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Silwith
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Le Stag Now that I replaying I thought about something. Specifically how loosing the Condom plays out, it is pretty nice in the moment, the MC can either be first or he can let Nathan be first or even let Nathan go raw while he himself continues to use a condom. Dunno about others, but for me it makes for some pretty good immerrsion into the story, without having to do actual paths/extra scenes.
So far it seems that never comes up again? Because I think it would be great for some long term immersive feeling to bring it up, especially if the choice taken is the latter by a sub/very sub player. It makes for some easy extra sub/very sub dialogue, be it from Laura or Nathan (Or Ashley... or Oliver later if he gets to know the MC uses a condom) teasing the MC about it.
That may just be the one that stuck out to me, the most obvious one, but generally dialogue referring back to small choices made would be good in deepening it a bit I think, maybe you wanna take it into account
So far it seems that never comes up again? Because I think it would be great for some long term immersive feeling to bring it up, especially if the choice taken is the latter by a sub/very sub player. It makes for some easy extra sub/very sub dialogue, be it from Laura or Nathan (Or Ashley... or Oliver later if he gets to know the MC uses a condom) teasing the MC about it.
That may just be the one that stuck out to me, the most obvious one, but generally dialogue referring back to small choices made would be good in deepening it a bit I think, maybe you wanna take it into account
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Has anyone ever "100%" the game before next update? Feels really time consuming and I'm still missing 40 pictures
hlfwaycrks
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It's really interesting to me that you mention this, as I've been writing narratives in the fan art thread (this is just my first one, working on the second right now-stay tuned) from Laura's perspective with a submissive Laura and a dominant MC, and I have found writing from Laura's perspective, with her being more submissive, flows very nicely since I can map on what I would want submissive Laura to do. Stuff like this really intrigues me, the differences in perspectives from one person to another, especially when we share the same proclivity. I will keep my fingers crossed for the very dom path, and hey, if you ever want suggestions/input/whatever, I'd be happy to help
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Well, that actually makes a lot of sense now...
Having played through the dom, sub, and very sub routes, I’ve got to say, the dom route doesn't quite hit the same way as the other two. It feels a bit plain in comparison, almost like it’s missing that extra spark. Sometimes, I even catch myself thinking Laura’s messaging in the dom route leans more towards the sub route side.
I know Le Stag already said he's rewriting this last chapter, and I think that's a good call. Nathan has some nice good-guy dom vibes. Like cozy ntr for mild subs. The dirty talk when it's going on, but then the "hey man, I'm doing that because you and your girl are into it, we're cool, right?" after. Having Oli as the 'hard' option and Nathan as the gentler option works really well. That could even play well in a threesome, maybe with the MC having the prompt to decide if Nathan's influence wins out and tells Oli to "calm down, dude" or having Oli win out and Nathan goes harder "Oh okay, if that's what you're in to..."
Having Nathan as a co-cuck is a huge shift and feels weird, but I think the concept could actually work by introducing a new character. A weak, wimpy coworker who's always lusted after Laura at work? Someone the MC can let Laura tease and deny, either to satisfy Laura dom tendencies for a sub MC, or an MC dom fetish.
Still hoping the Ashley path leads to the MC sending some humiliating photos to her. Him after cumming on himself. She can send pictures of her with a hung hookup, and demand he shows how he measures up. Laura could fill that role too, but it seems like more of a shift in that relationship.
Having Nathan as a co-cuck is a huge shift and feels weird, but I think the concept could actually work by introducing a new character. A weak, wimpy coworker who's always lusted after Laura at work? Someone the MC can let Laura tease and deny, either to satisfy Laura dom tendencies for a sub MC, or an MC dom fetish.
Still hoping the Ashley path leads to the MC sending some humiliating photos to her. Him after cumming on himself. She can send pictures of her with a hung hookup, and demand he shows how he measures up. Laura could fill that role too, but it seems like more of a shift in that relationship.
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I don't mind there being a "hard" option for a bull, I just dislike the way Oliver was introduced I guess. As a one-off "meet at a bar and fuck" it's fine. Him being a permanent fixture feels "unearned" though. Like nothing established him as a badass or anything. Just made eye contact with a girl looking to fuck and it turned him into a dom asshole somehow. It is what it is though. Can't really take that whole part back. Then the soft backpedal with the "no he's a nice guy, he just acts like an asshole" doesn't help.
Can't please everyone though. A lot of players like him.
Can't please everyone though. A lot of players like him.
You voiced my issue and i think i had a hard time putting it to words.
He COULD have worked. But an asshole bull needs to know when to be an ass and when not to be IMO. this guy is just a giant dickhead
i don't know if i like her including nathan in our game. it makes it feel like he partially owns her also. f that.
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It has a lot to do with the little things, Like Laura is still almost 100% in the drivers seat. Most topics are broached by her, she picks her bulls, and picks when where, and sometimes she lets you pick what she wears or does. You have very little actual say in anything she does which is fine for sub but the Dom needs a bit of a rewrite to make the MC be the one to make some of the choices she makes. It needs to have some things become his ideas that he expressed his desire to see her do, and she then follows his requests or commands eagerly.
