KingsRaiden
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Agreed, it's hard to see the relationship growing, which was the point of the kink in the first place, if we don't see how the MC and Laura's relationship changes along the way.
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La Dani
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Now is pratically a looping novel with few images.
I do agree with the sentiment that it's getting stale. Ashley needs to take Lauras corruption to the next level.
Nathan is getting boring, he still has his use as a photographer but for anything else not really.
I agree with the review I just saw, which said, Laura doesn't need a second boyfriend. Mike was also just more of the same but at least he progressed the development where Laura took someone home. That was great.
I don't doubt you have a plan and that this is going to get better. Most games have ups and downs, this game is currently on a down, it started very high so, saying it's a down isn't really doing it justice, it's just a less of a high. If that makes sense.
Nathan is getting boring, he still has his use as a photographer but for anything else not really.
I agree with the review I just saw, which said, Laura doesn't need a second boyfriend. Mike was also just more of the same but at least he progressed the development where Laura took someone home. That was great.
I don't doubt you have a plan and that this is going to get better. Most games have ups and downs, this game is currently on a down, it started very high so, saying it's a down isn't really doing it justice, it's just a less of a high. If that makes sense.
Le Stag great update! I really enjoyed Laura ideas about putting the picture as our wallpaper, or her finally inviting guy to our bed! Or her asking why we don't want to creampie her 
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I also agree with the opinion of 15 people who are not subscribed to patreon. The game is in decline, each update should be like a series of an interesting series, but it's not. Each update should develop the story and lead to something new. I offer a new fetish every update and a new lover every update. I noticed a lot of text and few pictures, so I suggest removing the text and increasing the number of pictures.
Not a bad update, the parts where the MC is still the sex partner should be reduced a lot and it seems like an MC x Ashley pairing keeps trying to get teased no matter how much i turn down those options. The Tara stuff is fun, if slow but I like the corruption angle. I hope it transitions into more of a story where all the women around the MC fucks other people and he gets to experience it from the sidelines.
Exactly, Nathan stopped being credible when he got cucked by Oliver.
Its time to send him abroad for his studies or have him ran over by a truck or something.
Giving him Ashley too was a mistake, it should have been Ashleys new boyfriend to push out Nathan instead.
Thats the end as far as bitching is concerned, i like the route Tara is on aswell as Laura getting bolder.
Some of the new shots look amazing aswell. Ashley piling on everyone is fantastic too, i hope she continues leading the way.
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Honestly Mike is the better bull out ot the three, Nathan and Oliver's cock barely a match for Mike's big daddy cock. So I see it more like the more Laura sleeps Mike the lesser she wants Nathan or Oliver.
I used to be able to play the android version, but with the newest update I extract the apk from zip file, try to install it and it just says "something went wrong". Any ideas?
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The APK isn't in a zip file. If you have a zip file, that's not the Android version, that's the Windows one.
he's already increasing the number of pictures, the text to picture ratio isn't the problem. Subscribed to patreon or not is also not relevant to the discussion at hand.I also agree with the opinion of 15 people who are not subscribed to patreon. The game is in decline, each update should be like a series of an interesting series, but it's not. Each update should develop the story and lead to something new. I offer a new fetish every update and a new lover every update. I noticed a lot of text and few pictures, so I suggest removing the text and increasing the number of pictures.
Sure I wouldn't complain if we got more pictures, but the pictures as nice as they are is just a tool to make the story more immersive. I really hope dev got something cooking here, but Laura has to get bored of Nathan honestly.
I think it makes sense she has Nathan as a go to, she's the Alpha in that situation, which is why I think Nathan should be done.
He was a good starting point and that's the reason Ashley picked him for Laura. He's safe easy and will do whatever Ashley tells him. He's more of the same character as the MC which is why the Laura doesn't need a second boyfriend comes from.
Ashley needs to find some more fun for them outside of the characters we have. It's fine if it's mentioned that Laura went to have some fun with Nathan or we get more photoshoots but we don't need more storytime with Laura about Nathan anymore.
My MC is dominant so I'm not sure how the submissive MC conversations differ, different pictures different stories I have no idea. Maybe there is other stuff there already. I prefer the Dominant MC that shares his GF over the Submissive one that gets shamed.
well as dominant as he can be as a cuck anyway
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Which is something I'm considering adressing, by renaming the routes. The Dom/Sub are too BDSM-focused, and give different expectations than what I'm aiming for. I'm not really writing a Dominant route, I'm writing a "Confident Stag" route.
I love the game, the updates are hot, but yeah, I agree that it needs to start accelerating a little. Creampies, gangbangs, cheating play (which is being moved towards), size queen, progressive dildo training, onlyfans into pornstar, etc. I foresee her losing her job at some point. Considering this one is a more vanilla netorase probably not, but some BBC might be fun; a chubby guy has been added and I have to imagine that's equally controversial.
I have a feeling that the next update is going to be a pivotal one story wise.
I have a feeling that the next update is going to be a pivotal one story wise.
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