VN Unity Netorase Phone [v0.20] [Le Stag]

[alex220477]

This is a Netorase game. Of course the more she sleeps with other men the more happy MC is. Thats, like, the whole point.

What do you all people want, for fuck sake? She sleeps with other men, you're complaining. She sleeps with MC, it's vanilla.

So tell me what the hell would make you happy next update, because I really cannot understand what y'all are asking for, and the way I see it, whatever I'm doing, you are complaining.

I don't want anything, I just replied to some comments, we're in a chat to discuss it, the game is yours, your rules, the criticisms are mine, my rules, I don't offend you, and honestly, you'll have the right number of fans, but here, I was simply with another user, and that's my point of view, which is becoming flat, if Laura now does everything with everyone, and MC always goes well for her, I ask you this question, you have to answer me, what should the player expect now, just a gang bang to make him do, and many of us already foresee this, it's normal that there is always an increase in men, but Nathan, today, seems more like her boyfriend, and it's not just my thought, she did everything and more with Nathan, in fact, if Nathan calls, Laura answers, neotarase, yes, but you know, Laura now is purely a sex toy, she is pure real fun for Nathan and virtual fun for MC.

 

[JQuillon]

now the real boyfriend is Nathan

He's not, though, as evidenced by chapter 31, where you can totally cockblock him. He's Laura's #1 bull, for sure, but that's it (and, if you're MC, he's probably a way "safer" bet for yours and Laura's relationship than Oliver is, as Nathan knows that he's only there as Laura's toy as long as MC allows it--while Oliver could probably end up being way more pushy and straining the relationship should Laura see him more regularly).

MC doesn't care, the more he becomes a cuckold, the happier he is

Well, duh. That's the whole point of hotwifing--if the husband doesn't agree and isn't excited by this, it ends (or never happens in the first place). MC isn't a cuckold in the game, though--that, too, is the point of hotwifing. MC and Laura are in this together, Laura doesn't do anything behind MC's back (and MC won't do anything behind Laura's back when the fun starts with Ashley and Tara). If there's cheating/cuckolding invoved, it's not hotwifing anymore (or Netorase, as this is called on F95).

 

[KourinTatsunagi]

don't blame the creator too much, but you know, a game based on phone chat, can't last too long, the plot, which doesn't exist, ends, in the end we find some images of her getting fucked by her boyfriends, in fact, now the real boyfriend is Nathan, he fucks her ass for the first time, he fucks her without a condom, ahahahah, the dev told us to decide for ourselves, but it was false, the game is planned in this way, but the creator can't do anything else, he thinks that increasing the boys who fuck FMC is a good idea, I say no, by now with Nathan he has achieved everything, now, and I imagine that's how it is, all that's missing is a gang bang with all her lovers, MC will have some nice horns to collect, well, for MC, what gift is better, hahahhha

I think Nathan getting everything is fine. The early patches of this game was basically like Atelier Sakura's Marina's NTR report but phone version which what made the game great. FMC texting the MC about what happened and etc. The parts where you let Nathan get everything plays into the netorase part which LeStag nailed.

But the whole Nathan/Olivier group chat, the Madhouse, Mike chat, it basically lost what made the early chapters charming. Like I don't want to read Nathan telling MC how he is fucking FMC (i know u can opt out in one of them) but inviting him to the madhouse chat and basically the whole madhouse chat in general is a mess imo.

While when FMC/Nathan was doing the whole voice to text in the group and they go ask Tara or Ashley if they are liking or etc was not hitting it and just ???, I get that the story is moving towards it and even if I don't enjoy that content, I can't deny that LeStag has done a fantastic job and I'll continue to support the series even if it trends to a different direction than what I originally expected.

 

[vampz]

I don't want anything, I just replied to some comments, we're in a chat to discuss it, the game is yours, your rules, the criticisms are mine, my rules, I don't offend you, and honestly, you'll have the right number of fans, but here, I was simply with another user, and that's my point of view, which is becoming flat, if Laura now does everything with everyone, and MC always goes well for her, I ask you this question, you have to answer me, what should the player expect now, just a gang bang to make him do, and many of us already foresee this, it's normal that there is always an increase in men, but Nathan, today, seems more like her boyfriend, and it's not just my thought, she did everything and more with Nathan, in fact, if Nathan calls, Laura answers, neotarase, yes, but you know, Laura now is purely a sex toy, she is pure real fun for Nathan and virtual fun for MC.

