but it can be a good way to make some time in case you run out of ideias or got stucked in a chapter
like a naruto filler
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You're probably reading it wrong then. Or it's the earlier chapters that are undergoing a rework.
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Tsk. Turian can't handle criticism. Typical... 
I am pretty sure things changed since the guide came out. Because I believe i have at least 2 pictures which are not in the guide at all. Also some of the action in the guide are no longer reflected. At least not in the chapters indicated in the guide. They are either earlier or much later.
That or my game decided to have a meltdown and play a puzzle game with me.
It did help me out though its just that to me if looks like it may need an update.
Also as mentioned some of my actions in the game do not get reflected at all. Also I just got jumped by a conversation regarding Mike's girlfriend out of nowhere. Something that is never mentioned before. But the discussion Laura has is as if she alraedy spoke about it and i already know of it......
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I will not add any form of "toilet play", for various reasons:
- The AI service I use forbids such content,
- Patreon forbids such content,
- I, personally, think it's absolutely disgusting.
- The AI service I use forbids such content,
- Patreon forbids such content,
- I, personally, think it's absolutely disgusting.
tbf it's still nts and yes, swinging phone will be a much better title
that's a flaw. Cuck path should've more humiliation. Or it ain't cuckery
Managed to finish the game....(in its current version)
While not really a fan of the genre i found the game to be fun overall a good game. Not sure if this counts as praise but among the ones out there this is for sure near the top.
Nice job!
Now for the criticism so to speak.
I feel that towards the later chapters the dialogue felt a bit too.....stereotipical(?). With the girlfriend talking/acting a bit too much like a cookie cutter(seen too many times) cock crazed slut with no regard for anything else. I means perhaps its just me but for quite some time it felt like the sharing was also voluntary and via consent(i do not mean that in a controling way) for the most part. Some of the blocking decissions in the later chapters are on ocassion missied. I do not say they should always be there but it would be nice to have them there sometimes as an option.
Also it felt like the relation and intimacy between them in the later chapters was also a bit too much copy paste or non existent sometimes. At least that is how it felt to me. In the last 10 or so chapters it seems like the story turns at times into a hardcuck/ntr story as opposed to a fun/enjoyable thing between the 2 main protagonists.
I mean for a good part of the game the entire thing is consensual and repectful and loving and warm. Towards the end its more like debauchery. Especially from the FMC which seems more and more crazed to get a cock, any cock as long as its big one and less of the somewhat wholesome and engaging dialogue we had for a good chunk of the game.
I believe this felling I got is something of a combination between the actions or lack of options for the MC + the MC/FMC dialogues and actions/interactions. It feels at times like the dialogue is a bit too copy paste and raunchy when it should not be, the actions of the fmc as said above are more aking to a cock crazed slut and less of a gf involved in a specific relationship.
I mean I get that they both want to explore new things but it somehow started feeling less wholesome and enjoyable so to speak towards the end and giving off the feeling the fmc is 1 hour away from breaking into a male prison to get all the cock she wants....
To this i say perhaps revisit a bit of the dialogue and some of the scenes/actions? I do not mean to remove them per se but perhaps adjust the daily activities and dialogue and some of the actions/options?
Again this is mostly towards the end of the game. And it has more to do with the FMC. Hell even the best friend seems(is not) more tame and same by comparison.
Also I love what you did with Tara! She is just so cute and warm and wholesome. Is she lewd? Yes! But is still adorable? Also yes!
As it stands from me the game so far gets a 6.5-7/10(There are just 2 of these games i played that got 9/10) with most of the good ones getting an 8/10. I do not remember giving a 10/10 for such a game ever.(Well not that my rating maters but i just wanted to express in a numerical way the way i percieve the game.)
So all in all a nice-good game. It is fun for the most part, it is engaging(you always want to see what is around the corner, just dont expect to always enjoy what is around the corner, you will thoug 90% of the time) and stimulating and manages to put a smile on your face and even get out a laugh out of you more than once. (I really liked some of the banter and movie/game refferences)
Edit: I know i repeated myself several times but i felt strongly about conveing what i felt the game could do better or perhaps got wrong.
While not really a fan of the genre i found the game to be fun overall a good game. Not sure if this counts as praise but among the ones out there this is for sure near the top.
Nice job!
