VN Unity Netorase Phone [v0.28.1] [Le Stag]

[Le Stag]

Don't ask, just do your thing. You make a NTRS game, so the trolls will keep bugging you no matter what. Ignore them!

Yeah, I'll do that. I'm getting tired of people here criticizing absolutely everything in a game based around a kink that seemingly irritates them. It's as if they were actively looking for reasons to complain.

 

[vampz]

It's like people forget that this is taking place through MC's phone--and when MC and Laura are together, they're probably not communicating through their phones (although with the youngsters, you never know, these days ), so the only way they can talk about what they're doing (and basically have sexy times where MC, not another guy, is the star) is to have chats like the Madhouse in which they relate what they're doing/what they've done to Ashley and Tara so as to feed everybody's kinks. So I for one would vote for more Madhouse, easily (although I will agree that having Nathan as a guess may have felt weird, but he was promptly kicked out at the end, so it's all good--the three-way chat with Laura, MC and Nathan works very well, imho, though; it's just a bit weird to have another man than MCin a group chat with Tara, considering her hangups)

Obviously the limitation of a phone game is that you don't see what actually happens, just what people write about
But now since the MC and Laura are both willing to share their personal sex life with the girls or with the other guys, giving them more personal time would be a nice addition, at least in my opinion

I don't really care who they are flirting with, I'm sure it would be written well
I could see Nathan and Ashley exchanging sex photos with MC and Laura for example, like a double sex date through texts

 

[Le Stag]

you understand what kind of answers they give me, I analyze the game, what works and what doesn't

I love being "analyzed" by someone that doesn't know what a period is.

 

[zyjan]

I really don't get it, if you're unhappy with the game just play something else, there are so many games on here?

Personally I liked the last updates exploring new stuff and also leaving potential to reuse things like the groupchat for tara to get comfy, just as example. Please keep up the good work

 

[vampz]

you understand what kind of answers they give me, I analyze the game, what works and what doesn't, what is creating a flattening of the story, then a similar user comes out who only knows how to write is, leave the trolls alone, but according to your genius, to the creator, to improve the VN or improve him, is a comment like yours more useful, non-existent, or my bad criticisms, they are criticisms, I'm not offending anyone, but you are so bad, that you don't give anything, you are the passive side of a discussion.,

I'm sorry, but you aren't really providing criticism
You're saying that you don't like the content, but you haven't suggested anything that could be used to improve the game in any way

I would honestly suggest that you take some time, think about the game and its contents, and think about how you would continue the story from its current point (because no one is taking the story back several chapters)
If you can think of ideas you think are both good and doable, you could write them here (but please try to make them readable, because it is very hard to read your comments)
But if you can't think of any way to improve this game, it's perfectly fine to just decide it isn't for you and go find a different game that does work for you

 

[JQuillon]

Obviously the limitation of a phone game is that you don't see what actually happens, just what people write about
But now since the MC and Laura are both willing to share their personal sex life with the girls or with the other guys, giving them more personal time would be a nice addition, at least in my opinion

I don't really care who they are flirting with, I'm sure it would be written well
I could see Nathan and Ashley exchanging sex photos with MC and Laura for example, like a double sex date through texts

Totally agree. We're basically saying the same thing, which is why I think it's great that Le Stag set up the Madhouse--it gives him the perfect venue to explore MC's and Laura's sexual life and, in effect, bring them closer together for the players.

(Besides, Ashley and Laura corrupting Tara through the retelling/showing of sexual acts with MC makes perfect sense, as Tara already trusts MC, so this would also advance the story, it's basically a win-win.)

... Except for the people who will complain that there's now too much Tara, or not enough Tara, or too much Ashley, or not enough Ashley, etc. Just take your pick (and there are, of course, those who will complain that there is both too much and not enough of something or some character, because welcome to the Internet).

 

[alex220477]

I love being "analyzed" by someone that doesn't know what a period is.

so you think you know the point and I don't, then why do you get upset if I criticize, you are superior, you are the creator, one who criticizes you, tickles you, I am only one, well, you can't be nice to everyone, and your story is not perfect in many points, I WROTE THAT AT THE BEGINNING EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT, then the repetition began, I SAID THAT YOU CREATED A RELATIONSHIP NATHAN AND LAURA, prove to me that it is the opposite, I'm wrong, Nathan calls, Laura runs, who is in charge, what kind of NTS game is it if Laura obeys Nathan, it is not Laura or Mc who dictate the game, then, I perceive a contradiction, who is Laura's boyfriend today?

 

[alex220477]

It has a reason you answer my comment about trolls, right? If you are none of them, what's your problem?

you call me a troll and I have to shut up?

 

[TheBigWater]

What do you all people want, for fuck sake? She sleeps with other men, you're complaining. She sleeps with MC, it's vanilla.

Tentacles!

 

[Dealbreaker]

So tell me what the hell would make you happy next update, because I really cannot understand what y'all are asking for, and the way I see it, whatever I'm doing, you are complaining

Maybe we could all agree that constructive criticism works best WITHIN the framework of the given genre the dev intends to produce. Although even this framework is contested, see the discussion above.
But even conceded the current direction is accepted which apperently includes sharing/swinging, what is starting to lack is perhaps tension and conflict, sexual conflict, and this is what people sense regardless of their preferences. If everybody is happy and everybody shags everybody without boundaries this tends to happen. It's not good from a storytelling perspective.