Le Stag Maybe for a future version, we could have a chapter where the MC and Laura go on a vacation, and just have fun together?

I can understand that people think Nathan gets more time with Laura, so the MC doesn't get enough
So maybe one chapter of just MC and Laura teasing the others, before the story gets back to it's current course (whatever it is you're planning)

I for one, am here to see the story, however it progresses
I believe in you to keep providing quality updates with amazing art

 

[alex220477]

He's not, though, as evidenced by chapter 31, where you can totally cockblock him. He's Laura's #1 bull, for sure, but that's it (and, if you're MC, he's probably a way "safer" bet for yours and Laura's relationship than Oliver is, as Nathan knows that he's only there as Laura's toy as long as MC allows it--while Oliver could probably end up being way more pushy and straining the relationship should Laura see him more regularly).



Well, duh. That's the whole point of hotwifing--if the husband doesn't agree and isn't excited by this, it ends (or never happens in the first place). MC isn't a cuckold in the game, though--that, too, is the point of hotwifing. MC and Laura are in this together, Laura doesn't do anything behind MC's back (and MC won't do anything behind Laura's back when the fun starts with Ashley and Tara). If there's cheating/cuckolding invoved, it's not hotwifing anymore (or Netorase, as this is called on F95).

and we agree on many things, the figure of the bull, does not include possessing the girl, NAthan calls, Laura runs, I call this possessing Laura, having more bulls or one what difference does it make, once he is cuckolded and content, 1 or 100 cocks, for Mc, it makes no difference, it is not the number of cocks that makes the thing beautiful and exciting, but the story that leads to betrayal, Laura goes out with a friend, voila, she fucks the first person she comes across, now, what's exciting, it's like if we go out to go to the bar and we know we will find some beer, hahahah, Mc knows that Laura goes out with her friends and she is discovered, tell me, where is the novelty or excitement, if you always eat the same dish, it becomes natural to not appreciate it anymore,

 

[JQuillon]

I can understand that people think Nathan gets more time with Laura, so the MC doesn't get enough

It's like people forget that this is taking place through MC's phone--and when MC and Laura are together, they're probably not communicating through their phones (although with the youngsters, you never know, these days ), so the only way they can talk about what they're doing (and basically have sexy times where MC, not another guy, is the star) is to have chats like the Madhouse in which they relate what they're doing/what they've done to Ashley and Tara so as to feed everybody's kinks. So I for one would vote for more Madhouse, easily (although I will agree that having Nathan as a guess may have felt weird, but he was promptly kicked out at the end, so it's all good--the three-way chat with Laura, MC and Nathan works very well, imho, though; it's just a bit weird to have another man than MCin a group chat with Tara, considering her hangups)

 

[KRanseyer]

So tell me what the hell would make you happy next update

Don't ask, just do your thing. You make a NTRS game, so the trolls will keep bugging you no matter what. Ignore them!

 

[JQuillon]

it is not the number of cocks that makes the thing beautiful and exciting, but the story that leads to betrayal

Once again, you're in the wrong kind of game, imho. Hotwifing/Netorase means that there is no betrayal--as I said, that's the whole point. So maybe you're just looking for something else.

 

[Le Stag]

Don't ask, just do your thing. You make a NTRS game, so the trolls will keep bugging you no matter what. Ignore them!

Yeah, I'll do that. I'm getting tired of people here criticizing absolutely everything in a game based around a kink that seemingly irritates them. It's as if they were actively looking for reasons to complain.

 

[vampz]

It's like people forget that this is taking place through MC's phone--and when MC and Laura are together, they're probably not communicating through their phones (although with the youngsters, you never know, these days ), so the only way they can talk about what they're doing (and basically have sexy times where MC, not another guy, is the star) is to have chats like the Madhouse in which they relate what they're doing/what they've done to Ashley and Tara so as to feed everybody's kinks. So I for one would vote for more Madhouse, easily (although I will agree that having Nathan as a guess may have felt weird, but he was promptly kicked out at the end, so it's all good--the three-way chat with Laura, MC and Nathan works very well, imho, though; it's just a bit weird to have another man than MCin a group chat with Tara, considering her hangups)

Obviously the limitation of a phone game is that you don't see what actually happens, just what people write about
But now since the MC and Laura are both willing to share their personal sex life with the girls or with the other guys, giving them more personal time would be a nice addition, at least in my opinion

I don't really care who they are flirting with, I'm sure it would be written well
I could see Nathan and Ashley exchanging sex photos with MC and Laura for example, like a double sex date through texts

 

[Le Stag]

you understand what kind of answers they give me, I analyze the game, what works and what doesn't

I love being "analyzed" by someone that doesn't know what a period is.

