VN Ren'Py Nephilim [v0.5.0] [BuuPlays]

[Canto Forte]

Are angels not supposed to chaperone people in this new heaven? MC is a nephilim - according to Diablo lore - the best humanity can ever stand to become - so natural leaders and protectors of all damsels who are then put throuhg the task of keeping him well entertained.

Feel free to toast her! She may or may not appear later, but she is not a major story character.

One would think holding the life and death power over her would put MC in the driving seat of her destiny .. especially in those special moments right after MC has proven to be a protector and a white knight in shining armor to the girl he cherishes most in this game - it would go a long way at that moment not to be overly destructive with her right there.

 

[Dessolos]

I just hope when we help Luna we bring Eliza along

 

[Ohvidente]

Feel free to toast her! She may or may not appear later, but she is not a major story character.

It would be a great twist for her to team up with Taron for revenge

 

[DevinHesi]

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[RoadWulf]

Genre tags are important. Things I notice this one doesn't have:
Cheating, Harem, Lesbian

So... exactly what's going on? Sleep with everyone, choose at the end? I mean, you're ostensibly with Eliza with her as your permanent girlfriend, so the lack of a cheating tag is weird. The fact that you can not only keep sleeping with others but that most of them are friendly with each other (though apparently oblivious) makes it weird there's no harem tag. And if there is an ending with multiple girls, it'd be weird for there to be no lesbian tag.

So I'm confused where this one is going.

 

[Dessolos]

Genre tags are important. Things I notice this one doesn't have:
Cheating, Harem, Lesbian

So... exactly what's going on? Sleep with everyone, choose at the end?

I don't recall any Lesbian scenes yet but I could of forgotten if there was one. I just assumed the lack of harem is cause it plays more like a manslut game where you can sleep around than a actual harem game right now if you go that path. Since those encounters play more or less like a one nightstand currently as far as I can recall. Though I think harem is planned. I don't think the harem path is really gonna start until the pirate sisters come back however. But it does have cheating 100%

 

[e6mill]

Genre tags are important. Things I notice this one doesn't have:
Cheating, Harem, Lesbian

 

[amandressedlikeabat]

I like this game, but this episode had some serious problems.

A word for word copy of the scene at the start of the Witcher 3? Even if it's not technically plagiarism, just... why?

Let's not forget the world's most misplaced stab to the heart! The heart is not outside of the nipple. It's slightly off center of the sternum. Google pictures of chest x rays, if you want to see.

"She is totally crushing on you... why aren't you doing something about it?" And he says "It's complicated"? instead of 'We were passionately making out before you arrived.' or just 'I am *winks*.'

Royal bodyguard? I can't think of a more inappropriate job for an adventurer. It would severely limit his freedom, and hamper him in his main goals of ending Taron. "Sorry your majesty, I can't protect your daughter because I'm busy hunting the person who killed my parents and crippled my friend. But I'm sure your daughter will be fine."

And only now is it made clear that the protagonist had a sexual relationship with Rin? I feel like that, and whatever happened between them, is important to his character development. Or would be, if it were written.

And why does he sleep naked with Eliza if they aren't in a relationship? That's weird.

I feel like this game is inching farther and farther away from the path to greatness. (Maybe because it has such a high update pace?)

 

[LordGonti]

I don't recall any Lesbian scenes yet but I could of forgotten if there was one. I just assumed the lack of harem is cause it plays more like a manslut game where you can sleep around than a actual harem game right now if you go that path. Since those encounters play more or less like a one nightstand currently as far as I can recall. Though I think harem is planned. I don't think the harem path is really gonna start until the pirate sisters come back however. But it does have cheating 100%

Petition to make Manslut a tag so you know when you can whore around without getting slapped.

 

[Dessolos]

Thought id respond for fun to the points you didn't like some you do have some valid criticism even if they arent a big deal to me

A word for word copy of the scene at the start of the Witcher 3? Even if it's not technically plagiarism, just... why?

The witcher 3 Egg I think is fun but I get it if you don't like Egg's. I thought it was fun scene.

