VN Ren'Py Abandoned Nature's Twats [v0.0.2] [TOILETdev_2976]

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TheDeadOne891

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Personally I would like an Older Sister/Older Roommate but if there isn't one added then I guess I can settle with the Milf
 

TOILETdev_2976

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Jun 3, 2019
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toilet Developer

Why would U name yourself a ''TOILET'' ??


Advice from my heart :

IF U VIEW YOURSELF AS AN GARBAGE SHIT ETC. YOU ARE ALREADY DOOMED AND NOT BELIEVE IN YOURSELF.
I understand U said in intro ''balance in between dev and school'' but seems like U not believe in your work or yourself so how to expect from others to believe in you and your work or this game ??
It was my name on a gmod rp server and it just kind of stuck, personally this is just a hobby and I don't plan on making money yet, school should always come first so that you have a back up.

Dudes and dudettes, let's all give a warm welcome to the porn TITLE OF THE YEAR. lmao

Is the TOILET avoidable?


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What do you mean by is the TOILET avoidable, If you check the itch.io page you'll find all of the current info I have put out (its not much) but TOILET was my gmod rp name and it just kind of stuck

So is the trap going to be one of the MC's *ncest relationships? It does make me sad that type of scenario pretty much never gets explored.
I explain in the intro/demo that the trap is MC's younger br*ther/roommate

Is this a joke? there isn't even any demo here, the dev just introduced generic koikatsu characters in a single scene but used 5 different low res images to do it... he doesn't even know how to use the engine yet.
How was this even approved to be posted here? there is no game
No, not a joke.
The "demo" is more of an intro
And the intro isn't even in the final form, the images were a fuck up on my part (obviously)
And yes I am brand new to the ren'py engine
If you have a problem with me exercising my first amendment right to produce any content I want and to post it anywhere I want maybe you should get off of the internet.
Have a wonderful day

TOILETDev? what?
It was my gmod rp name and it just kind of stuck

what fetishes are planning?
Voyerism
GILF
MILF
BDSM
Wincest
Trap
Pet kink (human pet not animal you sick fucks)
and some other shit later on

Trap fine(bottom only), incest ambivalent, Pregnancy sure. MC only dick going in and out of holes PLEASE!
WDYM by "MC only dick going in and out of holes PLEASE!"

The trap should be a futa! Traps are gay, futas are not.


Asking for it.
Traps themselves are gay but screwing a trap isn't, because technically they identify as a girl

OK OK I will add pregnancy at the epilogue of the final game

inc.+harem+preggos...the best mix in a vn you can get BUT trap?! for real??? even if you can avoid it, it would only mean if there are 4 girls in the fam. but one is a ladyboy and i dont let her have her way ....means one of the fam is out of the famcircle....and that is a nogo...instead of avoiding better give the choice to make her a real girl if you dislike gaystorys....my english is bad but i hope you get what i wanna say here....good luck
Look, I understand your viewpoint. I might have that as an option later on in the development of the game when I am more comfortable with the ren'py engine.

Thank you for instead of making fun of the game, you gave me your opinion and gave me a possible solution. More people should post their grievances like you.


Have a Wonderful Day

Sure, but at least post it with the tag [Abandoned], if the dude took a weekend to generate the sample renpy project with 5 crooked images before even bothering to learn how to use the engine, you know where this is going.

It's just a perfect demo of what an abandoned project looks like.
I tried being polite, instead of going on a piracy site (nothing against piracy, I am completely for it) and complaining to the person who uploaded the file. Come an complain to me the ACTUAL developer with your grievances. And how about giving me some possible solutions to these "problems" you are imagining. I am a complete beginner with ren'py.

Anal! Anal! Anal! Put in in trap back canal. If you impregnate traps you will find yourself in another japan game. But be serious. Game needs much more content than some short screens. Pregnacy should be for sure but as a option. Graphics is average, and text ok. Please make as much content before uploading this game on site. Bigger updates not fast but sloppy.
Thank you for your input.

I don't really think anal is a fetish so I didn't put it on the list.

I just wanted to get the bear minimum out to test the waters and see how people would receive it.

and it is far from done

I hope more people will be as polite as you about informing others of their issues with the project.
 
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Pajumbas

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Do you think you would ever be up for adding feminization or bimbofication content to this game?
 

hmtot

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I've played enough games to know that this project is a flop. If the developer was serious about making a game, he would at least attempt to make one, instead of uploading a generic, low effort intro that anyone without prior knowledge of Ren'Py could do in literally 15 minutes.
Right now this is 99% expectations, 1% actual content. People in this site are not too keen on negative criticism, but reality is not that utopia of positivity and success. What I hope to happen now is that the developer either ditch this game, or start taking it seriously.
 
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WDYM by "MC only dick going in and out of holes PLEASE!"



