VN Unity Netorase Phone [v0.15.3] [Le Stag]

[Adamska]

Feedback + warning for Dom enjoyers, Sub enjoyers please scroll on:

Chapter 27 reads like Stag was angry/bitter at negative feedback and went out of his way to cram as much passive beta cuckery as possible into the chat log. Dominant route players have written pages of feedback explaining why these specific things were the opposite of a turn on, and the response was to turn the dial to 11 on all of them?

This isn't an MC Avatar, it's a DINO (Dom In Name Only), and I will refer to him as such from now on. I would like to ask what is remotely Dominant about this route? DINO isn't even Laura's primary partner, priority, or desire. She pines for Nathan and Oliver while treating DINO like a kid she's babysitting and needs to check in on occasionally.

1. When Laura "needs to get fucked good," she fills her calendar with everyone but her actual boyfriend. She schedules back-to-back fuck sessions with her two new boyfriends to relax after a tough day, telling DINO what her plans are only after she's confirmed them with her other boyfriends.
2. The bulls take the lead and tell DINO what he will like in the bedroom (again).
3. I think Stag believes he's making the bulls look like cool dudes because they're the ones to remember to take pictures instead of Laura (which was supposed to be the entire point of Laura doing this in the first place). This doesn't make the bulls look cool, it makes Laura look like a negligent and selfish partner every single time it happens, and it happens all the time now.
4. Multiple Yes/Yes troll options because of course we have to be enthusiastic about whatever Laura wants no matter what it is in a text game.
5. Rough throat fuck cum guzzling from two boyfriends in a row so she "goes home to DINO with a sore throat and a stomach full of cum" (ick). But hey, at least she decided not to go home (again)!
6. Laura's mind going blank while fucking the bulls and forgetting to keep DINO in the loop (again).
7. Basically every conversation between DINO and Laura goes like this: "I'm at boyfriend (2/3)'s house, remember they own me whenever I hang out with them (which is always) and I'm their good little toy/girl/slut now not yours and I was made just for my bull's pleasure and I've always been a slut I'm just being honest now (actual quote like 2 minutes after telling DINO I'm the slut you made me), I have to listen to them not you because I'm with them now, Boyfriend (2/3) took pictures because I forgot to but maybe he'll send them to you later with a few snide insults because he loves to tease you too DINO lehotface you like when my boyfriends taunt and tease you right? (Yes/Yes) oh yeah I thought so they'll do it more since you like it so much, I'm finally fucking a big dick (unlike DINO) and they have such good stamina (unlike DINO) I needed this and I was going to tell you what happened but then Nathan texted me so I didn't because priorities hehe...." on and on and on with this bitch. Of course DINO says Yes m'lady or OK to every damn thing.
8. The tamest pictures in the land for THEE (from Laura's whore friend who literally picked up and fucked a stranger that very day), multiple boyfriends having back-to-back depraved sex romps while taking pictures for their private and for-profit porn collections that they may or may not choose to share with DINO for ME.
9. Sleeping over at the bull house (again) then apologizing (again) then DINO saying no problem lehotface (again). I can feel the heat and testosterone through the screen!

Chapter 27 is a billboard-sized middle finger with neon lights for everyone complaining about the Dom route being a sham. Polyamory Phone would be a more accurate title at this point. This is a story about Laura building relationships with new boyfriends that she finds more attractive than DINO, not a love story about a couple experimenting together for equal pleasure. Laura and her growing harem of boyfriends is just grossing me out at this point, she has more on-screen chemistry with an abusive asshole she just met at a biker bar than she does with the "love of her life." Might check back for the new Very Dom route, but I think all hope I had of this game turning around for readers with testosterone has been extinguished.

 

[nickohoma]

Haven't played the newest chapters yet but that's disappointing if accurate. I don't really care about dom stuff, but the MC has been a doormat/afterthought since Ch15 or so. Whenever the party at Ashley's happened.

I have difficulty understanding how MC is so chill about things. This game is my first dip into the NT* space though so maybe it's just not my thing.

