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Farming ain't easy.How did Alice go from 10 years old to 50 in 10 years? ROFLMAO
what a weird thing to point out, also irrelevant. don't understand what your goal was???I mean you ignore other posters too, why would he bother to look at yours opinion seriously![]()
The update is currently in early-access for Patreons and will be available to the public on Nov 24th.update anyone???
who's samarah, i dont remember herVoting results are in for the Samarah choice! Interesting, 60% if users opted to kill her while 40% of users spared her, meaning the decision is a bit more split than some people initially believed (myself included). Excellent job BuuPlays for implementing such a divisive choice!
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I wouldn't say the story is wholesome, but rather gets you invested into it's characters with adequate screen time and well written dialogue. The undertone is a bit more insidious as some of the plot developments are a direct result of the MC's main goal (avenging his parents). All of that is drowned out by the interactions you have with Eliza and Borri in the first 2 chapters.
I think she is selena's sisterwho's samarah, i dont remember her
6 more days! I'm broke and unemployedThe update is currently in early-access for Patreons and will be available to the public on Nov 24th.![]()
Obviously, I'm not the dev, but I don't agree with some of your criticisms.Hmm. It's a promising start, but there are too many problems to give it 5 stars. I'd give it a tentative 4 right now, but that'd lower its rating, so I'll just wait.
There are definite plusses: the writing is good (although I spotetd a few typos), the girls are different and interesting, and quite attractive, and the story is interesting. I'm much better at writing criticisms, to be honest:
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I haven't seen how she is when you're not on her path, but she doesn't even particularly like him, I think it's fair to say that she tolerates him. Additionally, people generally don't like to see a LI end up with other guys, even when they aren't on their route, so I'm going to go ahead and say that's a 99% chance of not happening. I wouldn't mind a side character being introduced specifically as a LI for Flynn because he's a good guy, but it would be distasteful to pawn a rejected LI off onto him.Can anybody tell me if Flynn ends up being Kelly if you don't ? I'm kind of getting that impression.
I'm on her route so far but I would not mind giving the guy a win if that's actually a thing.
A: it's a human whose breasts I'm complaining about. B: it's not an attractive shape. It's really wierd. They could be the shape of the Washington Monument, but I wouldn't be a fan of that either. If the reason for the shape is because the character got a boobjob, then it's plot and character at the cost of attractiveness. Here it's not.It's literally a fantasy game with goblins, fairies, magic, angels, etc, but someone having unrealistic titties is too much? This is just silly.
In the US, 10 years old is elementary school. I remember a bit about elementary school. Yes, people had crushes, often foolishly mistaking them for love, but they didn't last 10 months, let alone 10 years. 10 year olds can have affections that they perceive as strong, and humans can remain in love for many years, but 10 year old humans can't do both at the same time. My experiences tell me that that is not plausible.I strongly disagree that 10 year olds can't fall in love with each other
-If the problem is that they're unrealistic, she could just make a magic titty alteration potion, problem solved. Except your complaint isn't that her tits are unrealistic, it's simply that you don't like them. To which I would say, just ignore her then, I'm pretty sure she's not even gonna be a LI.A: it's a human whose breasts I'm complaining about. B: it's not an attractive shape. It's really wierd. They could be the shape of the Washington Monument, but I wouldn't be a fan of that either. If the reason for the shape is because the character got a boobjob, then it's plot and character at the cost of attractiveness. Here it's not.
In the US, 10 years old is elementary school. I remember a bit about elementary school. Yes, people had crushes, often foolishly mistaking them for love, but they didn't last 10 months, let alone 10 years. 10 year olds can have affections that they perceive as strong, and humans can remain in love for many years, but 10 year old humans can't do both at the same time. My experiences tell me that that is not plausible.
As a result, it makes the character unbelievable, thus disconnecting them from the audience. That is too unrealistic, even for fantasy, since it harms the viewer's experience.
As I said, "there are plenty of other ways for them to get set on a romantic path," and this one, which seems completely implausible to me, is thus quite poor.