Let's not forget the world's most misplaced stab to the heart! The heart is not outside of the nipple. It's slightly off center of the sternum. Google pictures of chest x rays, if you want to see.

Never noticed the stab was off meh eh not a big deal a minor detail for me.

"She is totally crushing on you... why aren't you doing something about it?" And he says "It's complicated"? instead of 'We were passionately making out before you arrived.' or just 'I am *winks*.'

I can see this if you are on a path that isn't just Eliza. for me it made sense cause the MC does have feeling for her but I turned Alice down every step of the way never kissed her since it's a Eliza save. So on that save saying it's complicated makes sense 100% but on a Alice path yeah I can understand how this would feel off.

Royal bodyguard? I can't think of a more inappropriate job for an adventurer. It would severely limit his freedom, and hamper him in his main goals of ending Taron. "Sorry your majesty, I can't protect your daughter because I'm busy hunting the person who killed my parents and crippled my friend. But I'm sure your daughter will be fine."

While I can see a scenario where this makes sense it does also feel a bit weird like it's used just to advance the plot. However there is much worst ways to achieve a meeting with the King to move the plot forward. Could it be done better sure but eh not that big of a deal But I do understand why someone else would have issue with this.

And only now is it made clear that the protagonist had a sexual relationship with Rin? I feel like that, and whatever happened between them, is important to his character development. Or would be, if it were written.

At least the pacing feels better than Alice since it's flashbacks and the MC has yet to reunite with Rin while the development with Alice does feel like it's at a standstill right now

And why does he sleep naked with Eliza if they aren't in a relationship? That's weird.

My MC is in a relationship but I heard it does feel weird on a save where you turn Eliza down yet to play a non Eliza save. But if that is the case I can see how that would feel weird 100%

 

[Maviarab]

The witcher 3 Egg I think is fun but I get it if you don't like Egg's. I thought it was fun scene.

The problem with eggs is knowing your market share. This is my biggest issue with Eternum. It's a fun story sure, but for someone who couldn't give a shit about pop-culture and even less of a shit about anime culture...that's all it is to me, a good story and nothing more as I miss all the jokes/references.

I hate the Witcher 3 (had to force myself through all 3 games, just never saw the appeal) so the egg is utterly lost on me. Now, if a dev decided to start adding in Zucker and Abrahams eggs from the 80's, I'd probably catch every one

The Dev here is assuming his core demographic masterbate over the Witcher..eggs are always a little hit and miss unfortunately. *shrugs*

 

[Dessolos]

The problem with eggs is knowing your market share. This is my biggest issue with Eternum. It's a fun story sure, but for someone who couldn;t give a shit about pop-culture and even less of a shit about anime culture...that's all it is to me, a good story and nothing more.

I hate the Witcher 3 (had to force myself through all 3 games, just never saw the appeal) so the egg is utterly lost on me. NOw, if a dev decided to start adding in Zucker and Abrahams eggs from the 80's, I'd probably catch every one The Dev here is assuming his core demographic masterbate over the Witcher...*shrugs*

see what you mean I never heard of Zucker and Abrahams so that be lost to me 100%. Yeah even if im a big Witcher fan I do find it annoying how everyone compares things to it even I do it sometimes lol. At least the Witcher egg isn't out of place in this game.

If that game didn't have some hot characters probably would of never done so good tbh cause reading the books before the 3rd game came out is what made me love the game tbh so I had a biased opinion on it. But yeah if I think about it you are right it's just slighty above average.

 

[Saphfire]

Fimally, the bitch

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gets what she deserves! Still feels wrong that the sister had to die but well,
Please give us(me) Rin content. She should be a li from the beginning. Oh and yeah, you´ve earned a yearly B rank sub from me, well deserved.

 

[ntohugo]

I like this game, but this episode had some serious problems.

A word for word copy of the scene at the start of the Witcher 3? Even if it's not technically plagiarism, just... why?

Let's not forget the world's most misplaced stab to the heart! The heart is not outside of the nipple. It's slightly off center of the sternum. Google pictures of chest x rays, if you want to see.