 

[wommerrx]

Feedback + warning for Dom enjoyers, Sub enjoyers please scroll on:

Chapter 27 reads like Stag was angry/bitter at negative feedback and went out of his way to cram as much passive beta cuckery as possible into the chat log. Dominant route players have written pages of feedback explaining why these specific things were the opposite of a turn on, and the response was to turn the dial to 11 on all of them?

This isn't an MC Avatar, it's a DINO (Dom In Name Only), and I will refer to him as such from now on. I would like to ask what is remotely Dominant about this route? DINO isn't even Laura's primary partner, priority, or desire. She pines for Nathan and Oliver while treating DINO like a kid she's babysitting and needs to check in on occasionally.

1. When Laura "needs to get fucked good," she fills her calendar with everyone but her actual boyfriend. She schedules back-to-back fuck sessions with her two new boyfriends to relax after a tough day, telling DINO what her plans are only after she's confirmed them with her other boyfriends.
2. The bulls take the lead and tell DINO what he will like in the bedroom (again).
3. I think Stag believes he's making the bulls look like cool dudes because they're the ones to remember to take pictures instead of Laura (which was supposed to be the entire point of Laura doing this in the first place). This doesn't make the bulls look cool, it makes Laura look like a negligent and selfish partner every single time it happens, and it happens all the time now.
4. Multiple Yes/Yes troll options because of course we have to be enthusiastic about whatever Laura wants no matter what it is in a text game.
5. Rough throat fuck cum guzzling from two boyfriends in a row so she "goes home to DINO with a sore throat and a stomach full of cum" (ick). But hey, at least she decided not to go home (again)!
6. Laura's mind going blank while fucking the bulls and forgetting to keep DINO in the loop (again).
7. Basically every conversation between DINO and Laura goes like this: "I'm at boyfriend (2/3)'s house, remember they own me whenever I hang out with them (which is always) and I'm their good little toy/girl/slut now not yours and I was made just for my bull's pleasure and I've always been a slut I'm just being honest now (actual quote like 2 minutes after telling DINO I'm the slut you made me), I have to listen to them not you because I'm with them now, Boyfriend (2/3) took pictures because I forgot to but maybe he'll send them to you later with a few snide insults because he loves to tease you too DINO lehotface you like when my boyfriends taunt and tease you right? (Yes/Yes) oh yeah I thought so they'll do it more since you like it so much, I'm finally fucking a big dick (unlike DINO) and they have such good stamina (unlike DINO) I needed this and I was going to tell you what happened but then Nathan texted me so I didn't because priorities hehe...." on and on and on with this bitch. Of course DINO says Yes m'lady or OK to every damn thing.
8. The tamest pictures in the land for THEE (from Laura's whore friend who literally picked up and fucked a stranger that very day), multiple boyfriends having back-to-back depraved sex romps while taking pictures for their private and for-profit porn collections that they may or may not choose to share with DINO for ME.
9. Sleeping over at the bull house (again) then apologizing (again) then DINO saying no problem lehotface (again). I can feel the heat and testosterone through the screen!

Chapter 27 is a billboard-sized middle finger with neon lights for everyone complaining about the Dom route being a sham. Polyamory Phone would be a more accurate title at this point. This is a story about Laura building relationships with new boyfriends that she finds more attractive than DINO, not a love story about a couple experimenting together for equal pleasure. Laura and her growing harem of boyfriends is just grossing me out at this point, she has more on-screen chemistry with an abusive asshole she just met at a biker bar than she does with the "love of her life." Might check back for the new Very Dom route, but I think all hope I had of this game turning around for readers with testosterone has been extinguished.

I agree 100% with what you said, it seems like the Dom route doesn't change anything and Laura only cares about her own desire to have sex with other men other than the MC, it seems like she doesn't care about her "boyfriend" anymore and just wants to fuck Nathan and Oliver and doesn't care about the MC's opinion anymore, the game has become just what Laura wants to do even if the MC doesn't want to and the MC only has yes/yes answers.

