The interludes are random are they not? Its hard to stick the continuity landing when random events can happen here and there.Le Stag I got an interlude from Oliver before having the discussion with Laura if she should visit Oliver again. That seems incorrect continuity-wise, no?
The interludes must have some restrictions around them. Some only happen after certain chapters, for example. That one probably shouldn't happen until after Ch26. And then assuming there will be more interludes from Oliver, they should probably check if the player chose "no more Oliver". Same if later bulls are optional.The interludes are random are they not? Its hard to stick the continuity landing when random events can happen here and there.
True, there may be restrictions to when one appears. like ones with Oliver cant go into the pool until Oliver is met or if Oliver is declined they are removed from the pool - but in terms of just picking a scene at random from a pool of events as I said you are bound to get certain continuity errors.The interludes must have some restrictions around them. They ge
The interludes must have some restrictions around them. Some only happen after certain chapters, for example. That one probably shouldn't happen until after Ch26. And then assuming there will be more interludes from Oliver, they should probably check if the player chose "no more Oliver". Same if later bulls are optional.
It already checks if you removed Oliver. But then again, it's also supposed to check you're after Chapter 26, but it doesn't work. And only Oliver ones have this issue. I probably fucked up somewhere.The interludes must have some restrictions around them. Some only happen after certain chapters, for example. That one probably shouldn't happen until after Ch26. And then assuming there will be more interludes from Oliver, they should probably check if the player chose "no more Oliver". Same if later bulls are optional.
Thankfully, I had planned interludes with the option to have it removed in mind. So I've got about 15 different lists, each one with conditions, including where you are in the story.True, there may be restrictions to when one appears. like ones with Oliver cant go into the pool until Oliver is met or if Oliver is declined they are removed from the pool - but in terms of just picking a scene at random from a pool of events as I said you are bound to get certain continuity errors.
there would be ways around it of course and I can think of many ways to do it. how hard work that is to just pulling a scene from a collection I dont know.
Course they are going to be inconsistencies - though 15 lists, thats quite the commitment to trying to stop themI also try to write them as neutral to the story as they can be, in order to avoid incoherencies. I'm sure some will happen though...
Some of those things make AI image creation a lot harder. Not impossible, but harder. Tell the AI you want Laura fucking a fat guy and oops, you might get fat Laura instead. And tattoos and body mod stuff are notoriously inconsistent. Hard to get two images with the same tattoo in the same place.Will she have sex with other body types later on? Someone with tattoos, more muscles, more belly or penis? Nathan and Oliver look very similar.
No hate as long as you don't try to push it onto peopleI really enjoyed the ruined orgasm content, it would be interesting for the dev to put more of this type of 'denial' content. And another thing that people will probably hate me for saying is about chastity cage content, will that be in the game?
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Yeah, I don't see anything wrong with that either, as long as it's route-specific content. So it's free for the player to choose, it doesn't need to be mandatory lolNo hate as long as you don't try to push it onto peopleI would like that too, and stuff like that would be easy enough to implement for the sub/very-sub route, since it is mostly dialogue as we don't really much get pictures of the MC himself for obvious reasons
But dunno if Le Stag wants to do it![]()
I noted some nitpicky stuff that came to mind when I last played, but didn't want to muck up the thread with a list. Will have to loop through past posts and update my review at some point with more organized feedback. So much can be fixed on the Dom route with dialogue tweaks alone, but I'm not sure what changes are reasonable without leading to spaghetti code.I'll have to think on if I have any other suggestions, but these really hit the nail on the head.
Actually not too bad, the red bra one seems a lil weird, but other than that they are a good efforthttps://f95zone.to/threads/tomystyle.81342/post-15082623 Daz version of Laura.