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I don't mean to bi-erase here, but when has Tara given any signal she'd be interested in a guy?
The MC several times, and a few guys just by... like inference that she is kind of into the dicking that she sees happens to her friends.
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MC can only comment on it, I think. Not sure if this happens on every path. She never asks though, that's true, she only blocks him:
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Hasn't she also said that her dream was to be sitting on a guy's face while kissing her hypothetical girlfriend, who would be riding that guy's dick?
Does anyone else have the issue where they can't access the Backups app/feature? When I click it, it does nothing.
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Le Stag leaving out the best scenes to our imagination again!
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Which he gloats over by having Tara tease us with the fact there's pictures of it and we can't have it
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I am sure you wouldn't if there was an actual picture...
I'm not sure, we need to test it out, do you hear me LeStag? We need to test this!I am sure you wouldn't if there was an actual picture...
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Le Stag mentioned that the story is based around his personal experiences and that Ashley is based on his friend. But with all the teasing he's done (Tara in maid outfit, teasing mmf threesome twice) I am starting to think that he's actually one of the girls and not the MC. What if... what if Le Stag is actually La Vixen?Which he gloats over by having Tara tease us with the fact there's pictures of it and we can't have it
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We call him Ashley on the discord for that very reason......
Well this,... and the multiple teasing pics a day (and always in black n white
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That's so Ashley.We call him Ashley on the discord for that very reason......
Well this,... and the multiple teasing pics a day (and always in black n white
All this Mike talk makes me think it'd be fun to see Laura hate fuck a guy. She'd have to be turned on by him but also really hate him. Also, MC must think he's cool, not understand why Laura hates him, and wants to see him get laid. That way we can all feel good when she gives in and fuck him.
I don't know how the story will work. Maybe she has a pet peeve or something and this one guy really pisses her off. MC thinks he's cool and they run into him occasionally and each time Laura grows to hate him and gets turned on by him more. Eventually she gives in and fucks him. Also, personally I'd want her to 40% regret it and 60% be turned on by it and want to do it again (evil Laura wins).
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On a total aside, Le Stag, I know a lot of people have been complaining about the story and how it feels boring now. First, of all I think you've been doing great, and I think the fact people complain just show how obsessed people are with the characters you wrote! However, I also remember the very first thing I learned about writing (in Kindergarten or something) was that stories are about conflict.
That conflict can be between a good guy and a bad guy, it can be between man and nature, between two people who love each other, it can be internal conflict, or many other combinations. I think a lot of people's complaints stem from a lack of conflict. In the beginning characters had to wrestle with their emotions, how they would see themselves as a person if they give into their kink (Tara is still struggling), how they would explain this new dynamic to the people in their lives, and how far down this path they would push it. I do think there's less conflict now, and wanted to give you some food for thought.
(FYI, I thought of this when writing the first part of this post when I realized how much fun it would be to see Laura's struggle between hating and horny, which is why I'm writing it here.)
I don't know how the story will work. Maybe she has a pet peeve or something and this one guy really pisses her off. MC thinks he's cool and they run into him occasionally and each time Laura grows to hate him and gets turned on by him more. Eventually she gives in and fucks him. Also, personally I'd want her to 40% regret it and 60% be turned on by it and want to do it again (evil Laura wins).
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On a total aside, Le Stag, I know a lot of people have been complaining about the story and how it feels boring now. First, of all I think you've been doing great, and I think the fact people complain just show how obsessed people are with the characters you wrote! However, I also remember the very first thing I learned about writing (in Kindergarten or something) was that stories are about conflict.
That conflict can be between a good guy and a bad guy, it can be between man and nature, between two people who love each other, it can be internal conflict, or many other combinations. I think a lot of people's complaints stem from a lack of conflict. In the beginning characters had to wrestle with their emotions, how they would see themselves as a person if they give into their kink (Tara is still struggling), how they would explain this new dynamic to the people in their lives, and how far down this path they would push it. I do think there's less conflict now, and wanted to give you some food for thought.
(FYI, I thought of this when writing the first part of this post when I realized how much fun it would be to see Laura's struggle between hating and horny, which is why I'm writing it here.)
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Did they really, though? IIRC, at the very beginning after MC explains his kink, Laura goes through a couple of hypothetical scenarios to see if MC would feel jealous (it's like 10 lines total), then agrees to try it at the club, likes it but tells MC to not expect her to go fast (understandably) and that's about it - happy fucking for (almost) everyone involved ever since. There was one line about neighbors hearing her scream another man's name (which later is repeated but in a positive way) and one line about Laura not wanting to end up like a whore in an alley sucking 3 cocks.
Thing is, for 40+ chapters the game has followed the basic formula with 2 components: MC and Laura are open with each other in their relationship, and both are happy with their arrangement. That has been reinforced time and time again by LeStag. When people wanted drama, he added Mike cheating on his GF. Importantly, that conflict/drama didn't break that formula. But a lot of the time, when people suggested adding conflicts, they tried to break or circumvent it.
Even your example kinda does that, although, I assume, unintentionally. Ask yourself 2 questions. 1) Why would Laura sleep with a guy she hates (and want to do it again), when she has the freedom to do it with anyone she wants and already has several candidates ready and willing? 2) Why doesn't she tell MC that she hates that guy and if she does (I wasn't sure if MC not understanding her hate means that he's oblivious to it or simply doesn't share it) why do they keep seeing him? "Yeah babe, I know you hate that guy but let's keep talking to him when we run into him somehow (MC and Laura don't really interact together with people outside the Madhouse) instead of ignoring him. Oh and I would really like you to fuck the guy that you hate. Please?" MC hasn't pushed Laura into sleeping with any other guy in particular, btw. He always wanted her to have fun, not have fun with "that guy specifically". So it would be out of character to suddenly do it now.
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