Hey dev, continue your great work! I love your game and I wanna see where you take it, don't listen to idiots who think they have the right to control your creativity. Best wishes for you!
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I really like this game, and the way the characters interact with each other with one glaring exception.
There are a few times where the writing makes it feel like these characters only interact with each other through the medium of texting. I get that you want to tell a story, but keep the medium in mind. What makes this story unique is that we only see snippets of it through texts.
You shouldn't put things in text the characters are likely to say to each other in person.
I include the detailed play-by-play sex scenes after the fact. These just don't really work in the medium you chose to convey the story. Instead, you should use what this medium does well - sexting. There are a bunch of characters we could have perspectives of- Laura, Ashley, Tara, Nathan etc.
Instead of waiting for a 'break' in the festivities to drop a novel, like in the very last scene (the one that's on my mind now), you have a perfect opportunity to have Ashley take pics, tease the protagonist and relate what she's seeing in real time - enhanced with pictures. She's right there! Use her.
This might be a personal taste thing, but 'live action' is always hotter than after-the-fact text dumping imo. I know this would cut into word count (if you're even concerned about that), but it would read better over the medium you chose to use to tell the story.
This came off as overly negative, I love the characters and the flavour of the kink you chose to portray, and the girls are cute. I'm enjoying this, mostly (even if my eyes glaze over at the walls of texts).
There are a few times where the writing makes it feel like these characters only interact with each other through the medium of texting. I get that you want to tell a story, but keep the medium in mind. What makes this story unique is that we only see snippets of it through texts.
You shouldn't put things in text the characters are likely to say to each other in person.
I include the detailed play-by-play sex scenes after the fact. These just don't really work in the medium you chose to convey the story. Instead, you should use what this medium does well - sexting. There are a bunch of characters we could have perspectives of- Laura, Ashley, Tara, Nathan etc.
Instead of waiting for a 'break' in the festivities to drop a novel, like in the very last scene (the one that's on my mind now), you have a perfect opportunity to have Ashley take pics, tease the protagonist and relate what she's seeing in real time - enhanced with pictures. She's right there! Use her.
This might be a personal taste thing, but 'live action' is always hotter than after-the-fact text dumping imo. I know this would cut into word count (if you're even concerned about that), but it would read better over the medium you chose to use to tell the story.
This came off as overly negative, I love the characters and the flavour of the kink you chose to portray, and the girls are cute. I'm enjoying this, mostly (even if my eyes glaze over at the walls of texts).
Le Stag , develop the game as you see fit. It's one of the best cuckold games I've ever played, and each update only heightens my excitement. Ignore baka ; he's too self-centered to understand that this game isn't for him, and that he is bickering for nothing. Many of us love the game just as it is. Keep up the great work; I find the game truly captivating, and I can't wait to continue playing it as you intended.
Nice game - not a boring story - would just like more visual content and more freedom of choice - also more changing partners and practices
Man i am glad we can get rid of hte word cucky, but is it possible to also remove bull? Idk, I am not really into bull and cucky relationships as they are a bit gross. It being explained as an open relationship is great though and as long as their is open communication its great. A few red flags though with the friend though hope we can interact with her.
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I didn't consider the word "bull" as being potentially annoying. I'll see if I can make it optional too. What could be a good alternative, in your opinion?
Wait, we are considering getting rid of the word "cucky"? Ashley calling the MC that was one of the hottest parts of the game
Partner. I mean Bull can be fine for most people. I am an edge case.
not for everyone!Wait, we are considering getting rid of the word "cucky"? Ashley calling the MC that was one of the hottest parts of the game
I am really happy with the game having options. And especially if the gf allows the guy to be in other relationships as well its fine.Yes, ideally there's different paths and language like that is only used in the more "extreme" ones.not for everyone!
Yeah not every open relationship is the same, there are some where the guy is the dominant or the sub and the girl is the dominant or the sub. Not everyone of them is the same, sometimes its the guy literally pimping out their girlfriend to other men, and they get a kick out of it, and can do whatever they want, and are really into denial for their partner.
You're not weird, I'm the same way, "bull" sounds like someone a chubby 50yo hotwife invites over.... to me it's much more a part of the whole very performative (IMHO) interracial cuckold culture.
I did enjoy the fact that in game if you tell her off Ashley stops the whole cucky stuff for good.
Glad I am not the only one, that really bothered me, what this girl think calling someone a cuck is not anything but insulting to dominate people haha.
Hello , i am the same that played v3 , there is now penetration or yuri play?
Thanks in advance
Thanks in advance
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Maybe sth like,
Bed bunny, live-in lover, innamorato, (her suitor), admirer, her beau, ladylover, pet, her crush, heartthrob, her number one, significant other, object of affection, her gallant, devotee.
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I would get really horny if she called him her boyfriend.
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Already taken by MC but boyfriend number 2 is still available
...nevertheless...they can swap by time
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Bull suggests she is no longer yours, it would work with the sub route but not the dom route.
My understanding has been, that in regards to hotwifing/sharing, bulls are the other guy who sleeps with the girl, but is not romantically involved.
She can call him "Her Number ONE in Bed"...Already taken by MC but boyfriend number 2 is still available