VN Unity Netorase Phone [v0.23] [Le Stag]

[bookaek]

Does anybody have the save where they were able to unlock all of Ash's pictures? i currently have only 31/34

 

[Aladin01]

I usually have a vague idea of the story beats I want to see next, but I'm using feedback to guide me, and change plans a lot depending on them, my own inspiration, etc...

I think it gives a more natural way to the events than if things were planned too strictly.

That also means sometimes, things I had planned end up being 3 updates later, because I found other things to tell. But it's not an issue in my opinion.



Yeah, a lot of people had issue with this chapter. It took less than a day for me to publish a post on Patreon saying I would change things.

I think its an important point which makes this game so much loved (and maybe hated too): Not knowing what story You' re going to tell! So please keep doing this in the great way You do!

 

[D.va_Simp]

Hullo! I just wanted to say that I really like your game, been looking for a good netorase game for a long while. I really like the good relationship betwen the MC and Laura, and that the game is more focused on sharing and not stealling or hard humillation.

I the future I look forward to more content between the MC and Laura, more pictures and maybe a trio or more with Nathan or other people.

Things that I would like for future updates:
-More content between Laura and the Mc.
-Trios with the Mc also participating
-webcam/expansion on the lewd instagram
-More Random hookups
- ¿prostitution? Maybe Laura lose her job/or get more tips for doing lewd stuff and progress from there, and mc act likes a pimp or something.

Just my opinion of course, im looking forward to see new updates, and the direction that you choose for the game.

 

[BobLeecher]

Talking with the bulls is okay, but it can be made not mandatory for everyone of them.

As for Nathan having a cuck episode, I would have prefered seeing it with another girl. You can have 4 points of view in NTR/NTS:
- the one being cucked: that's the basic one, the premise we get into this game;
- the one cucking: I hope we can awaken Laura to this one;
- the bull: see below;
- the spectator: that could have been the one for Nathan as he embraces the kink, but not with Laura, since it's meant to remain NTS and Laura stays with us.

You could play the bull instead in that last scenario, though, if you're friendly enough with Nathan. It all depends on whether you want to explore all sides of NTS or not.

As for those 3 new chapters... the first one was good but it was somehow a stagnation on the porn side. Maybe Nathan could have cum on her pussy but not inside, to tease Laura back (and to make a fine material for Laura to tease us).
The second chapter was the best of the new ones, for me. I really like that we can get more intimate with Ashley and show Laura the attractivity of our kink, though I was quite let down by her answers. There were several clues we could go on a more libertine way ourselves, especially since we can choose to tell Laura we'd like to sleep with other girls. Dunno where it goes on this side. Maybe Ashley will take the reins of corruption even more, maybe we'll get the unexpected help of Tara... that'd be fun.
And about the last one, it's good to have a different type of bull, though in any other work that is not explicitely NTS, the suspiscions of NTR would be really strong. I think that stance for the game (being full NTS) is good but it prevents those kinds of scenarios. Also, I'd like to know if the remark we say to Oliver, where we don't like him calling Laura a piece of meat, has any consequences on his behaviour because it doesn't seem so, and maybe Laura wants it that way, that could lead to some fun dialogues.

As for what I'd like to see in future updates, feature-wise:
- the ability to erase a save;
- a quick save/load;
- possibilities to comment on squaregram (could open some story-path);
- a walkthrough, or better: a decision tree;
- a skip dialogue option for when we want to explore other routes;
- for the fast-reading button not to be a risk to choose a dialogue option when we want to go back to normal speed.

All in all, good update. Thanks for your work.

 

[TheBigWater]

I wish we could tell her to stop seeing Nathan and go for Olivier

 

[Steve Carter]

As for what I'd like to see in future updates, feature-wise:
- the ability to erase a save;
- a quick save/load;

Yes PLEASE. Especially the ability to erase a save.

 

[LegendBear]

Is there anyway to unlock all the pictures? Or does anyone have a completed/near complete save?

 

[deviousstorm]

I'm not angry. Only disappointed.

it'd be funny if in the next update. Aqq88 became a meme insult lol

 

[bramdalf]

- for the fast-reading button not to be a risk to choose a dialogue option when we want to go back to normal speed.

