VN Ren'Py New Coral City [S2 v0.4] [HoneyGames]

[P4cc3r5]

I have a little bit of crazy feedback for the Developer...

I just nabbed 1.3.1 when it got posted here and I found a few oddities...

At story marker of roughly 0.7 it starts prompting you with a full stop to save your game, and I believe it was at or just after that point the script's spelling/grammar has a major dip in quality and massive spike in typos.

From 0.7 onward the dev uses the "save your game" between versions as at some point someone was doing the grammar check for him. User Gunizz recently posted some grammar checks for older versions (https://f95zone.to/threads/new-coral-city-v1-31-honeygames.28118/page-172#post-4081219) which have been passed on and I did the check for 1.3 for him. There may be more grammar/typo errors still around but most are now known about.

 

[P4cc3r5]

P4cc3r5

I definitely had to pull out the adderall for the mod I'm working on now! I'm up to day 30 and it's hard to mentally keep track of everything hahaha.

You have to focus on just a few (preferably connected) girls at a time.

For example, for Keesha staying close to Meadow/Rebecca helps your cause as foes showing an interest in bonking Catherine/Regina. The weirdest one is telling her that Patricia turns you on seems to turn her on ($ keeshafuck += 10). The "fuck" part doesn't happen yet but this must help your prospects.

It's a similar story with Rebecca if you just want to bonk her ($ rebeccafuck +=), getting a BJ from Rain helps (but don't mention porn), as does a BJ from Michelle, a threesome with Luana/Yanmei and giving her weed and a dildo.

 

[noobling]

Probally someone already ask that but... are the ntr content avoidable?

there aren't actually that many girls that you can date exclusively so far in the game and none of them have NTR content as far as I'm aware if you can keep the relationship going, most of the other girls in the game have sex with other people and those you break up with can have sex with other people but they aren't with you then, so depends on your definition of NTR i guess, it's definitely not possible to hoard every single girl for yourself

 

[harloch74]

thank you for uploading

 

[HoneyGames]

Done playing and i must say i had a complete blast once i understood the context to play the game. The massive scale the dev has aimed in terms of freedom when it comes to relationships is just.... incredible and so so complex. I honestly didn't think anyone except a huge studio production could get this straight as this game has done so far. Great job there's no denying once finished this one is going to be a huge achievement in the adult gaming world.

To contrast with the praises from above, I have 2 points that are still slightly disturbing me.

Firstly my biggest issue : although the game provide so much dialogues options, I felt way too many times cornered into making decisions resulting into binary outcomes, which either would push me into abusing/manipulating/cheating/straight forward romancing a character (being a D*ck or a pusher path and get their content) or otherwise choose the other option which led to negative or no relations points at all and loosing the character interest/sympathy/content.
This drastically reduce the realism of the situations for me since i wish there would be more middle ground options that would allow me to keep these characters close/friendly to me and with maybe later on still a way to win/block them back once the story has progressed and i'm able to make up my mind on what i'm willing to do with them. It's very confusing at first because if you haven't played the prequel then you're not emotionaly connected yet to them and you're just kinda thrown in the middle of this storm of a casting that keeps growing on. It's a little deception to me since along the way i grew quite emotionaly fond of some of them and their background/attitude.
Along playing the story, I could really immerse myself into the life of this photographer bearing this heavy past and his new role in the business. Finding myself in his shoes, I was aiming more at pleasing his new coworkers and the people who lift him up from the sh*tty past he threw himself into, trying to maintain a thin balance while having the max fun i could harness along the way.

