VN Unity Netorase Phone [v0.15.3] [Le Stag]

[Le Stag]

Looking forward to the broached topic of her "breaking" the rules, tho, I guess it isn't 100% breaking them if the MC allows it xD still, interested to see what comes out of that

The idea is to allow me to surprise you, the player, without having the character telling you everything that may happen in advance, because she HAS to ask for your permission.

Basically, looking into the future, some people may prefer "Cum in me!" to "Can he cum in me?". More exciting.

 

[Le Stag]

So, stop any improvements, ignore any bugs unless it crashes the client and concentrate on new content.

When I say "improvements", it's improvements to what I'm writing. Just because I wrote something doesn't mean it's good. It may require to be improved. Sometimes multiple times. Sometimes even a LOT of times, following my testers' feedback.

Also, no, I will not start "ignoring any bug". Best may be the enemy of good, but letting issues fester is definitely a worse enemy.

 

[DressedToThrill]

The idea is to allow me to surprise you, the player, without having the character telling you everything that may happen in advance, because she HAS to ask for your permission.

Basically, looking into the future, some people may prefer "Cum in me!" to "Can he cum in me?". More exciting.

This is a very good example, and I'm glad you've been planning ahead with having several options.

I can see how being surprised is very exciting for some, but for me getting the question "Can he do this?" or "Can I do that?", and then being the one to push the send button to respond "yes" (or "no", I guess) is what gives me that dopamine hit! Having naughty things happen is fine, but actively pursuing it is just so much more fun/taboo in my mind.

I know you know this. I'm just trying to encourage you to keep up the good but hard work.

 

[Lagunavii]

The idea is to allow me to surprise you, the player, without having the character telling you everything that may happen in advance, because she HAS to ask for your permission.

Basically, looking into the future, some people may prefer "Cum in me!" to "Can he cum in me?". More exciting.

Blurring the lines of NTS/NTR here. But as with most games of this type, you need too, otherwise it's the same old same old. At least you have thought about it and given a respectable reason to go off track so to speak.

As long as its not too extreme, this will work really well

 

[Joshy92]

I told Laura no rule breaking. I don't like surprises.

 

[Lagunavii]

I told Laura no rule breaking. I don't like surprises.

What about surprise cummy kisses??

 

[aqd]

Tara peeking through the door to take pictures for the MC on the next girls night

Ashley setting Laura up with a friend to do an extra spicy shoot to share with the MC

I'm sure both of those characters have great roles to play

Enjoying the game, playing every other or ever third update at this point. I'm happy with pretty much wherever Le Stag takes it. It's been great so far, and I'm just along for it. Side branches staying independent is going to be key though, because actual forking is going to become too time consuming. Right now there's writing the general premise, then tuning it to the chosen path, then to the tracked individual decisions. It's a lot to keep in the air. One thing that might not be too much work could be more image variations like he's already doing. "Where should he cum" "What should I wear" that kind of stuff. Instant gratification of "my decision had consequences" without them being far reaching and tracked for the whole game. (okay, "where should he cum" might need to exclude an option, for now...). A lot of the variants might already be in the discard pile as you generate a ton of images.

 

[-Revan75-]

Speaking of "where should he cum", in a sub-MC route, we could probably see Laura decides by herself. Meanwhile, with a dom-MC, she would likely ask the question first.

 

[deviousstorm]

Version 0.15 is becoming public tomorrow, yes. But it's a very small one, for various reasons. probably not the one that will convince you.

I'm hard at work on Chapter 31 though. I want to make 0.16 a big one.

Good idea!

Can't wait!

Though I am wondering where the story will go.

 

[Le Stag]

This is a very good example, and I'm glad you've been planning ahead with having several options.

I can see how being surprised is very exciting for some, but for me getting the question "Can he do this?" or "Can I do that?", and then being the one to push the send button to respond "yes" (or "no", I guess) is what gives me that dopamine hit! Having naughty things happen is fine, but actively pursuing it is just so much more fun/taboo in my mind.

I know you know this. I'm just trying to encourage you to keep up the good but hard work.

I tend to oscillate between both. Having the option was the best solution in my opinion. Everyone can get what they want, and try out alternatives too.

Tara peeking through the door to take pictures for the MC on the next girls night

Ashley setting Laura up with a friend to do an extra spicy shoot to share with the MC

I'm sure both of those characters have great roles to play

Obviously!

One thing that might not be too much work could be more image variations like he's already doing. "Where should he cum" "What should I wear" that kind of stuff. Instant gratification of "my decision had consequences" without them being far reaching and tracked for the whole game. (okay, "where should he cum" might need to exclude an option, for now...). A lot of the variants might already be in the discard pile as you generate a ton of images.

Yeah, I may do a lot of those in the future. They're not too much work, and on top of allowing your choices to have impact, they also have the advantage of not counting as two separate pictures, which means that collectors don't feel that they have to do every variant to get every picture.

 

[TheBigWater]

Ah! I forgot to ask. Does new version have a fix for the "random pictures"? I started a new game to have a fresh save for upcoming public version, and i couldn't trigger Laura's pictures from blondie, as well as i didn't get that weird AD pictures, and as well as ingame "instagram" like app showing much less pictures and is bugged

 

[Silwith]

The idea is to allow me to surprise you, the player, without having the character telling you everything that may happen in advance, because she HAS to ask for your permission.

Basically, looking into the future, some people may prefer "Cum in me!" to "Can he cum in me?". More exciting.

