VN Unity Netorase Phone [v0.20] [Le Stag]

[Silwith]

About the dom route vs the sub route, as the variations are just a few dialogue lines here and there, it seems very difficult to me to have them cohabit--I mean, some scenes would have to be extensively rewritten for both to work, imho (I gave the dom route a try thorugh the Memories, and the main changes I got were Laura refering to herself as a slut and a cumdump (or something to that effect), it certainly didn't scream "dom" to me (but then, I have trouble visualizing how a dom/very dom (where the MC calls the shots) and a sub/very sub (where Laura does whatever she wants and probably humiliates the MC too, to boot) routes could coexist just by changing a couple of lines here and there. The mood of some dialogues would have to be totally different for it to work, imho (heck, just the character of Oliver is a problem for the dom route, although he's interesting for the balanced route as he "helps" Nathan know what his role is in the MC/Laura relationship

I think people shouldn't expect too much from the very-Dom variation tho, I expect it to be more in the vain of "fake" choices to make the MC seem the more dominant part of the whole thing (which is fine), that way Le Stag can keep the focused development and wont have to do two completly seperate routes. But I doubt very dom will be different content then the balanced or sub path, more like it makes the dialogue flow more in a direction that makes the MC the initiator, without altering what actually happens sexually.

If we want to keep the dev cycle to continue in a nice pace that is just a limit, two actually different routes would take double the dev time, thats just how it is and I would guess that most people are sub-players anyway, so thats just not a good idea for Le Stag to do, so very-dom will most likely just be a way to let the conversation flow in a way that makes the MC seem more initiating and Laura doing what he tells her, but which leads to the same sexual encounters as Laura deciding on sub route.

 

[catbn]

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[Lagunavii]

Mobile link request

Check the first post.

 

[catbn]

Check the first post.

I saw it, it was marked version 12.1, but when I clicked on it, I saw the download interface for 11.1.

 

[Lagunavii]

I saw it, it was marked version 12.1, but when I clicked on it, I saw the download interface for 11.1.

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[catbn]

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Thanks

 

[Adamska]

At this rate, for most true Dom MCs, boyfriends #3-5 will be the moving company employees Laura bumps into after returning home to a nearly empty apartment one day.

 

[Lagunavii]

At this rate, for most true Dom MCs, boyfriends #3-5 will be the moving company employees Laura bumps into after returning home to a nearly empty apartment one day.

The next boyfriend is going to be a sub, which will obviously be in contrast to the Netural Nathan and the Dom Oliver... be interesting to see, but with the Very Dominant path coming, be a little weird for Laura to ask to dom another bloke...

 

[kialera]

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Do you have the windows version of 0.12.2?

 

[nickohoma]

I re-read Le Stag's Patreon and noticed this:

the addition of the Very Dominant route, starting from Chapter 21 (the same one as Very Submissive).

So I hadn't realized that the addition of the Very Dominant content was going to be retro to previous chapters. That leaves me cautiously optimistic I guess.

I will make the suggestion/request though that Le Stag consider the balanced route in the rework, too. Some of us aren't into the dom stuff, but also don't like the last several chapters' direction.

 

[xLordByronx]

Nice game, very arousing .

In future updates, I suppose depending on the path, it would be hot seeing Laura staying to sleep with Nathan or Oliver, becoming more intimate. Perhaps also going on holiday trips with any of them, start to develop pet names, become more endearing and girlfriend like with them as well. Perhaps it would be more of a Hard NTR then, and this game appears to want more balance, but it could be hot for the more submissive, humilliation path.

Thanks for the game . Sadly I do not use credit cards so I cannot support the dev's patreon suscription .

 

[Swagylord1337]

Woah dude! Wtf are you doing on F95?

Seriously? Not even 24 hours? Lame dude

Woah dude! it's like your not in a pirate website anyways!

 

[LegendBear]

You just have to complete chapters.

I'm at the end of the game and I only had two credits, both of which I wasted cause I read the rules wrong lol

 

[kerten]

I just hope the very sub route remains quality. And I dont mind the bulls talking to me at all, just maybe not full on storytelling, just humiliation is okay. I think its a good choice for the very sub route, for example Oliver. The three way chat with Nathan was a bit weird though, not keen with another bull acting like a sub.

 

[Degureshav]

The update is hot as always, but I'm still waiting for the FMC to fill up a full tank. Not to mention other fetishes, which I'm also really looking forward to.

 

[keko96]

Could we get body piercings pls?

 

[kerten]

And more Oliver please!

 

[Suave2]

Laura gets "carried away" and forgets about MC over and over though.

Hey, I'm super horny from flirting with Nathan at this party, gonna come home and fuck you. Nope, gonna sleep with him at Ashley's place instead.

Hey, I'm done with Nathan, gonna come home and fuck you. Nope, gonna blow him one more time.

Hey, I blew a guy at the bar and I'm super horny, gonna come home and fuck you. Nope, gonna go to Ashley's place and fuck him instead.

Hey, I know I said we'd share this thing by me sending you pics and recounting my exploits, but gonna fall asleep and let the bulls tell you what they did to me instead.

I may have even missed one, I dunno. Le Stag seems into that scenario. And a lot of the game's fans seem to too.

It's hard to please everybody. I don't really have a solution short of rewriting half the game, which isn't practical. I haven't played the newest update yet but if I take other folks' posts at face value, it sounds like a turnoff to me.

I don't know if it needs that much rewriting, if any. You could have her, in her excitement, inadvertwntly going too far and causing a tiny bit of tension that gets resolved promptly with maybe the help of Ashley and Tara and with Laura making it up to the mc in some way? Could be a good opportunity to both reinforce some rules while also preparing to involve the other two girls in the couple's relationship more. I would be down for something like that or just some resolution to the "neglect".

 

[Suave2]

I agree with you somewhat; that's why I suggested the retcon idea of making it a whole thing in the following few chapters. If the creator were to do this, seeing that realistic character development would be pretty cool. However, to do it, some rewrites would need to be done to show some discontent from the MC POV with Laura's actions.

I haven't played the new update but from what I am seeing, the "neglect" of the mc is really only strong in this specific update no? If Le Stag is planning on having some mini tiny bit of drama here to spice things up(again just a tiny bit since we know they are not breaking up and this isn't an NTR game) then the mc would only show some real concern and discontent after more neglect. Like maybe next one or two updates where the mc starts to note a legitimate rising problem that's not part of their play/rules even if in the sub route. Perhaps this update is just a kickstarter and the rest or the process + its conclusion(most definitely a wholesome one with Laura making amends) coming in an update or two. Again this is is all assuming Le Stag is meaning something with this update. I have'nt playee it for myself and don't know the extent of this "neglect" that is starting to border theine between NTR and NTS. Perhaps it's not as bad as ppl make it out to be and this is all overreacting in the heat lf the moment and this neglect drama will go nowhere and was never meant to be anything. Game has been nothing short of one of if not the best NTS game on site. Le Stag has been cooking and I trust in future cookings as well. Anyway this was my tedtalk.

 

[milkedcow]

The updates seem to be less and less as time goes on 3 in a row that just feel flat the only character development is laura developing her safety net for when the mc ditches her ass after all the rule breaking shes been doin non stop, and all these group chats, what was once something special between the two of them is now shared with literally everyone regardless of what the mc wants, hes probably feeling pretty useless right now, what role does he fill in her life other than her wallet at this point lol she gets fucked better by others, nothing is private to him and her anymore, she even stayed with nathan multiple times and oliver too doesnt feel too much like a relationship anymore and more of just that one slutty friend everyone has thats too open about their sex life, lol poor mc