Le Stag
I usually keep a low profile on these forums for obvious reasons, but I feel compelled to speak up this time.
First off, great job on the game. I can clearly see the effort you’ve put into it, and you’ve done an excellent job building expectations and delivering on them, especially with Tara. She’s not even a main character, yet everyone seems to love her more than Laura. That takes real storytelling skill.
That said, because of those expectations, I have to admit that Chapter 0.25 was disappointing. I was hoping for more development with Tara.
I was so frustrated that I even considered extracting all the images from the asset files and posting them here as a form of protest.
But then I saw the drama unfolding with the crack and the usual chaos from the porn addicts, and now I’d rather deny them the post than punish you.
So instead, here’s a plot suggestion for the earlier chapters: Laura dies in a tragic but necessary accident, and the MC gradually grows closer to Tara, thanks to Ashley’s influence.
If you go in that direction, I might even consider subscribing to your Patreon for a month.