 

[Lagunavii]

I agree 100% with what you said, it seems like the Dom route doesn't change anything and Laura only cares about her own desire to have sex with other men other than the MC, it seems like she doesn't care about her "boyfriend" anymore and just wants to fuck Nathan and Oliver and doesn't care about the MC's opinion anymore, the game has become just what Laura wants to do even if the MC doesn't want to and the MC only has yes/yes answers.

Yes there is clear disparity between the Dom and Sub Route. MC is definitely not a Dom, however he is somewhat a Sub in both routes.

The fact she falls asleep and refuses to come home after her sex day is telling. On the Dom route it should be "no come home now" instead Laura is calling the shots. As she does in all routes.

I know it's a NTR game and there needs to be at least another guy so we "need" Oliver. But come on. The MC should be calling the shots on the Dom route. Ie MC should be texting the other guys or vice versa arranging meets. Laura should not be involved.

Get a tinder style app on there for MC to set up a profile for Laura, select her matches for her and then tell her she's meeting another man.

 

[akki_sky]

Feedback + warning for Dom enjoyers, Sub enjoyers please scroll on:

Chapter 27 reads like Stag was angry/bitter at negative feedback and went out of his way to cram as much passive beta cuckery as possible into the chat log. Dominant route players have written pages of feedback explaining why these specific things were the opposite of a turn on, and the response was to turn the dial to 11 on all of them?

This isn't an MC Avatar, it's a DINO (Dom In Name Only), and I will refer to him as such from now on. I would like to ask what is remotely Dominant about this route? DINO isn't even Laura's primary partner, priority, or desire. She pines for Nathan and Oliver while treating DINO like a kid she's babysitting and needs to check in on occasionally.

1. When Laura "needs to get fucked good," she fills her calendar with everyone but her actual boyfriend. She schedules back-to-back fuck sessions with her two new boyfriends to relax after a tough day, telling DINO what her plans are only after she's confirmed them with her other boyfriends.
2. The bulls take the lead and tell DINO what he will like in the bedroom (again).
3. I think Stag believes he's making the bulls look like cool dudes because they're the ones to remember to take pictures instead of Laura (which was supposed to be the entire point of Laura doing this in the first place). This doesn't make the bulls look cool, it makes Laura look like a negligent and selfish partner every single time it happens, and it happens all the time now.
4. Multiple Yes/Yes troll options because of course we have to be enthusiastic about whatever Laura wants no matter what it is in a text game.
5. Rough throat fuck cum guzzling from two boyfriends in a row so she "goes home to DINO with a sore throat and a stomach full of cum" (ick). But hey, at least she decided not to go home (again)!
6. Laura's mind going blank while fucking the bulls and forgetting to keep DINO in the loop (again).
7. Basically every conversation between DINO and Laura goes like this: "I'm at boyfriend (2/3)'s house, remember they own me whenever I hang out with them (which is always) and I'm their good little toy/girl/slut now not yours and I was made just for my bull's pleasure and I've always been a slut I'm just being honest now (actual quote like 2 minutes after telling DINO I'm the slut you made me), I have to listen to them not you because I'm with them now, Boyfriend (2/3) took pictures because I forgot to but maybe he'll send them to you later with a few snide insults because he loves to tease you too DINO lehotface you like when my boyfriends taunt and tease you right? (Yes/Yes) oh yeah I thought so they'll do it more since you like it so much, I'm finally fucking a big dick (unlike DINO) and they have such good stamina (unlike DINO) I needed this and I was going to tell you what happened but then Nathan texted me so I didn't because priorities hehe...." on and on and on with this bitch. Of course DINO says Yes m'lady or OK to every damn thing.
8. The tamest pictures in the land for THEE (from Laura's whore friend who literally picked up and fucked a stranger that very day), multiple boyfriends having back-to-back depraved sex romps while taking pictures for their private and for-profit porn collections that they may or may not choose to share with DINO for ME.
9. Sleeping over at the bull house (again) then apologizing (again) then DINO saying no problem lehotface (again). I can feel the heat and testosterone through the screen!

