Talking with the bulls is okay, but it can be made not mandatory for everyone of them.
As for Nathan having a cuck episode, I would have prefered seeing it with another girl. You can have 4 points of view in NTR/NTS:
- the one being cucked: that's the basic one, the premise we get into this game;
- the one cucking: I hope we can awaken Laura to this one;
- the bull: see below;
- the spectator: that could have been the one for Nathan as he embraces the kink, but not with Laura, since it's meant to remain NTS and Laura stays with us.
You could play the bull instead in that last scenario, though, if you're friendly enough with Nathan. It all depends on whether you want to explore all sides of NTS or not.
As for those 3 new chapters... the first one was good but it was somehow a stagnation on the porn side. Maybe Nathan could have cum on her pussy but not inside, to tease Laura back (and to make a fine material for Laura to tease us).
The second chapter was the best of the new ones, for me. I really like that we can get more intimate with Ashley and show Laura the attractivity of our kink, though I was quite let down by her answers. There were several clues we could go on a more libertine way ourselves, especially since we can choose to tell Laura we'd like to sleep with other girls. Dunno where it goes on this side. Maybe Ashley will take the reins of corruption even more, maybe we'll get the unexpected help of Tara... that'd be fun.
And about the last one, it's good to have a different type of bull, though in any other work that is not explicitely NTS, the suspiscions of NTR would be really strong. I think that stance for the game (being full NTS) is good but it prevents those kinds of scenarios. Also, I'd like to know if the remark we say to Oliver, where we don't like him calling Laura a piece of meat, has any consequences on his behaviour because it doesn't seem so, and maybe Laura wants it that way, that could lead to some fun dialogues.
As for what I'd like to see in future updates, feature-wise:
- the ability to erase a save;
- a quick save/load;
- possibilities to comment on squaregram (could open some story-path);
- a walkthrough, or better: a decision tree;
- a skip dialogue option for when we want to explore other routes;
- for the fast-reading button not to be a risk to choose a dialogue option when we want to go back to normal speed.
All in all, good update. Thanks for your work.