Traps themselves are gay but screwing a trap isn't, because technically they identify as a girl

OK OK I will add pregnancy at the epilogue of the final game
i agree, being a trap is gay, but screwing a trap is manly.
also that guy meant that he doesnt want the mc to be penetrated, personally i dont mind that if its a futa, but if its in the game it should definetly be an optional route.
 

TOILETdev_2976

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Jun 3, 2019
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I've played enough games to know that this project is a flop. If the developer was serious about making a game, he would at least attempt to make one, instead of uploading a generic, low effort intro that anyone without prior knowledge of Ren'Py could do in literally 15 minutes.
Right now this is 99% expectations, 1% actual content. People in this site are not too keen on negative criticism, but reality is not that utopia of positivity and success. What I hope to happen now is that the developer either ditch this game, or start taking it seriously.
Well you were right, its dead


For Now,



I will revisit it, just need a better understanding of python and Koikatu studio


However i disagree with you in one way,


what you said was not criticism, criticism helps the dev grow and create better content, just saying its bad and it all expectations doesn't help anyone, it only helps you get over the fact you don't have a life other than these games, i understand you have all of the time in the world to focus on just creating a game, thats if you had the means. You should have said, "maybe you should have waited until you had a game that was more than just an intro, that could help keep more people invested," that is what is called constructive criticism, a gift to not only the dev but also the consumer.



Sincerely,
A Rather Salty Dev Who Is Just Mad That You Saw Straight Through Him
 

TOILETdev_2976

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Jun 3, 2019
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Well, could be interesting but if this is a v0.0.2 i don't even want to know what the content was in v0.01, right now it's literally a 30 second demo introducing the main characters in the game.
0.0.1 was a broken piece of shit that just crashed when it was opened, only figure that out when I downloaded the uploaded build and played it, so I fixed it and it was then a new version cause I added some more text while I was fixing it.
 

hmtot

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Well you were right, its dead


For Now,



I will revisit it, just need a better understanding of python and Koikatu studio


However i disagree with you in one way,


what you said was not criticism, criticism helps the dev grow and create better content, just saying its bad and it all expectations doesn't help anyone, it only helps you get over the fact you don't have a life other than these games, i understand you have all of the time in the world to focus on just creating a game, thats if you had the means. You should have said, "maybe you should have waited until you had a game that was more than just an intro, that could help keep more people invested," that is what is called constructive criticism, a gift to not only the dev but also the consumer.



Sincerely,
A Rather Salty Dev Who Is Just Mad That You Saw Straight Through Him
I usually consider feedback a valid sort of criticism. The constructive criticism you seek is usually given when there's content to criticize. Your game, as of now, is pretty much a blank canvas, so the amount of constructive criticism people can give is very limited, which is why most people are giving suggestions of what they want to be implemented. The goal of my comment was to alert people not to have too much expectations on a project that was most likely to flop.
My suggestion to you and any other developer here is to only upload projects that you intent to finish, and take it seriously. The amount of games that were abandoned, even after receiving a serious amount of money from people with high expectations, is very concerning. I'd rather not have the site flooded with rushed ideas that will never be released. Don't take my words personally, think of them as a wake up call, if you plan to devote yourself into making more games in the future.

And don't insult people, saying that "they don't have a life other than these games", when someone in your playerbase says something you don't like. That comes off as extremely rude, and only serves as a way to break the trust people give you, when downloading your game, taking their time to play it and even leave a comment.

That's all I have to say in this topic, I hope my words get through you, and wish you luck in the future.
 

CutieLvr

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It is really sad that people can be so cruel with their words, ignoring the fact that we are all human and we all share the same feelings and emotions. We all hurt, bleed and love and cry. There is no room for haters on this site or anywhere else and just quickly scanning some of these comments I can see that there are a lot of haters when all you have to do is go away and find something else to your liking. If you downloaded this game or any game and decide that you don't like it, for goodness' sake just "DELETE IT" and go away. I hope you decide to bring this game back TOILETdev_2976. I love femboy games, good ones are so hard to find and I'm sure you have plenty of fans.
 
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CutieLvr

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Am I doing something wrong here? I start the game and you are introduced to the actors and then the game starts again, just like you just opened the game. Before, I delete the game, am I doing something wrong? Or this is all there is to it?
 

hmtot

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It is really sad that people can be so cruel with their words, ignoring the fact that we are all human and we all share the same feelings and emotions. We all hurt, bleed and love and cry. There is no room for haters on this site or anywhere else and just quickly scanning some of these comments I can see that there are a lot of haters when all you have to do is go away and find something else to your liking. If you downloaded this game or any game and decide that you don't like it, for goodness' sake just "DELETE IT" and go away. I hope you decide to bring this game back TOILETdev_2976. I love femboy games, good ones are so hard to find and I'm sure you have plenty of fans.
If you can't accept constructive criticism, that's on you. To label anyone who does so as "hater" just goes to show how childish and intolerant your views are. This is a forum, a place for people to share opinions and ideas, and especially for feedback, so the developers can improve their games. But you're welcome to share if I've personally attacked anyone, or "hated" on the game.
 
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