Chapter 27 is a billboard-sized middle finger with neon lights for everyone complaining about the Dom route being a sham. Polyamory Phone would be a more accurate title at this point. This is a story about Laura building relationships with new boyfriends that she finds more attractive than DINO, not a love story about a couple experimenting together for equal pleasure. Laura and her growing harem of boyfriends is just grossing me out at this point, she has more on-screen chemistry with an abusive asshole she just met at a biker bar than she does with the "love of her life." Might check back for the new Very Dom route, but I think all hope I had of this game turning around for readers with testosterone has been extinguished.

Yes. I also agree with you. Many players including myself have complained about dom path, but dev does not want to create different path. He said there are already many tracking variables already, he can't create more complicated variables. dev's programming inability is stopping this game from being good one.

 

[Dungeridoo]

I am a little concerned with the talk of including the protagonist more directly, mainly because I fear it may mean compromising the immersion. The biggest merit of this game's format is how immersive it is. I understand that it's also very constraining writing-wise to be purely bound to a 'phone pov', but that's also where a great deal of the charm lay.

The voice-to-text scene from a couple updates ago was an example of going in the wrong direction for me, I think. Without the immersive gimmick of 'texting your partner' it just feels like reading somebody else's extremely basic ERP. I half expected to see Nathan don his wizard hat.

I don't really know how to reconcile the limitations without compromising something, so I can only voice my preferences and hope for the best.

 

[Lagunavii]

I don't really know how to reconcile the limitations without compromising something, so I can only voice my preferences and hope for the best.

Unfortunately it's the just the limits of an NTR game. They are in there very nature very "the girlfriend" focused. It's hard to tell them from the bfs pov because ultimately it's always going to be "who is the gf going to fuck today" these types of NTR games, while they can be told from the males perspective... Ultimately to not have limitations they need to be told from the woman's. It is there party after all

 

[tenkay12]

Full save?

 

[jaques]

Feedback + warning for Dom enjoyers, Sub enjoyers please scroll on:

Chapter 27 reads like Stag was angry/bitter at negative feedback and went out of his way to cram as much passive beta cuckery as possible into the chat log. Dominant route players have written pages of feedback explaining why these specific things were the opposite of a turn on, and the response was to turn the dial to 11 on all of them?

This isn't an MC Avatar, it's a DINO (Dom In Name Only), and I will refer to him as such from now on. I would like to ask what is remotely Dominant about this route? DINO isn't even Laura's primary partner, priority, or desire. She pines for Nathan and Oliver while treating DINO like a kid she's babysitting and needs to check in on occasionally.

1. When Laura "needs to get fucked good," she fills her calendar with everyone but her actual boyfriend. She schedules back-to-back fuck sessions with her two new boyfriends to relax after a tough day, telling DINO what her plans are only after she's confirmed them with her other boyfriends.
2. The bulls take the lead and tell DINO what he will like in the bedroom (again).
3. I think Stag believes he's making the bulls look like cool dudes because they're the ones to remember to take pictures instead of Laura (which was supposed to be the entire point of Laura doing this in the first place). This doesn't make the bulls look cool, it makes Laura look like a negligent and selfish partner every single time it happens, and it happens all the time now.
4. Multiple Yes/Yes troll options because of course we have to be enthusiastic about whatever Laura wants no matter what it is in a text game.
5. Rough throat fuck cum guzzling from two boyfriends in a row so she "goes home to DINO with a sore throat and a stomach full of cum" (ick). But hey, at least she decided not to go home (again)!
6. Laura's mind going blank while fucking the bulls and forgetting to keep DINO in the loop (again).
7. Basically every conversation between DINO and Laura goes like this: "I'm at boyfriend (2/3)'s house, remember they own me whenever I hang out with them (which is always) and I'm their good little toy/girl/slut now not yours and I was made just for my bull's pleasure and I've always been a slut I'm just being honest now (actual quote like 2 minutes after telling DINO I'm the slut you made me), I have to listen to them not you because I'm with them now, Boyfriend (2/3) took pictures because I forgot to but maybe he'll send them to you later with a few snide insults because he loves to tease you too DINO lehotface you like when my boyfriends taunt and tease you right? (Yes/Yes) oh yeah I thought so they'll do it more since you like it so much, I'm finally fucking a big dick (unlike DINO) and they have such good stamina (unlike DINO) I needed this and I was going to tell you what happened but then Nathan texted me so I didn't because priorities hehe...." on and on and on with this bitch. Of course DINO says Yes m'lady or OK to every damn thing.
8. The tamest pictures in the land for THEE (from Laura's whore friend who literally picked up and fucked a stranger that very day), multiple boyfriends having back-to-back depraved sex romps while taking pictures for their private and for-profit porn collections that they may or may not choose to share with DINO for ME.
9. Sleeping over at the bull house (again) then apologizing (again) then DINO saying no problem lehotface (again). I can feel the heat and testosterone through the screen!