Please this one! I've accidentally clicked a dialogue choice instead of fast forwarding/cancel fast forward so many times now.

 

[DirtyPaws_]

I'm kind of getting bored with Laura atm, my twisted sick fuck fantasy is to be able to have sex with other girls (Ash/Tara/random girls that showed up on squaregram etc..) and play a reverse uno card on Laura by sending her pictures of "you-know-what", oh and I don't wanna "reclaim" Laura or whatsoever after she had her funs at all
Hate me people!!!!

 

[Silwith]

I'm kind of getting bored with Laura atm, my twisted sick fuck fantasy is to be able to have sex with other girls (Ash/Tara/random girls that showed up on squaregram etc..) and play a reverse uno card on Laura by sending her pictures of "you-know-what", oh and I don't wanna "reclaim" Laura or whatsoever after she had her funs at all
Hate me people!!!!

I don't hate you... you are just playing the wrong game tho...

 

[melantha]

I'm kind of getting bored with Laura atm, my twisted sick fuck fantasy is to be able to have sex with other girls (Ash/Tara/random girls that showed up on squaregram etc..) and play a reverse uno card on Laura by sending her pictures of "you-know-what", oh and I don't wanna "reclaim" Laura or whatsoever after she had her funs at all
Hate me people!!!!

i'm not bored with laura, but i'm with you about the other girls, though it should be constrained on the sideline,
like what ashley does on 0.11 which is good sign already, MORE PLEASE!
then later on laura discovering she also likes Netorase? would be hot.

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overall, would appreciate more varied positions though, during penetration.
in the latter half it's all just doggy/from behind. otherwise, its the usual BJs and cumshots.
tbh im getting tired of BJs it's been like that since the start and it's still going.
i enjoyed the missionary shots in mid-game, but im sure there's alot more positions out there.

thanks for all the hard work game dev!
please know that we truly appreciate your work.
this is one of the best H games i played in the last few years,
actually probably the only one where I look at the clock to wait for release lol

other than that, hi dev discord link doesn't seem to work

 

[deviousstorm]

I'm kind of getting bored with Laura atm, my twisted sick fuck fantasy is to be able to have sex with other girls (Ash/Tara/random girls that showed up on squaregram etc..) and play a reverse uno card on Laura by sending her pictures of "you-know-what", oh and I don't wanna "reclaim" Laura or whatsoever after she had her funs at all
Hate me people!!!!

Yeah that'd be nice.

 

[Le Stag]

tbh im getting tired of BJs it's been like that since the start and it's still going.

Yeah, I think I fell in the porn trope of "everything has to start with a blowjob". It doesn't help that AI makes cunnilingus/fingering pictures a hassle to generate too.

 

[nickohoma]

I agree with them being a hassle. Do-able though...

 

[Sixty]

Yeah, I think I fell in the porn trope of "everything has to start with a blowjob". It doesn't help that AI makes cunnilingus/fingering pictures a hassle to generate too.

Counterpoint: Blowjobs are awesome. There is no law of diminishing returns for blowjobs.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Ashley's teasing has been great, hopefully it keeps going more, and Tara picks it up as well.

 

[nickohoma]

A very minor bit of feedback I will give to Le Stag. I'm guessing it's a random interlude, but I got the "Hello Pal! I was with your girlfriend earlier" messages from Oliver at Ch25. And then at Ch26, Laura gives the opportunity for MC to say don't go see Oliver again.

If someone disliked Oliver, they may dislike that Laura is apparently seeing him again already, before that conversation. Maybe that interlude shouldn't happen until after Ch26 at least?

 

[aqd]

I'm looking forward to having Nathan and Oliver fight over Laura on the sub route. As they flex and strut she can chime in, "Boys, boys, there's enough of me to go around and keep everyone satisfied." Then to the MC, "Well, not you. "

 

[BatuRem]

I don't see how the game is going to keep the tension going without netorare added. Netorase is enjoyable, don't get me wrong, but there's a bit of a global writer's block when it comes to what happens after the happy netorase relationship is established. No one seems to as of yet figured it out and most netorase stories just start looping. Even DPC had to introduce some netorare to the Josy/Maya storyline to keep things fresh.

All that said, you're a fucking genius, Le Stag, and if anyone is gonna figure it out, it'll be you.