That does bother me a bit too, the "he's nice for real, it's all an act" Laura tries to tell us. We have nothing to go on, Laura has never said he was nice at any point and all of her interactions with him have been heavily sex focused, so when could have possibly shown her this "nice" side? So what she she chatted him up a little at the bar? Then when she took him into the bathroom and he went all SuperDom on her and never looked back, when has been a nice guy? It just kind of feels like she wants to keep fucking him and is trying to placate the MC to me, or she is defending him because she's too nice or some other reason. IDK it feels off. With Nathan he was chill and clear when he was acting it up. Oliver is no chill all asshole all the time.
Of course he's super popular, the majority of the fans also love the Very Sub route, they will eat up anything that abuses the MC. They love him being an asshole to the MC, and controlling towards Laura. They would have him replace Nathan if they could.
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Year 2027...
The eternally hopeful Doms read Laura's texts about slurping up a 9th long term boyfriend at the biker bar while she decides if she's in the right mental space to let her whore best friend send a fourth titty pic.
The eternally hopeful Doms read Laura's texts about slurping up a 9th long term boyfriend at the biker bar while she decides if she's in the right mental space to let her whore best friend send a fourth titty pic.
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Hello everyone! Busy month on my side, just passing by for a few things.
Version 0.13 (not the next one, but the one after that) will aim to work/reword on a few things, including the Dominant route, and add a Very Dominant one. This version will have less new content to let me work on these additions, Very Dominant route being probably a bit of work, considering that, because of its nature, it requires more alternative content than other routes.
Between 0.12 and 0.13, I will also have a lot of polls on the Patreon aiming to get opinions on recurring feedback. Things like the bulls talking to MC, the pace of the story, the amount of blowjobs, the amount of photoshoots, etc...
The idea being to get a good view on how to steer the story going forward, as some elements seem to be a bit divisive.
Version 0.13 (not the next one, but the one after that) will aim to work/reword on a few things, including the Dominant route, and add a Very Dominant one. This version will have less new content to let me work on these additions, Very Dominant route being probably a bit of work, considering that, because of its nature, it requires more alternative content than other routes.
Between 0.12 and 0.13, I will also have a lot of polls on the Patreon aiming to get opinions on recurring feedback. Things like the bulls talking to MC, the pace of the story, the amount of blowjobs, the amount of photoshoots, etc...
The idea being to get a good view on how to steer the story going forward, as some elements seem to be a bit divisive.
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You've mentioned a couple times you're pretty much playing it by ear and don't really have a long-term plan. I would highly, highly recommend making one, even if you don't end up following it. At least an ending point, something to build up to and conclude the story. Yes, there's the concerns about the design-by-committee effect the current approach can have (i.e., the people more interested in standard NTR fare being very vocal), but honestly for me it's more that the 'exciting' parts are becoming kinda dull.
I mean, the peak of 'dom' for me is still Laura asking permission to fuck Nathan the very first time. Even if the 'yes' is forced, it still feels like the most exciting use of 'dominance' the game has yet. And that was, uh, quite a while ago.
I think some kind of long-term vision may help with this, even if it's bare bones.
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Yeah, that would probably be a good idea.
Good news though is that, after looking at Analytics, I may have identifies the source of Android issues. A specific script, coming from the asset I'm using for UI, could be causing memory issues. I'm in the process of replacing it. Hoping it corrects these issues for good...
Good news though is that, after looking at Analytics, I may have identifies the source of Android issues. A specific script, coming from the asset I'm using for UI, could be causing memory issues. I'm in the process of replacing it. Hoping it corrects these issues for good...
I think someone said that but what i really want to see in future updates is pictures from different angles than we are used to and maybe more expression from Laura
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The POV angle will soon become monotonous. Maybe Laura or her partner could install cameras in the room at different angles?
Played through this game 4 times, still missing about 20 pictures.
Anyone has a save game or is there a way to edit the game just to unlock all the pictures in the gallery?
Anyone has a save game or is there a way to edit the game just to unlock all the pictures in the gallery?
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Just be sure to have your own vision and as already said, maybe at least a rough plan. And always remember that the customer doesn't actually always know what they want... people are often clear about small things (like my wish to have earlier choices, like those about the condom, play into later conversations to tie things a bit together), but not so much about the big stuff, I bet there are more then a few people that think they don't like the texts with the bulls for example (or the other side, with the girls), without realising that taking those away really narrows things down, giving the game less options for variety. We have seen a number of games over time that were sucessfull, then changed things like the users wanted and gloriously... crashed...
Few things that I'm a BIG fan of and I hope the dev includes more as time goes on:
- Asking who gets to see the picture. MC or the other guy. Then the MC getting like the tiniest hint of what it could have been or maybe a censored or blurred version so he cant fully enjoy it. Absolute gold.
- Following up with that first point, (in the future) Laura sending exclusive pics to the other guys and the other guys teasing MC with hints or censored versions of it randomly.
- I love the constant reminders that Laura still uses condoms with MC but raw with the others. The random texts you get where you see Laura just got fucked or blew someone is amazing. More of those random events please!
- I like how Laura gets "meaner" slowly over time when you choose the very submissive route. It's all love and I hope this keep going. I know dev will refocus on the very dom route next few updates but just wanted to put this out there.