VN Unity Netorase Phone [v0.17] [Le Stag]

[Silwith]

Indeed, humiliation should be consensual, at this point it is not. The GF keeps telling the MC that he is inferior.

Change your route or wait until the 0.8 update if you have the bug that you get the wrong routes messages, on the route where the MC is submissive that shouldn't happen, the humiliation is consensual, if it isn't that is because of a bug, not by design of the game

 

[Muhammed_Ozbek]

Change your route or wait until the 0.8 update if you have the bug that you get the wrong routes messages, on the route where the MC is submissive that shouldn't happen, the humiliation is consensual, if it isn't that is because of a bug, not by design of the game

I hope so. I will probably wait for next update.

 

[Metsuke]

Here you go, buddy
mega

Can we get a reup? I just missed it.

 

[Gattsu#Struggler]

Can we get a reup? I just missed it.

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link if needed.

 

[Metsuke]

Mega-Link is still working on my side.
Here is a workupload link if needed.

Yeah it's still popping up with this error for mega. Workupload is blocked where I am I think as I cannot even access the website.

 

[DfenderMan]

I hope so. I will probably wait for next update.

What worked for me was turning dominant off in the debug settings and then turning it back on.

 

[rain675]

Le Stag great game would love to see different male characters involved with Laura; maybe even a path where she starts to corrupt herself without you knowing only to find out through her friends or on the picture app

 

[juninhodjval]

2 questions

in the future will there be something related to GB sex?

what will be Ashley and Ellie's focus with the MC?

 

[aqd]

I know it's probably too much branching, but I almost think the sub/dom stuff is too binary. Like a softer protag sub route where instead of the "hey you pathetic cuck loser" stuff it goes more like:

"Oh my god, I've never seen such a big dick."
"Oh, sorry babe"

Or
"I don't think I've ever cum so fast or hard"
"No babe, you're great too"

I think the game does a great job hitting that note a lot of the time, but every now and then there's a line that feels out of place by being a touch too mean. But then, maybe some people find it overall not mean enough? Anyway, looking forward to the next update.

 

[ikeepforgettingmypassword]

just finished it today and boy oh boy, i must say this is one heck of a game. love the way how ashley slowly become a slut, the script, the artsyle, and the biggest thing that i like is that everything is consensual <3 can't wait to see more of this game. Thank you dev for such a wonderful game <<333 Oh and also, this is the first netorase game that didn't gave me any guilt from playing it

 

[meuh_trash]

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A little sad as I prefer the first line but it is for consistency

 

[Eidolic]

I remember reading somewhere that the fixes to the dom/sub system in 0.8 were for the first three chapters, does anyone know if that's still the case or was ever the case? Cause the picture updates are obviously not from just the first three chapters.

 

[Le Stag]

A little sad as I prefer the first line but it is for consistency

I really liked the top ones too. For some pictures, they had more personality IMO. But that style is VERY inconsistent.

I remember reading somewhere that the fixes to the dom/sub system in 0.8 were for the first three chapters, does anyone know if that's still the case or was ever the case? Cause the picture updates are obviously not from just the first three chapters.

Chapter 3 will enable you to select your Tendency (dom/sub/balanced), but I'm improving all 6 first acts. These pictures are specifically from Chapter 9 and 15.

 

[Steve Carter]

I don't know if you're referring to my comment from a while back or not (as I was one who mentioned "cheating" and "secrecy") but I was specifically referring to with the MC's consent. As in after Tara sends the pic of Laura kissing Nathan, the MC and Laura decide to maneuver her to send pics of her doing stuff "behind his back." She doesn't mention it, but the MC still gets the photos, and they pretend like she's cheating. Just a little roleplay to spice things up in a different way. Again, orchestrated together and with consent.

