC then... where's my choice? Don't say there's story choices, when there's no story choices.
Make story choices... Erm if I can't decide that I don't really wanna be a little voyeur on someone who's going to be a LI for me, the MC then... where's my choice? Don't say there's story choices, when there's no story choices.