Chapter 27 is a billboard-sized middle finger with neon lights for everyone complaining about the Dom route being a sham. Polyamory Phone would be a more accurate title at this point. This is a story about Laura building relationships with new boyfriends that she finds more attractive than DINO, not a love story about a couple experimenting together for equal pleasure. Laura and her growing harem of boyfriends is just grossing me out at this point, she has more on-screen chemistry with an abusive asshole she just met at a biker bar than she does with the "love of her life." Might check back for the new Very Dom route, but I think all hope I had of this game turning around for readers with testosterone has been extinguished.

Hitting a lot of the niggling annoyances. I get she needs some kind of friendship with the other dude (although I have no idea how Oliver fits into that), but having dates and sleeping over is a bridge too far. Big red flags. Playing around to the gratification of the couple (so including the MC) is fine, but she should sleep in her own bed (or sleepover at the girls, only the girls)

 

[kialera]

So is the 0.12.1 good for checking out already, or is there going to be a new version with bugfixes soon I should wait for?

 

[Lagunavii]

So is the 0.12.1 good for checking out already, or is there going to be a new version with bugfixes soon I should wait for?

There's already a 0.12.2 just wait a little longer.
This has leaked far too early.

 

[MrNoice]

Feedback + warning for Dom enjoyers, Sub enjoyers please scroll on:

Chapter 27 reads like Stag was angry/bitter at negative feedback and went out of his way to cram as much passive beta cuckery as possible into the chat log. Dominant route players have written pages of feedback explaining why these specific things were the opposite of a turn on, and the response was to turn the dial to 11 on all of them?

This isn't an MC Avatar, it's a DINO (Dom In Name Only), and I will refer to him as such from now on. I would like to ask what is remotely Dominant about this route? DINO isn't even Laura's primary partner, priority, or desire. She pines for Nathan and Oliver while treating DINO like a kid she's babysitting and needs to check in on occasionally.

1. When Laura "needs to get fucked good," she fills her calendar with everyone but her actual boyfriend. She schedules back-to-back fuck sessions with her two new boyfriends to relax after a tough day, telling DINO what her plans are only after she's confirmed them with her other boyfriends.
2. The bulls take the lead and tell DINO what he will like in the bedroom (again).
3. I think Stag believes he's making the bulls look like cool dudes because they're the ones to remember to take pictures instead of Laura (which was supposed to be the entire point of Laura doing this in the first place). This doesn't make the bulls look cool, it makes Laura look like a negligent and selfish partner every single time it happens, and it happens all the time now.
4. Multiple Yes/Yes troll options because of course we have to be enthusiastic about whatever Laura wants no matter what it is in a text game.
5. Rough throat fuck cum guzzling from two boyfriends in a row so she "goes home to DINO with a sore throat and a stomach full of cum" (ick). But hey, at least she decided not to go home (again)!
6. Laura's mind going blank while fucking the bulls and forgetting to keep DINO in the loop (again).
7. Basically every conversation between DINO and Laura goes like this: "I'm at boyfriend (2/3)'s house, remember they own me whenever I hang out with them (which is always) and I'm their good little toy/girl/slut now not yours and I was made just for my bull's pleasure and I've always been a slut I'm just being honest now (actual quote like 2 minutes after telling DINO I'm the slut you made me), I have to listen to them not you because I'm with them now, Boyfriend (2/3) took pictures because I forgot to but maybe he'll send them to you later with a few snide insults because he loves to tease you too DINO lehotface you like when my boyfriends taunt and tease you right? (Yes/Yes) oh yeah I thought so they'll do it more since you like it so much, I'm finally fucking a big dick (unlike DINO) and they have such good stamina (unlike DINO) I needed this and I was going to tell you what happened but then Nathan texted me so I didn't because priorities hehe...." on and on and on with this bitch. Of course DINO says Yes m'lady or OK to every damn thing.
8. The tamest pictures in the land for THEE (from Laura's whore friend who literally picked up and fucked a stranger that very day), multiple boyfriends having back-to-back depraved sex romps while taking pictures for their private and for-profit porn collections that they may or may not choose to share with DINO for ME.
9. Sleeping over at the bull house (again) then apologizing (again) then DINO saying no problem lehotface (again). I can feel the heat and testosterone through the screen!