I think this could be handled with a "reclaiming" mechanic. Early in the game, there is a conversation between you and Laura regarding whether you want to have sex with her after the other man does. She makes a comment about you "reclaiming" her after she is with another man. If you state "no" to wanting to have sex with her, and then another line of conversation explaining what not reclaiming her means, then you could also put further options to opt out of sex with her after each of her encounters with other men. If you choose this, she could tease you, saying that since you didn't "reclaim" her, that the other man is her boyfriend and not you until to do chose to reclaim her, and then she and her other man can do stuff that may be considered cheating, where the option to influence Laura is removed and Laura (and the other man) do what they want without necessarily considering the MC and may do stuff without the MC's knowledge. This would be a consensual non-consent type of situation, where it is the MC who initializes the opportunity for this to happen but is fully informed before he makes a choice to initialize it and can make a simple choice after each encounter to continue or end this situation. In between those choices to "reclaim" her stuff can happen that the MC didn't agree to however.

 

[Eidolic]

Chapter 3 will enable you to select your Tendency (dom/sub/balanced), but I'm improving all 6 first acts.

That's good, because there are a lot of little issues past chapter 3 that should probably be looked at as well. Typos, the incorrectly tagged messages I mentioned earlier, that kind of thing.

I am curious about a couple things, mildly related. One, what is the intended tone of the 'balance' route? Is it supposed to be a midpoint between dom/sub, or a mix? Cause I remember a few times thinking along the lines of "wow, that's kinda mean" while playing balanced. Nothing specific, just a feeling.
Two, and this one might be too much too early or tell, but will there be distinct 'routes' for the three Tendencies? Obviously it'd be at least three times the work, but I've mentioned before I feel like creating three flavors of one scene is really starting to reach its limits. When the idea of a scene needs to be applicable to all three Tendencies, it limits what you can do. A hard dom would never be able to explore true/faux NTR, a hard sub wouldn't be able to send her to a bar and see what happens, that kind of thing. I only ask because as far as I'm aware, 0.8 is the end of the roadmap you've shared so far.

As another aside, right now the game is in a perfect place that it could go literally anywhere and explore anything. There's a lot of potential, but it'll take a lot of work to realize it. You're doing really good so far, and I hope by the end you make something you're happy with without burning yourself to the ground.

 

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A little sad as I prefer the first line but it is for consistency

I never get tired of seeing Laura pics

I hope someday, even if in another game or so, we get fully animated images of her doing "good stuff" with a few "friends"

 

[Le Stag]

That's good, because there are a lot of little issues past chapter 3 that should probably be looked at as well. Typos, the incorrectly tagged messages I mentioned earlier, that kind of thing.

I am curious about a couple things, mildly related. One, what is the intended tone of the 'balance' route? Is it supposed to be a midpoint between dom/sub, or a mix? Cause I remember a few times thinking along the lines of "wow, that's kinda mean" while playing balanced. Nothing specific, just a feeling.
Two, and this one might be too much too early or tell, but will there be distinct 'routes' for the three Tendencies?

I'm thinking about doing some scenes exclusive to specific routes. It may require more work, as you said. I'll have to see.

For the Balanced route, I try to mix both dom & sub, without going too far in each. Basically, I see it as Laura being herself, without any input from your part on how the relation should evolve. And because Laura is a tease, it may go to her dom side a bit more.

 

[Eidolic]

I see it as Laura being herself, without any input from your part on how the relation should evolve. And because Laura is a tease, it may go to her dom side a bit more.

And because the MC not giving any input on how the relationship should evolve is a more submissive thing to do, it also pushes her more towards teasing. That actually makes a lot of sense.

Cautiously optimistic with how things seem to be turning out, excited to see where things go from here. Game could end up being something very special indeed by the time it's finished.

 

[jaques]

as long as there's consent from both part

Debatable.
Quite a few moments where consent is either forced on the player (which you can argue) with a "yes" or "yeah" choice. But also quite a few moments where the reply was "well, I am going to do it anyway". Or where there is no choice to begin with (going raw for example).

Also, the conversation about setting limits has come up a couple of times, but the conversation to actually set limits never happens.

 

[deviousstorm]

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A little sad as I prefer the first line but it is for consistency

Hurrah! Lets gooo.

can't wait to see the .8 changes and what he is going to do. Love this slow grilled story.