 

[Le Stag]

prove to me that it is the opposite

I have nothing to prove to you.

Also, I can barely understand half of what you're writing. Please, for everyone's sake, learn how to write proper sentences. Nobody can take your criticism seriously if you're spouting gibberish half the time.

 

[Le Stag]

Tentacles!

 

[wolfund]

ooo, the creator doesn't have the character to accept criticism, how strange for someone who writes NTR stories,

but the story that leads to betrayal

Seems like you lost the plot a long time ago. And it's also clear that this game was never meant for you in the first place.

NTR and NTS are NOT the same kink. Every few updates, we get someone like you mewling about how "NTR this" and "NTR that" in the story. This is an NTS GAME, you gargantuan moron! The kink here isn’t losing—it’s sharing, you absolute idiot.

Didn't your teacher ever teach you how to read? Or were you too busy rubbing your only two brain cells together, trying to figure out why 1+1 isn’t 11? Obviously, you didn’t learn enough to drag what’s left of your intelligence out of whatever rotting gutter it’s been sitting in, judging by the sheer amount of nonsense you keep spewing. Hell, I even wonder how many teeth you have left—most of them should have rotted straight out of your gums by now. Not that you’d notice, given how few neurons you have left to process basic reality.

Go back to whatever hole you crawled out of and whatever miserable excuse for a life awaits you there.

you call me a troll and I have to shut up?

Judging by your post history? Yes.

Yeah, I'll do that. I'm getting tired of people here criticizing absolutely everything in a game based around a kink that seemingly irritates them. It's as if they were actively looking for reasons to complain.

And what's worse, they do so and even manage to wrongly identify the kink in question with another to begin with...

Also thankfully I have run out of patience for today and I shall take the fall from the mod for what I just said, but fucking hell sometime it's just feel good to just snap and straigth up insult someone that hide behind "criticism" and just lay it down like a fucking Karen on steroid.

 

[Joshy92]

This is a Netorase game. Of course the more she sleeps with other men the more happy MC is. Thats, like, the whole point.

What do you all people want, for fuck sake? She sleeps with other men, you're complaining. She sleeps with MC, it's vanilla.

So tell me what the hell would make you happy next update, because I really cannot understand what y'all are asking for, and the way I see it, whatever I'm doing, you are complaining.

Dude ignore that guy, he's had like twenty different accounts on here, and he always gets banned. He just goes around shitting on NTS games all the time I see it.

 

[JQuillon]

At some point, depending on the path we choose (not on sub, obviously), we may also start getting reverse interludes, once the Ashley/Tara storyline has progressed enough, ie MC sending Laura a few messages such as: "Too bad you were late today, honey, as Ashley/Tara was looking for you. She couldn't wait for you as she was in a hurry, but I made sure to give her a souvenir/she asked me to scratch her itch before she left"--cue naughty picture.

Progressing the story towards possible sharing with Ashley and Tara gives many more options to Le Stag should he want to.

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Is that Laura starring in Octobully?

 

[Le Stag]

so the Creator cries with the moderators, and my criticisms are deleted, hahahahahaha

Ah, yes, more "My comments are getting deleted, this must be a conspiracy against me"...

Maybe your comments are deleted because they look like they've been written by a drunk raccoon? But no, that must be me "crying to the moderators".

At some point, depending on the path we choose (not on sub, obviously), we may also start getting reverse interludes, once the Ashley/Tara storyline has progressed enough, ie MC sending Laura a few messages such as: "Too bad you were late today, honey, as Ashley/Tara was looking for you. She couldn't wait for you as she was in a hurry, but I made sure to give her a souvenir/she asked me to scratch her itch before she left"--cue naughty picture.

Progressing the story towards possible sharing with Ashley and Tara gives many more options to Le Stag should he want to.

I like the idea!

 

[Joshy92]

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Wow bro that is hot I love it

 

[wolfund]

I like the idea!

So do I actually. If laura is growing comfortable sleeping around and with the idea of the MC also doing so it could be really fun, really quickly x)

 

[vampz]

So do I actually. If laura is growing comfortable sleeping around and with the idea of the MC also doing so it could be really fun, really quickly x)

That, and it could also help push Laura and the MC into a shared threesome with Ashley (which is the clearest candidate for this situation)
Which would be amazing, if it wouldn't have been a nightmare to generate in AI

 

[Tasty Walrus]

like I wrote earlier, I loved the early part of the game, where FMC were carefully exploring this new thing.

But it went from being exciting to being repetative. I agree with the critizism of Nathan replacing MC and the story being somewhat stuck without progress.

That said, it's Le Stags story. We're just here for the ride. The story/game is still good, but I think it should be possible to say it "was better" earlier without getting called a troll.

I still like it. I hope it'll continue to be good. But I hope it's not gonna be several chapters with Nathan just simply replacing MC as FMCs boyfriend.

The introduction of Oliver and Matt was good because that reduced some of the Nathan-Boyfriend thing that was going on. Even if Oliver is someone I'd punch in the face if I got the opportunity.