Chapter 27 is a billboard-sized middle finger with neon lights for everyone complaining about the Dom route being a sham. Polyamory Phone would be a more accurate title at this point. This is a story about Laura building relationships with new boyfriends that she finds more attractive than DINO, not a love story about a couple experimenting together for equal pleasure. Laura and her growing harem of boyfriends is just grossing me out at this point, she has more on-screen chemistry with an abusive asshole she just met at a biker bar than she does with the "love of her life." Might check back for the new Very Dom route, but I think all hope I had of this game turning around for readers with testosterone has been extinguished.

I honestly agree, I don’t like how the Dom route you’re treated as much as a sub as in the sub route. I completely avoided the new bull as well. Dude’s written as douche bag central. So I skipped him completely. As someone whose supported this project since day one, I’m fairly disappointed in the last few chapters. Sleeping over a bulls house without permission, forgetting to send pictures, being a general neglectful lover. If there isn’t a serious talk about this in the next chapters to Laura to try to retcon this, then the last few chapters need to be rewritten.

Edit: I also wanted to add the fact that you need to be in the “Dom” route to have any semblance of being an equal partner in the last few chapters and even then it falls completely face first into the dirt, is wild to me. This isn’t NTR, it’s NTS. Both partners should have an equal say in all matters unless both partners agree to one being allowed to be “spontaneous”.

 

[LegendBear]

Is there a way to get more Pop It credits?

 

[Suave2]

I honestly agree, I don’t like how the Dom route you’re treated as much as a sub as in the sub route. I completely avoided the new bull as well. Dude’s written as douche bag central. So I skipped him completely. As someone whose supported this project since day one, I’m fairly disappointed in the last few chapters. Sleeping over a bulls house without permission, forgetting to send pictures, being a general neglectful lover. If there isn’t a serious talk about this in the next chapters to Laura to try to retcon this, then the last few chapters need to be rewritten.

Edit: I also wanted to add the fact that you need to be in the “Dom” route to have any semblance of being an equal partner in the last few chapters and even then it falls completely face first into the dirt, is wild to me. This isn’t NTR, it’s NTS. Both partners should have an equal say in all matters unless both partners agree to one being allowed to be “spontaneous”.

Considering the quality of the game, I am thinking this probably results in some heartfelt talk between the couple with some character development pretty soon. I wouldn't doubt if this was done intentional to make it a tad bit more realistic(the whole thing with Laura losing herself in this newfound excitement) and serve to deepen the couple's relationship further. I could also be just coping tho

 

[AcornHunter]

People, please, stop complaining about DOM route.
There is NO routes in this game.
Only variations of text added to original text.
Yes, it's a slight variations for very SUB route, but that's about it.

 

[MrNoice]

Considering the quality of the game, I am thinking this probably results in some heartfelt talk between the couple with some character development pretty soon. I wouldn't doubt if this was done intentional to make it a tad bit more realistic(the whole thing with Laura losing herself in this newfound excitement) and serve to deepen the couple's relationship further. I could also be just coping tho

I agree with you somewhat; that's why I suggested the retcon idea of making it a whole thing in the following few chapters. If the creator were to do this, seeing that realistic character development would be pretty cool. However, to do it, some rewrites would need to be done to show some discontent from the MC POV with Laura's actions.