Now for the criticism so to speak.
I feel that towards the later chapters the dialogue felt a bit too.....stereotipical(?). With the girlfriend talking/acting a bit too much like a cookie cutter(seen too many times) cock crazed slut with no regard for anything else. I means perhaps its just me but for quite some time it felt like the sharing was also voluntary and via consent(i do not mean that in a controling way) for the most part. Some of the blocking decissions in the later chapters are on ocassion missied. I do not say they should always be there but it would be nice to have them there sometimes as an option.
Also it felt like the relation and intimacy between them in the later chapters was also a bit too much copy paste or non existent sometimes. At least that is how it felt to me. In the last 10 or so chapters it seems like the story turns at times into a hardcuck/ntr story as opposed to a fun/enjoyable thing between the 2 main protagonists.
I mean for a good part of the game the entire thing is consensual and repectful and loving and warm. Towards the end its more like debauchery. Especially from the FMC which seems more and more crazed to get a cock, any cock as long as its big one and less of the somewhat wholesome and engaging dialogue we had for a good chunk of the game.
I believe this felling I got is something of a combination between the actions or lack of options for the MC + the MC/FMC dialogues and actions/interactions. It feels at times like the dialogue is a bit too copy paste and raunchy when it should not be, the actions of the fmc as said above are more aking to a cock crazed slut and less of a gf involved in a specific relationship.
I mean I get that they both want to explore new things but it somehow started feeling less wholesome and enjoyable so to speak towards the end and giving off the feeling the fmc is 1 hour away from breaking into a male prison to get all the cock she wants....
To this i say perhaps revisit a bit of the dialogue and some of the scenes/actions? I do not mean to remove them per se but perhaps adjust the daily activities and dialogue and some of the actions/options?
Again this is mostly towards the end of the game. And it has more to do with the FMC. Hell even the best friend seems(is not) more tame and same by comparison.
Also I love what you did with Tara! She is just so cute and warm and wholesome. Is she lewd? Yes! But is still adorable? Also yes!
As it stands from me the game so far gets a 6.5-7/10(There are just 2 of these games i played that got 9/10) with most of the good ones getting an 8/10. I do not remember giving a 10/10 for such a game ever.(Well not that my rating maters but i just wanted to express in a numerical way the way i percieve the game.)
So all in all a nice-good game. It is fun for the most part, it is engaging(you always want to see what is around the corner, just dont expect to always enjoy what is around the corner, you will thoug 90% of the time) and stimulating and manages to put a smile on your face and even get out a laugh out of you more than once. (I really liked some of the banter and movie/game refferences)
Edit: I know i repeated myself several times but i felt strongly about conveing what i felt the game could do better or perhaps got wrong.
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I prefer not just teasing.. I prefer the proper corruption like Laura or Ashley
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So do I. I was so glad when Tara mentioned she started picking up one-night stands at the bar. I was thinking "Yeah, you go, gurl!"
Still hoping we'll get a MMF threesome with Tara and MC (a man can dream...)
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She was picking up chicks though (pretty sure). If anything wed see a MFF 3way. The mc is kinda the only dude she really tolerates
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Yeah, I know. The two parts of my post are essentially independent from each other. I support Tara picking up whomever. I just want that gorgeous woman to have naughty fun and be happy about it.
MMF is simply preference of mine. I am sure we could incorporate Nathan in there. Tara trusts MC. MC and Laura invite her to watch/join them (Laura teases about that in the latest version). Tara gets intimate with MC. Feelsgoodman. Tara wonders about MC's kink — would he like to see her with someone else? Maybe she actually insists that MC be there. And Nathan is an obvious choice, since MC regularly shares Laura with him and neither had any complaints.
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I wouldnt hate that but i kinda like that tara is the pure one of the group. I dont actually want her to corrupt too much. Leaves room for contrast vs the slut ashley and laura who i still love as a fmc but is ending up a bigger slut then ash haha.
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Oh, she absolutely doesn't need to be on the same level. I don't want that either. More like "I tried it, it was nice and fun. I really enjoyed it. Doesn't mean I am gonna do it all the time"
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Ash relinquishing her crown to Laura is the secret ending.
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Thats fair. Id kinda like to see tara and mc link up with sophia for a 3way. Sophia needs a return.
Yessss, bow before your new thot queen haha