Feedback + warning for Dom enjoyers, Sub enjoyers please scroll on:
Chapter 27 reads like Stag was angry/bitter at negative feedback and went out of his way to cram as much passive beta cuckery as possible into the chat log. Dominant route players have written pages of feedback explaining why these specific things were the opposite of a turn on, and the response was to turn the dial to 11 on all of them?
This isn't an MC Avatar, it's a
DINO (Dom In Name Only), and I will refer to him as such from now on. I would like to ask what is remotely Dominant about this route?
DINO isn't even Laura's primary partner, priority, or
desire. She pines for Nathan and Oliver while treating
DINO like a kid she's babysitting and needs to check in on occasionally.
- When Laura "needs to get fucked good," she fills her calendar with everyone but her actual boyfriend. She schedules back-to-back fuck sessions with her two new boyfriends to relax after a tough day, telling DINO what her plans are only after she's confirmed them with her other boyfriends.
- The bulls take the lead and tell DINO what he will like in the bedroom (again).
- I think Stag believes he's making the bulls look like cool dudes because they're the ones to remember to take pictures instead of Laura (which was supposed to be the entire point of Laura doing this in the first place). This doesn't make the bulls look cool, it makes Laura look like a negligent and selfish partner every single time it happens, and it happens all the time now.
- Multiple Yes/Yes troll options because of course we have to be enthusiastic about whatever Laura wants no matter what it is in a text game.
- Rough throat fuck cum guzzling from two boyfriends in a row so she "goes home to DINO with a sore throat and a stomach full of cum" (ick). But hey, at least she decided not to go home (again)!
- Laura's mind going blank while fucking the bulls and forgetting to keep DINO in the loop (again).
- Basically every conversation between DINO and Laura goes like this: "I'm at boyfriend (2/3)'s house, remember they own me whenever I hang out with them (which is always) and I'm their good little toy/girl/slut now not yours and I was made just for my bull's pleasure and I've always been a slut I'm just being honest now (actual quote like 2 minutes after telling DINO I'm the slut you made me), I have to listen to them not you because I'm with them now, Boyfriend (2/3) took pictures because I forgot to but maybe he'll send them to you later with a few snide insults because he loves to tease you too DINO lehotface you like when my boyfriends taunt and tease you right? (Yes/Yes) oh yeah I thought so they'll do it more since you like it so much, I'm finally fucking a big dick (unlike DINO) and they have such good stamina (unlike DINO) I needed this and I was going to tell you what happened but then Nathan texted me so I didn't because priorities hehe...." on and on and on with this bitch. Of course DINO says Yes m'lady or OK to every damn thing.
- The tamest pictures in the land for THEE (from Laura's whore friend who literally picked up and fucked a stranger that very day), multiple boyfriends having back-to-back depraved sex romps while taking pictures for their private and for-profit porn collections that they may or may not choose to share with DINO for ME.
- Sleeping over at the bull house (again) then apologizing (again) then DINO saying no problem lehotface (again). I can feel the heat and testosterone through the screen!
Chapter 27 is a billboard-sized middle finger with neon lights for everyone complaining about the Dom route being a sham.
Polyamory Phone would be a more accurate title at this point. This is a story about Laura building relationships with new boyfriends that she finds more attractive than
DINO, not a love story about a couple experimenting together for equal pleasure. Laura and her growing harem of boyfriends is just grossing me out at this point, she has more on-screen chemistry with an abusive asshole she just met at a biker bar than she does with the "love of her life." Might check back for the new
Very Dom route, but I think all hope I had of this game turning around for readers with testosterone has been extinguished.
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