This bring us to my second deception, which is a very small one but still can't get pass over it. After the fashion show, when you're at the club you're suddenly forced into making one of three choices when it comes to who you spend the night with (Luana Vs Belen Vs sleep alone). The consequences of this decision were so anticlimatic to me that I realised i completely felt for the writting behind those characters, probably got so much hyped or throw too much projections on what i expected them to become in the future of the story. At this point, i wanted to be the exclusive f*ck friend for luana and still have my way with Belen, I projected the first as my futur business head partner and best friend and the second as a f*ck friend as all the other big top models have been to me until now. So when i saw the consequences in terms of relationship points of choosing one over the other... i felt like I hit an invisible wall that the game had never pushed on me until this point. Was the best option to go to sleep and get cuckhold by both of them while getting a nap?
I know it's just probably a very personnal issue because the situation completely messed with my projection/plans for the story but i wish the both of them would not be at the same place at the same time sharing this proposition with the mc (because if he choose one of them, it feels like throwing the other one under an emotional bus (reflected by the hit their relationship points take). We know they have a personnal beef/competition why then act rude and add to the fire? Considering his profession he is supposed to know by now how to manoeuvre models to keep a cool atmosphere and being able to do his job which massively depends on maintaining good relations with them. I don't know, it felt to me like a forced-closing path to something that should had led to more fun or developments and completely unecessary considering the sh*t storm the MC is already in (arrivist competition at the magazine and blackmailed by both ways). Each time i play to this point i dream about not having to make this choice. Which means a lot in terms of how immersed i became into the story.
I'm really not against drama, just not the invisble type of drama reflected only by the loss of relation points and its indirect consequences, it makes this path looking a little cheap in comparaison to the rest of the others.

Except from those criticisms, I think the game is freaky amazing and I can't wait to see the final version of this baby. Great job from the devs and thanks to them for providing us with such upscale content. I'll definitely be a buyer the day it gets out.

Sorry for the engrish, tried to keep it under control, probably failed though xD

Thank you for this feedback. I'm very happy that the game is addictive (it takes a while to involve but the evolution of the plots is slow because the scenarios have time to grow and consolidate).
I understand very well your doubts about certain limits of the game, but as you said: to manage this complexity of characters and paths you would need a team of people working on the game, I am alone and I have a couple of helpers regarding GUI, bug fixing and grammar check.
So at a certain point some choices have to be forced because creating middle ways would imply a really unsustainable work (think that the characters are often related to each other, so, sometimes, I have to write the same dialogue in many different ways to make it consistent with the things that happened in other storylines... and it's a really big mess because I have to recall so much different variables everytime).
About Belen/ Luana. I have noticed that many people have been worried about that part of the game.
I guarantee that nothing irreparable happens.
With Luana I didn't foresee a girlfriend path but only a fuck buddy path. And she, as you have seen, will still sleep with other guys, it is in her nature. So even if you fuck with Belen you can still fuck with Luana in the future.
If you fuck with Luana you might miss Belen's interesting path... I don't want to spoiler you...

 

[EKOMEKO]

Hello friends. Is there a sex scene with Tatianna? I wonder. Rebecca, Elsa interesting characters. Keesha, I did the oral sex scene. Is there a sex scene? Will it be in future updates?

 

[P4cc3r5]

Hello friends. Is there a sex scene with Tatianna? I wonder. Rebecca, Elsa interesting characters. Keesha, I did the oral sex scene. Is there a sex scene? Will it be in future updates?

No sex with any of those currently but the dev has said that you will be able to have sex with every girl in the game at some point before NCC ends - as long as you're on the right path and make the right decisions.

 

[Rickster82]

Hello friends. Is there a sex scene with Tatianna? I wonder. Rebecca, Elsa interesting characters. Keesha, I did the oral sex scene. Is there a sex scene? Will it be in future updates?

Until now no sex scene with Tatianna, Rebecca, Elsa, Adele, Riley or Keesha (just BJ).

 

[Tikki]

Until now no sex scene with Tatianna, Rebecca, Elsa, Adele, Riley or Keesha (just BJ).

And not only with them. This list can be continued further

 

[Rickster82]

And not only with them. This list can be continued further

The next thing I would love to see is sex with Rain (without a porn career).