 

[nickohoma]

I honestly agree, I don’t like how the Dom route you’re treated as much as a sub as in the sub route. I completely avoided the new bull as well. Dude’s written as douche bag central. So I skipped him completely. As someone whose supported this project since day one, I’m fairly disappointed in the last few chapters. Sleeping over a bulls house without permission, forgetting to send pictures, being a general neglectful lover. If there isn’t a serious talk about this in the next chapters to Laura to try to retcon this, then the last few chapters need to be rewritten.

Edit: I also wanted to add the fact that you need to be in the “Dom” route to have any semblance of being an equal partner in the last few chapters and even then it falls completely face first into the dirt, is wild to me. This isn’t NTR, it’s NTS. Both partners should have an equal say in all matters unless both partners agree to one being allowed to be “spontaneous”.

As crazy as it sounds "forgetting to send pictures" seems like a toe over the line to me. The couple did agree that Laura could be spontaneous, as far as I can remember from when they established their "rules". But I think it also came with "I'll tell you what happened and send pictures".

Someone said that only the bulls will describe the sex to you in one of the new chapters, and Laura won't. Which if true, and if I'm remembering the rules right, would also be over the line. Like the couple agreed MC has a kink where he likes his girlfriend to describe sex to him. And girlfriend likes sex with other guys. So they make an agreement that benefits both. But then girlfriend just forgets about MC's kink and screws other guys. That's not consensual anymore, that's just cheating.

I don't see a lot of people making the same complaints, so that leads me to just read the room and say maybe this isn't for me. Like maybe I go back and replay the first dozen or so chapters where I cool with everything that happened, but pretend the story ends there.

Open relation couples' rules can be insanely specific and completely arbitrary. "Fuck whoever you want, but no kissing" could be a rule. And if either side broke that rule, it wouldn't be consensual, it'd be cheating.

 

[MrNoice]

People, please, stop complaining about DOM route.
There is NO routes in this game.
Only variations of text added to original text.
Yes, it's a slight variations for very SUB route, but that's about it.

I hate to break it to you, but there are clear routes. You can choose your bulls, which a route is like it or not. You can select dialogue variations, which are dependent on, you guessed it, your route. The dev has also said he plans on adding many different variations of routes depending on the kinks that you get to choose. Not trying to rain on your parade, but although this game isn't heavily focused on routes, it does have them.

 

[MrNoice]

As crazy as it sounds "forgetting to send pictures" seems like a toe over the line to me. The couple did agree that Laura could be spontaneous, as far as I can remember from when they established their "rules". But I think it also same with "I'll tell you what happened and send pictures".

Someone said that only the bulls will describe the sex to you in one of the new chapters, and Laura won't. Which if true, and if I'm remembering the rules right, would also be over the line. Like the couple agreed MC has a kink where he likes his girlfriend to describe sex to him. And girlfriend likes sex with other guys. So they make an agreement that benefits both. But then girlfriend just forgets about MC's kink and screws other guys. That's not consensual anymore, that's just cheating.

I don't see a lot of people making the same complaints, so that leads me to just read the room and say maybe this isn't for me. Like maybe I go back and replay the first dozen or so chapters where I cool with everything that happened, but pretend the story ends there.

Open relation couples' rules can be insanely specific and completely arbitrary. "Fuck whoever you want, but no kissing" could be a rule. And if either side broke that rule, it wouldn't be consensual, it'd be cheating.

I completely agree with you; that's why I said that she's being a neglectful lover. Laura isn't following the agreed terms, which doesn't sound very hot. But for a relationship, even a fictional one, to feel realistic, the terms have to be followed. I personally found it a turn-off that Laura was acting this way suddenly. It crossed over the line.

And yeah, I understand it's a fictional game, but I do really enjoy the story and I like the community behind it. These are just general criticisms of the latest chapters. I still enjoy the game, and I don't want this to be taken as me shitting on the game because I really don't make posts about a game on here unless I genuinely want something to be improved.

 

[Master5043]

I work as a game journalist at Kotaku. And wow, dev, this game is 10/10, like my life simulator. My girlfriend's bull recommended this game to me and while they are "busy" I can while away my free time.
Thank you for this experience.