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NightWolF16

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New update was nice. A bit more focus on the other girls which I appreciate (actually my favorite part of the game weirdly enough). A large part of the content is related to Nathan and Oliver (and a bit of both in the same time). Also a special surprise at the end which I enjoyed lol. It would be nice to have a bigger focus on the MC getting shared as well for variety as I sort of lost interest in Nathan or other named male characters. It became less of a exploration and new experiences, and more GF making a collection of friends with benefits lol while MC sits at home alone with his rod in his hand, with possibly a tease or two from Ashley. It was more interesting when it was strangers at a bar. Could have other types of variety like a stranger grope at a cinema or something else.

I would hero but honestly I do want to support the dev for the quicker updates and the progress he's doing so I'll hold off for now :)
 
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New update was nice. A bit more focus on the other girls which I appreciate (actually my favorite part of the game weirdly enough). A large part of the content is related to Nathan and Oliver (and a bit of both in the same time). Also a special surprise at the end which I enjoyed lol. It would be nice to have a bigger focus on the MC getting shared as well for variety as I sort of lost interest in Nathan or other named male characters. It became less of a exploration and new experiences, and more GF making a collection of friends with benefits lol while MC sits at home alone with his rod in his hand, with possibly a tease or two from Ashley. It was more interesting when it was strangers at a bar. Could have other types of variety like a stranger grope at a cinema or something else.

I would hero this time but honestly I do want to support the dev for the quicker updates and the progress he's doing so I'll hold off for now :)
Then maybe tomorrow you can be a hero;);)
 

Lomumai

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New update was nice. A bit more focus on the other girls which I appreciate (actually my favorite part of the game weirdly enough). A large part of the content is related to Nathan and Oliver (and a bit of both in the same time). Also a special surprise at the end which I enjoyed lol. It would be nice to have a bigger focus on the MC getting shared as well for variety as I sort of lost interest in Nathan or other named male characters. It became less of a exploration and new experiences, and more GF making a collection of friends with benefits lol while MC sits at home alone with his rod in his hand, with possibly a tease or two from Ashley. It was more interesting when it was strangers at a bar. Could have other types of variety like a stranger grope at a cinema or something else.

I would hero but honestly I do want to support the dev for the quicker updates and the progress he's doing so I'll hold off for now :)
Does anyone cum inside Laura?
 

NightWolF16

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Does anyone cum inside Laura?
It took me a minute to realize who you were talking about cause I changed her name lol. Not yet, although it's teased, I don't know if it happened in an earlier path (if there was one) and I chose not to though.
 
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NightWolF16

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I did. Thanks for your feedback. The focus on MC and other girls will increase now that I've opened some doors. ;)
Thank you for the consideration I appreciate that. I look forward to it :) Also loved the surprise at the end! I'm sure others will too ^^
 

Le Stag

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I have a suggestion; how bout making oliver optional for those in the submissive route, and then if in a dominant route, you can make her fuck a filthy old fat man, she doesn't really wanted to fuck but ends up getting turned on anyway when she's with him alone and about to do it.
Oliver is optional for all the routes. ;)

I'll avoid the "filthy old man" trope. Especially if Laura "doesn't want it". I don't want any content that makes her do something she doesn't want, it goes the opposite way to what I want for the relationship.
 

Pablo.cinco

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Oliver is optional for all the routes. ;)

I'll avoid the "filthy old man" trope. Especially if Laura "doesn't want it". I don't want any content that makes her do something she doesn't want, it goes the opposite way to what I want for the relationship.
Okay, thank you! That's a really fast reply
 

flies12

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I'll have a 0.11.1 today correcting the few issues I've seen. ;)

Thanks a lot for your feedback. You're not the only one having a few reservations concerning specific elements. I'll have to think about these, and potentially change some things. :)
I think including Nathan in the last chapter makes a lot of sense. It allows us, the player, to see more of the aftermath of these sharing episodes. Usually they end and we are told there's some reclaiming and we never see it, we got to this time and that's a good thing. Show, don't tell and all that. I think Nathan might have been the wrong character to use for that though.

Tara already has the same sort of fetish as the player character and might slot in a bit easier. She's into it already and it would potentially be a space for her to grow and make her own preferences known and have Laura and the MC's reclaiming act on those to an extent. Including her more would allow for you to show that missing perspective in a more natural way. For example, maybe you report to her in the same way Laura reports to you? The choices in this case would be what sort of actions you took with Laura. Did you do doggy or cowgirl? Cum on her face? This is also the sort of thing you could do if the MC ever hooks up with Ashley, reporting back in this way to Laura.

Like I said, I think you recognized a space where the game wasn't doing quite as well as it could and attempted to address it with both this and the live scene. It's just that they didn't quite work out as well as the rest of the game does.

A replacement for the live scene thing could well be something like those snapchat stories you see sometimes, where you see a short clip and a caption. Maybe a bit more from the guy telling you about what's going on and narrating, then Laura doing her report and having a bit of a gap between their reactions to account for perspective. Essentially the guy telling the story from his perspective as he does it, teasing you the whole time with how good he is, and then Laura telling from her own perspective, maybe he's not as good or maybe he's better than he realizes.
 
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