"She is totally crushing on you... why aren't you doing something about it?" And he says "It's complicated"? instead of 'We were passionately making out before you arrived.' or just 'I am *winks*.'

Royal bodyguard? I can't think of a more inappropriate job for an adventurer. It would severely limit his freedom, and hamper him in his main goals of ending Taron. "Sorry your majesty, I can't protect your daughter because I'm busy hunting the person who killed my parents and crippled my friend. But I'm sure your daughter will be fine."

And only now is it made clear that the protagonist had a sexual relationship with Rin? I feel like that, and whatever happened between them, is important to his character development. Or would be, if it were written.

And why does he sleep naked with Eliza if they aren't in a relationship? That's weird.

I feel like this game is inching farther and farther away from the path to greatness. (Maybe because it has such a high update pace?)

I'm totally confused with this storyline, especially since the pirate "story" began.
The MC should be focused on slaughtering Taron and his whole clan, but instead, we're getting some more useless LI's..
That has to be good, right?

 

[Dessolos]

I'm totally confused with this storyline, especially since the pirate "story" began.
The MC should be focused on slaughtering Taron and his whole clan, but instead, we're getting some more useless LI's..
That has to be good, right?

The pirate Arc was to get a an ancient relic to attempt to heal Eliza. This next part is a spoiler not sure how far you played.
But then we get side tracked slightly again cause of her turning into a Vampire, but we do meet Luna which has some involvement with Taron .

Update spoiler While we get side tracked again becoming a bodyguard we also learn the mage that has hex'd Luna's mother is a high ranking mage and Luna wants to help us get revenge so we made a new ally. So all in all while we do get a bit side tracked there is some slow progression when it comes to Taron. Should it be faster and made a priority? considering what has happened I think it's good decision not to rush into things when it comes to Taron until Eliza gets more in control

 

[ntohugo]

The pirate Arc was to get a an ancient relic to attempt to heal Eliza. This next part is a spoiler not sure how far you played.
But then we get side tracked slightly again cause of her turning into a Vampire, but we do meet Luna which has some involvement with Taron .

Update spoiler While we get side tracked again becoming a bodyguard we also learn the mage that has hex'd Luna's mother is a high ranking mage and Luna wants to help us get revenge so we made a new ally. So all in all while we do get a bit side tracked there is some slow progression when it comes to Taron. Should it be faster and made a priority? considering what has happened I think it's good decision not to rush into things when it comes to Taron until Eliza gets more in control

I played the whole game, no worries.
I agree with almost everything you said. I just think the focus should be on Taron and helping Luna (such a cutie), but every time we make a LITTLE progress on this, we also get sidetracked. And now again, for what? For some royal pussy, of course. Why not?

On another note, if she lost control against taron that would be AWESOME, at least for me. heh

Edit: I forgot about the relic, that part should have taken 2-3 updates, but it was dragged on too much, becoming just boring.

 

[Dessolos]

I played the whole game, no worries.
I agree with almost everything you said. I just think the focus should be on Taron and helping Luna (such a cutie), but every time we make a LITTLE progress on this, we also get sidetracked. And now again, for what? For some royal pussy, of course. Why not?

On another note, if she lost control against taron that would AWESOME, at least for me. heh

Edit: I forgot about the relic, that part should have taken 2-3 updates, but it was dragged on too much, becoming just boring.

I just hope we bring Eliza along when we help Luna or im gonna be disappointed.

 

[BuuPlays]

I just hope we bring Eliza along when we help Luna or im gonna be disappointed.

Hey Desso, if you aren't already a part of our discord, you should head over as there's a feedback channel which you can use to suggest ideas, bring issues to light and such, it's much easier to have things compiled in one place as I can easily miss stuff from forums.

I hadn't thought to bring Eliza along for the Luna mission, would love to hear why you feel that is important, given Eliza and Luna only have their friendship with Alice in common.

 

[Kyounshi]

A whole section of this update is definitely a Witcher reference. I want to punch the Chamberlain just as much in this game as I did in the Witcher.

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

A whole section of this update is definitely a Witcher reference. I want to punch the Chamberlain just as much in this game as I did in the Witcher.

Yeah he has that effect