Looking forward to it, my main playtrough is very sub, so being able to give up more control to Laura is welcome xD I am all for the "surprise, i did this! Without asking you!" xP

Blurring the lines of NTS/NTR here. But as with most games of this type, you need too, otherwise it's the same old same old. At least you have thought about it and given a respectable reason to go off track so to speak.

As long as its not too extreme, this will work really well

Depends, if they talk about it and agree that she gets control and is now allowed to "break" the rules they set in the beginning, now that they have progressed this far, it's still 100% nts, because the MC agreed to it/wants it.

 

[Fyo]

Are we making requests now? Le Stag, I want impregnation/breeding fetish content. Get on it, you can use the time you save from not fixing bugs.

 

[Sixty]

Is it just me, or are the assholes in this thread especially entitled even by asshole standards? Bunch of fucking Karens.

I guess it's a compliment, Le Stag? Like, even among the whiny trolls that frequent NTWhatever threads, yours are standout. Kudos? Commiserations?

 

[AcornHunter]

Is it just me, or are the assholes in this thread especially entitled even by asshole standards? Bunch of fucking Karens.

It's just you....
we are all very nice and supportive people here...

 

[Lucen96]

Yeah, there has been nothing like discovering she is an exhibitionist, having a friend being a voyeur, starting to play with showing herself more and to more people, enjoying the idea of sharing her own boyfriend, experimenting with ways to tease and to tell her escapades, etc...

I'm sorry if I try to have a story that goes a bit deeper than "I need more men to fuck me more". Brazzers rejected my application.

so Laura gonna come to the point where she wants to share her own boyfriend? And the player would have no choice but to sleep with someone else?

I'm the kind of player that if I was her boyfriend, I wouldn't want to sleep with other girls. And I'm only interested in Laura in general.
That's why I really liked the idea of Laura being a monopolist about her boyfriend that she doesn't even want her boyfriend to get pictures of other girls....
And at the same time Laura is especially turned on by the fact that sleeping with other guys herself, shows it to her boyfriend, and her boyfriend stays faithful to her no matter what.... especially when she starts sleeping with strangers.

 

[Lagunavii]

Depends, if they talk about it and agree that she gets control and is now allowed to "break" the rules they set in the beginning, now that they have progressed this far, it's still 100% nts, because the MC agreed to it/wants it.

I wasn't complaining. As I said, it's a great logical reason as to why Laura can go of script and add a bit of verity into the game. But the lines are getting blurred and it'll be Laura's actions thereafter to see which side she lands on. And I kinda agree in this case it will probably still be NTS
But, for arguments sake, let's say Laura is out and about with Ashley and she meets a guy she wants to fuck, no time to ask our MC, so does it anyway. Because she has been given control. Would that be NTS or NTR to you? It's a tricky one to be sure.
That example would probably never happen to be fair, Le Stag seems to have his head screwed on but it's a short step from NTS to NTR and the "you gave me control" of "you wanted this" arguments are often used to justify.

All I was pointing out, if done well this idea will work, mishandled and this game suddenly goes somewhere else

 

[Jbuster]

so Laura gonna come to the point where she wants to share her own boyfriend? And the player would have no choice but to sleep with someone else?

I'm the kind of player that if I was her boyfriend, I wouldn't want to sleep with other girls. And I'm only interested in Laura in general.
That's why I really liked the idea of Laura being a monopolist about her boyfriend that she doesn't even want her boyfriend to get pictures of other girls....
And at the same time Laura is especially turned on by the fact that sleeping with other guys herself, shows it to her boyfriend, and her boyfriend stays faithful to her no matter what.... especially when she starts sleeping with strangers.

I'm pretty sure that would still be optional, as Laura ask the mc more than once if he's ok with Ashley sending him pictures giving you the change to say no, and even the blowjob thing was a choice, so I doubt the dev will change that in a dramatic way that goes against what Laura would to, because till now, Laura acts in a very consistent manner as she was presented since the beginning. She loves her boyfriend, loves to have sex with him, and enjoys what they are doing as they are having fun together

There's a chance that the dev fumbles ruining it all?, sure, but that's a risk in every human endeavor so I wouldn't worry that much

 

[Lucen96]

I'm pretty sure that would still be optional, as Laura ask the mc more than once if he's ok with Ashley sending him pictures giving you the change to say no, and even the blowjob thing was a choice, so I doubt the dev will change that in a dramatic way that goes against what Laura would to, because till now, Laura acts in a very consistent manner as she was presented since the beginning. She loves her boyfriend, loves to have sex with him, and enjoys what they are doing as they are having fun together

There's a chance that the dev fumbles ruining it all?, sure, but that's a risk in every human endeavor so I wouldn't worry that much

well yeah, I agree

it's just... when I was playing, I got the impression that there could have been an option where Laura doesn't like the idea of sharing own boyfriend. At the option there could have been other kinks for her... I think so...

I somehow completely missed that Laura has or could have netorase kink...

 

[Lagunavii]

well yeah, I agree

it's just... when I was playing, I got the impression that there could have been an option where Laura doesn't like the idea of sharing own boyfriend. At the option there could have been other kinks for her... I think so...

I somehow completely missed that Laura has or could have netorase kink...

No you're right, Laura at the start said something about not liking the idea of sharing her BF. Unfortunately Ashley has corrupted her, albeit slowly and subtlety. That kink is there and at the moment she's at least curious.