 

[zyjan]

I really don't get it, if you're unhappy with the game just play something else, there are so many games on here?

Personally I liked the last updates exploring new stuff and also leaving potential to reuse things like the groupchat for tara to get comfy, just as example. Please keep up the good work

 

[vampz]

you understand what kind of answers they give me, I analyze the game, what works and what doesn't, what is creating a flattening of the story, then a similar user comes out who only knows how to write is, leave the trolls alone, but according to your genius, to the creator, to improve the VN or improve him, is a comment like yours more useful, non-existent, or my bad criticisms, they are criticisms, I'm not offending anyone, but you are so bad, that you don't give anything, you are the passive side of a discussion.,

I'm sorry, but you aren't really providing criticism
You're saying that you don't like the content, but you haven't suggested anything that could be used to improve the game in any way

I would honestly suggest that you take some time, think about the game and its contents, and think about how you would continue the story from its current point (because no one is taking the story back several chapters)
If you can think of ideas you think are both good and doable, you could write them here (but please try to make them readable, because it is very hard to read your comments)
But if you can't think of any way to improve this game, it's perfectly fine to just decide it isn't for you and go find a different game that does work for you

 

[JQuillon]

Obviously the limitation of a phone game is that you don't see what actually happens, just what people write about
But now since the MC and Laura are both willing to share their personal sex life with the girls or with the other guys, giving them more personal time would be a nice addition, at least in my opinion

I don't really care who they are flirting with, I'm sure it would be written well
I could see Nathan and Ashley exchanging sex photos with MC and Laura for example, like a double sex date through texts

Totally agree. We're basically saying the same thing, which is why I think it's great that Le Stag set up the Madhouse--it gives him the perfect venue to explore MC's and Laura's sexual life and, in effect, bring them closer together for the players.

(Besides, Ashley and Laura corrupting Tara through the retelling/showing of sexual acts with MC makes perfect sense, as Tara already trusts MC, so this would also advance the story, it's basically a win-win.)

... Except for the people who will complain that there's now too much Tara, or not enough Tara, or too much Ashley, or not enough Ashley, etc. Just take your pick (and there are, of course, those who will complain that there is both too much and not enough of something or some character, because welcome to the Internet).

 

[alex220477]

I love being "analyzed" by someone that doesn't know what a period is.

so you think you know the point and I don't, then why do you get upset if I criticize, you are superior, you are the creator, one who criticizes you, tickles you, I am only one, well, you can't be nice to everyone, and your story is not perfect in many points, I WROTE THAT AT THE BEGINNING EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT, then the repetition began, I SAID THAT YOU CREATED A RELATIONSHIP NATHAN AND LAURA, prove to me that it is the opposite, I'm wrong, Nathan calls, Laura runs, who is in charge, what kind of NTS game is it if Laura obeys Nathan, it is not Laura or Mc who dictate the game, then, I perceive a contradiction, who is Laura's boyfriend today?

 

[alex220477]

It has a reason you answer my comment about trolls, right? If you are none of them, what's your problem?

you call me a troll and I have to shut up?

 

[TheBigWater]

What do you all people want, for fuck sake? She sleeps with other men, you're complaining. She sleeps with MC, it's vanilla.

Tentacles!

 

[Dealbreaker]

So tell me what the hell would make you happy next update, because I really cannot understand what y'all are asking for, and the way I see it, whatever I'm doing, you are complaining

Maybe we could all agree that constructive criticism works best WITHIN the framework of the given genre the dev intends to produce. Although even this framework is contested, see the discussion above.
But even conceded the current direction is accepted which apperently includes sharing/swinging, what is starting to lack is perhaps tension and conflict, sexual conflict, and this is what people sense regardless of their preferences. If everybody is happy and everybody shags everybody without boundaries this tends to happen. It's not good from a storytelling perspective.

 

[Le Stag]

prove to me that it is the opposite

I have nothing to prove to you.

Also, I can barely understand half of what you're writing. Please, for everyone's sake, learn how to write proper sentences. Nobody can take your criticism seriously if you're spouting gibberish half the time.

 

[Le Stag]

Tentacles!