Liked the game very much.
At some point I suddenly realized that one of key aspects of the game, that I liked so much, is a wholesome banter. Most of the time it is not the usual cliché of "I cannot go back to normal life because how he makes me feel" stuff or some kind of blackmail. I like that people in story so far do have some flaws, but they act like adults who just try to explore what they find hot in life. It is simple, yet believable to me.
Starting chapters somewhat hinted that MC would like to have fun with other girls. Would be great. I personally would prefer for MC to have ability to have sweet time with someone. Especially Ashley, she is adorable and looks like someone who would easily go to town if all parties are okay with such outcome. So... go-go
Team Ashley !
Art is great too, as someone who is enthusiastic about generative networks myself I'm pleased to see the level of consistency that you managed to achieve. I assume it is some kind of homebrew Lora at work. Am I right?
Liked the idea with 3 modes of play: Laura is sub/norm/dom and how they impact the flavor of text. They are no more than spice, but spices are important too.
Speaking about spices and personal feels from the game.
But my emotional reaction is a good sign that you managed to get under my skin, so such
"misconducts" maybe a good tool for making your players to experience something during their dom Laura walkthrough.
Would wish to share some unique observations about sub Laura, as I like this mode more. Sadly, don't have any at the moment.
Other than that you already made a great job and got me hooked so I wish you a smooth sailing during development.