 

[P4cc3r5]

Those you can currently have sex with: Ashley, Belen, Catherine, Cecile, Kirsten, Harley, Luana, Martina, Meadow, Melissa, Michelle, Roberta, Yanmei, Yvette & Zoe

Via porn career: Guenda, Hanna and Pinky

Update: Damn - forgot Madelyne (from below)

 

[ThunderRob]

Melissa,Michelle,Roberta,Meadow,Yanmei,Ashley,Yvette,Harley,Belen,Luana,Pinky(in a threesome)Martina,Valentina(3way BJ on Beach with Harley)Catherine,Madelyne,Zoe,Keesha(BJ)Luana,Kristin(various fem-dom-cuck stuffs)Guenda(porn scene) and i think Hanna porn scene..forget...was 865 playthroughs ago Katana(drugged passing out HJ) and i think it's Cecile(fashion week friend of Andrea's sexes ya to get a modelling job) are the current sexables in one way or another...the ones i see relationship stats for are Yvette,Ashley,Roberta,Yanmei,Michelle,Zoe..HG said Luana is just a fuckbuddy nothing more so she's removed from my list..i think they all stay loyal to your MC if you pay them proper attention and do not fuck them over...maybe Meadow is relationship too..but she's also loose as Kardashian so meh..pity though cause her storyline is among the more fun ones.

 

[jamwor88]

how to you get to fuck tatianna or rebecca?

 

[ThunderRob]

you set the groundwork for fucking them in future updates through chosing right...dont ask..noone really knows BUT..i've unren'd and seen the sex with Tatianna scenes an it involves swapping..SO...not a route for me ...the images just are not implemented yet is all...lol
at least i think it was....Ashley and Tatianna Conner and am sure MC all in a sweaty WTFery.

 

[P4cc3r5]

Melissa,Michelle,Roberta,Meadow,Yanmei,Ashley,Yvette,Harley,Belen,Luana,Pinky(in a threesome)Martina,Valentina(3way BJ on Beach with Harley)Catherine,Madelyne,Zoe,Keesha(BJ)Luana,Kristin(various fem-dom-cuck stuffs)Guenda(porn scene) and i think Hanna porn scene..forget...was 865 playthroughs ago Katana(drugged passing out HJ) and i think it's Mikaela(fashion week friend of Andrea's sexes ya to get a modelling job) are the current sexables in one way or another...the ones i see relationship stats for are Yvette,Ashley,Roberta,Yanmei,Michelle,Zoe..HG said Luana is just a fuckbuddy nothing more so she's removed from my list..i think they all stay loyal to your MC if you pay them proper attention and do not fuck them over...maybe Meadow is relationship too..but she's also loose as Kardashian so meh..pity though cause her storyline is among the more fun ones.

For your Mikaela (Patricia's partner & McGraw (Elita owner's) daughter) substitute Cecile (wannabe fashion model at San Matthews and Andrea's friend).

 

[gsbm]

He's a fucking rat and deserves kick in the nuts! He's possing, like a bro, to MC, but through a game he's shown making low moves towards girls, MC like!

Dont like that douche either and I got a feeling he will end up banging kirsten, seems like the kind of revenge thing both would do for the rebecca video.

 

[ThunderRob]

Moving out of your home and getting TF away from scumbag David would go far to making the journey more pleasant....he sure TF aint no Liam

 

[S m ; ) e]

I don't know what you mean about "changes concerning values or requirements" but I started my list with the 0.7 reboot and have been updating/tweaking it since to reflect the changing story & possibilities - without trying to give too much away.

Well, I thought about spoilering a bit more. I finished reading Day 42 but it is totally chaotic and I missed things.

For example I try to make some lists

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But as I said I only finished reading the files and have some work to do before posting.

 

[OVERLORD24]

does save from 0.9 work on new version

 

[kaziro]

im gone bashed probably but i search but didnt able find i wana check few thing so i wana cheat on caracter stats how can do that?