wolfund
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- Aug 22, 2017
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I'd actually agree with that part. The build up was really nice, but the scene itself fell fairly flat and did not have LeStag usual goodness, like everything around the scenes was the usual good but took so much places that it seems like it pushed aside LeStag writing of the scene itself into the last minute effort. I was a bit disapointed by it overall but now I'm hoping for plain better scenes after this one to compensate.I like the game and I'm not trying to complain about the paths and the story you're telling. I feel like there's a lot of "you didn't satisfy my very specific ntr kink" type comments. That's not my complaint. More just; for all the build-up the scene itself felt a little flat to me.
I don't know if I'm explaining myself well, but overall my mind went a bit "uh, that's it?" at Nathan finally creamping Laura, like it came and gone in a flash with unlike the usual novella worth of details x)
edit: I liked the update, just not that particular part that felt too flat for me.
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